Need your Kind Critique

[dailyblossoms]

Hi Joel,
I find your writing very nice and consistent, I give you just a little tips to improve your work, in the first piece I notice ascenders and descenders loop to be a little too tiny, I think it's because those letters had to be taller, in both pieces you might want to open up a little bit the "e" loop.
If you look at it more carefully you can see there are spots where the letters seems a little more condensed than others, don't worry it will get better with more practice.
That said it's a very nice work, just keep going!

[joi]

yeah i got nuthin' in terms of critique...in terms of praise i can say OMG it's gorgeous wow!!!

[Joel]

thanks dailyblossoms and well noted. 

thanks joi