Your work really is beautiful Nickki! But since you posted for critique, I'm going to really be constructive.
So, this can be a matter of personal preference, but if you want to be true to the style, I would work on squaring off the tops of your letters like t's and a's and i's. This sounds really harsh but to me, this is the biggest give away between a beginner and someone with more advanced skill.
I like how you have done the light, flourished line on the d's but with this style, they go up just a bit too high. If you bring them down just a bit, they will really work well and add a nice touch.
This is super picky, but when you begin a word with an e, the initial stroke should bring the reader into the letter (left to right). Your starting line, pulls from the right and then into the word. In some instances, this can work very effectively. But here, it gives the reader just a slight pause.
I love that you are so dedicated to your practice. This is half of it right there. So over time, you will gain wonderful line confidence and your lettering will really take on a new look from that. It is already very nice so with just a little refinement, you are there!
