Looking good! I love your capital S as well!
Actually, I really like your little s's too and your r's. Quite lovely!
My only suggestion would be to smooth out the flourish on the d's and last b's. Rather than have the loop come down from a straight point, have it curve around like you did on the h's and somewhat on the first b. The rest of the lettering has such a nice rounded feel to it, the contrast with the sharpness of those flourishes is somewhat out of place. Also, watch the negative space in the oval of your a's. The second stroke is bumping into it a bit.
But overall, it looks great and has a really nice feel!