@Diane Bennett So sorry Diane. I believe I did write a reply but must have forgotten to press 'send'. I am sorry for missing that.
Your script is almost there but needs just a few minor adjustments.
- The loop of the 'f' has it's belly way too low. It should be widest around the 1st ascender line. This is quite like the descender of a 'y' being widest at the 1st descender. The difference is that it joins back below the waist line where a descender joins closer to the base line.
- The 's' needs more work. The upside down 'c' in the second one is a bit better but could be improved. Also, the exit hairline from the 's' should not move so far to the right along the baseline. Do you see it cramping up the 'k' in 'risk' and impaling the 't' in 'stork'?
- Take the exit hairline of the 'c' up in one stroke to where it needs to join. In the 'craze' it should have gone all the way up to the waist line. You can always come back to do the top part later.
- Are you stopping at the base line? The exit of the 'r's seem to run away a little bit - this is most likely due to the speed at which you turn at he base line. Stop there, lift your pen up a tiny bit and the draw the exit hairline.
Let's see another attempt at these words.
- Salman
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