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Title: Uppercase alphabet
Post by: Despoina on November 06, 2022, 03:26:42 PM

Hello everyone, I hope you are all doing well! Today, I wrote my first full uppercase alphabet. Every critique is more than welcome!  :-*

(the guidelines are from Logo's calligraphy website)

Title: Re: Uppercase alphabet
Post by: Erica McPhee on November 06, 2022, 07:59:47 PM

Well done! I have one suggestion to work on. You have achieved really nice hairlines and a good contrast with shades. Notice the entrance strokes - they tend to start with a shade versus a hairline on letters like B, F, P, Q, R. Try working on just that - starting the letter with a nice hairline, going into the shade, then carrying on the rest of the stroke. I think you will see a big difference in just this one change.  :-*