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Offline anam_t

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Practice work (names & lyrics) :)
« on: August 09, 2014, 03:48:20 PM »
Hey flourish-ites!

So I was just practicing today (for 6 hours :D) and I just thought of forming words and practice on tennis star's names (the top 4 men) and some names from my family and a short excerpt from a song.

The first one is supposed to be 'Rafael Nadal', but just ended up missing the 'e' :P

Will love any kind critiques for my work! :)

And ignore the length of the words, I have no idea why I did that! :/

« Last Edit: August 09, 2014, 03:56:12 PM by anam_t »

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Re: Practice work (names & lyrics) :)
« Reply #1 on: August 09, 2014, 06:32:48 PM »
This is great, especially the work done in black in. I love your r's. Your rhythm and spacing is great. Very pleasing.
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Re: Practice work (names & lyrics) :)
« Reply #2 on: August 11, 2014, 05:46:44 AM »
This is great, especially the work done in black in. I love your r's. Your rhythm and spacing is great. Very pleasing.

Thank you Starlee! :)

The r's are just a thing of my own, haven't reached that part in the book. Glad you liked them! :)
The work in green is in poster color gouache. I have a feeling that I bought the wrong gouache. But everything is so rare, and when you see they have something which I've seen calligraphers use a lot, you tend to just grab them and not research about it before buying them :P

But I really appreciate your comments! :)