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Title: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 12, 2016, 03:04:32 PM
We will start our study of Copperplate with the small letters i.e. the minuscules. I have divided the minuscules into four groups. The first three groups are based on strokes common to the group. The last group contains the letters that do not share a pattern with other letters - these are the misfits.

We will need some materials before we start. I always recommend using the best materials you can afford for practice. The time we spend practising is our most valuable asset. It does not make sense to waste a second of it fighting with uncooperative paper or ink that doesn’t flow well. Here is what I recommend:

Ink: I will start with ink because it determines the other materials to some degree. I know the following to work well:


Fountain pen inks contain surfactants which sometimes causes the ink to slide off the nib in an uncontrollable manner. The last two inks on my list are fountain pen inks but work well with pointed pens in my experience.

Please feel free to experiment with other inks but stay away from pigmented inks like Sumi or India. These can be made to work well with pointed pens but I don’t think it is worth the effort to fiddle with these inks when one is learning.

Paper: The paper you use should be smooth and should be able to take the ink you have chosen to work with. Higgins Eternal has a higher tendency to bleed than the other inks but it flows well. Some experimentation will be needed here.

Also, I recommend printing the guidelines on the paper you will be writing on. It makes a big difference over placing printed guidelines underneath the paper you are writing on. The paper you choose should be suitable for printing guidelines on the type of printer you have.

You can use paper with pre-printed lines on it e.g. Rhodia pads. Please maker sure the lines are at least 6mm apart though. On such papers you will only need the slant lines. We will be writing Copperplate at the traditional 55 degree angle from the baseline. You can either draw these on your paper or place a printed sheet with just the slant lines underneath.

Nib(s): We will be writing the minuscules at ¼ inch x-height i.e. letters without ascenders or descenders will be ¼ inch tall. We will need a nib that can handle writing at that size. I can recommend the following:


Various G nibs are very popular and often recommended for beginners because of their forgiving nature. These are excellent nibs but are a bit too stiff for writing at the size we will be practising with. By all means get some (my favourite is the Zebra G) to play with. You will definitely find a use for it outside of these lessons - or for practising Copperplate at a smaller size.

Holder(s): Oblique holders are usually recommended (but not absolutely necessary) for right handed people. I use one and do recommend it highly. However, you can write Copperplate with a straight holder if you want. You will need to turn the paper so that the slant lines are lined up with the direction of your holder shaft. The goal is to allow the nib to spread evenly on both sides of the shade on the downstrokes.

Left handed people, if they are underwriters, can use a regular oblique holder (like the one used by right handed people) and write with the paper turned clockwise between 40 and 60 degrees. It is difficult to draw the hairlines as upstrokes using a straight holder.

One of the advantages of an oblique holder is that it presents the nib at a shallow angle to the paper. This helps sharp nibs make smooth hairlines on the upstroke without catching on the paper. In my opinion, this is a big enough advantage to consider using one - even for left handed scribes.  Left handed oblique holders are available but I believe a regular one works better for left handed calligraphers.

Guidelines: As mentioned above, we will be using ¼ inch x-height. I have prepared the guidelines in 2 sizes, A4 and US Letter. Both are attached to this post as pdf files. Please download the appropriate one and print it out on the paper of your choosing.

The illustration shows how the guidelines are laid out. The traditional proportions for Copperplate are 3:2:3 i.e. the ascenders and descenders are 1.5 times the x-height. However, at the ¼ inch x-height we are using, the ascenders will be hard to draw at those proportions. We will be drawing our ascenders and descenders at 1 times the x-height. Some exceptions apply though and will be noted as we go along.

(https://theflourishforum.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fthesixapp.com%2Fsmk%2FCopperplateLessons%2FCopperplate-Guidelines-Explained.gif&hash=10f45acd12b69d0e2f90c8c0b5b7cbf9)

OK - enough about the preparation. Let's get started with some Copperplate.

Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1


(https://theflourishforum.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fthesixapp.com%2Fsmk%2FCopperplateLessons%2Fstructure-i.gif&hash=e9fd612adbdee1fe9e51a8b292a007a7)The first group of letters we will be working are based on the ‘i’ stroke i.e. the stroke that makes up the letter ‘i’.

The ‘i’ stroke starts at the waist line and goes down to the base line. The stroke is started at full shade (i.e. the full thickness of the letter) and drawn at this thickness down ⅔ rds of the way down. As the illustration shows, pressure is released in the last third while simultaneously moving the pen to the right. This causes the right tine of the nib to keep drawing a straight line down while the left tine closes down making an arc as the tines come together at the base line. This is where you stop. Pick up the pen off the page and put it back down to start the hairline stroke that will connect to the following letter if there is one.

The picking up of the pen ensures that the bottom of the shade comes to a point as well as avoids pulling excess ink into the hairline.

Here is the group of letters based on the ‘i’ stroke:

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i - Start with a hairline at the base line and go up to the middle of the x-height or slightly above - this is the entry hairline. Now place the pen at the waist line and apply pressure to the nib to spread the tines and pull down towards the base line. The stroke should be placed such that it meets the entry hairline halfway down the stroke. Gradually release the pressure on the nib two-thirds of the way down while moving the pen to the right bringing the stroke to a point on the base line directly below the right side of the stroke. This will cause the left side of the stroke to have a curved shape. Now lift the pen for a beat, put it back down and draw the hairline back up to the middle of the x-height, this is the exit hairline.

The dot is placed directly above the ‘i’, halfway between the waistline and the the 1st Ascender line. It is the same thickness at the letter - no more. You can go back and make the top of the starting stroke ‘square’ now. In time, you will learn to square the tops directly at the start of the stroke but there is no need to spend time on it at this time.

It is worth your while to practice this stroke until you can do it without thinking. The best way to do that is to use Mr. Geoff Ford’s method of practising in groups of 5. Here is how you do it:

Write the letter 5 times. Now stop and look at each letter you have drawn and place a tick mark against ones that are good. Now pick the best one and try to replicate or improve on it 5 more times. Repeat.

This process not only take the boredom out of the practice, it helps sharpen the eye in the process. Once you can see what a good letter is, making it well is just a short distance behind.

So when do you know when you have it? When you can consistently make 3-4 out good ones in a group of 5.

u - All that practice with the ‘i’ will come in use here. The ‘u’ is nothing more than two ‘i’s written next to each other i.e. the exit hairline of the first ‘i’, is the entry hairline of the second. All done.

w - The ‘w’ is just a ‘u’ with the exit stroke drawn all the way up to the waist line. The ‘blob’ in the end comes ⅓ of the way down and back up to the waistline, or the following letter if there is one. You can draw the blob without any pressure on the nib and then fill it in - or you can make it one go if you feel like it. Please note that the hairline stroke becomes pretty much parallel to the main stroke as it reaches the waistline - it does not curve back into the letter.

t - Now things are getting interesting. The ‘t’ is drawn like an ‘i’ that starts halfway between the waistline and the 1st Ascender line and goes down to the baseline. The tapering at the bottom is the last third of the ‘i’ part of the letter so if you cover the tops, the bottoms of the ‘t’ and the ‘i’ would look the same. The crossbar is drawn halfway between the top of the letter and the waistline.

l - This is beginning to feel like cheating now. The ‘l’ is just and ‘i’ that starts at the 1st Ascender line and goes all the way down to the baseline. As with the ‘t’, the tapering at the bottom should match that of an ‘i’.

b - The ‘b’ is an ‘l’ that is finished like a ‘w’ i.e. the exit stroke it taken all the way to the waist line and then the blob is drawn.

j - Things were getting a bit repetitive with the ‘i’ stroke so we will play with something a little different. The ‘j’ is not strictly based on the ‘i’ stroke but it begins like one. It is used in a few other letters so practising it with the first group will pay dividends later. You start just like with the ‘i’ but keep moving down at full thickness through the baseline. As you move below the baseline, start to taper your stroke towards the right gradually until you come to a point at about the 1st Descender line. Continue to draw the stroke as you go a little (about 1/3rd) below the 1st Descender line and come around to form the bowl of the letter and go up to join the downstroke just below the baseline where you lift the pen. The exit stroke continues on the right side of the downstroke as a hairline. The reason you pick up your pen is to avoid drawing excess ink into the hairline exit stroke from the still wet downstroke.

The dot is placed above the main stroke just as in the ‘i’.

This completes our first group. Take your time with it. When satisfied with your work, post the following words for review:

ill, will, built, jilt and a word of your choice made up of these letters.

A note about joins


(https://theflourishforum.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fthesixapp.com%2Fsmk%2FCopperplateLessons%2Fjoins%2Ftill.jpg&hash=3e5d5bbe60a98ea969448a08be3fbdd1)The standard join is made when the hairline exiting at the baseline joins the following letter at mid-height between the base and waist lines. This is the simplest join.

Care should be taken to make the join as seamless as possible. Leaving a very small gap (as in the first hairline before the ‘t’) helps to avoid ink from the following shaded stroke bleeding into the hairline. This is quite acceptable although the gap in this example is a bit too far.

The hairline should be nearly in line with the slant lines at mid-height. This ensures that the join with the following letter is seamless.
(https://theflourishforum.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fthesixapp.com%2Fsmk%2FCopperplateLessons%2Fjoins%2Fwit.jpg&hash=4b25928fba82daa1ba4fcc98a15955ad)The second type of join in Group-1 is from letters that end at the waist line.

These letters (‘w’ and ‘b’) end with a blob at the top of the final stroke. This blob is drawn about ⅓ of the way down from the waist line and a looping connector is drawn to the following letter. The bottom of the loop is about halfway between the waist and base lines allowing a join to the following stroke a little below the waist line. This join is slightly steeper than the ones starting at the base line but the transition can still be made smooth by drawing the hairline loop in such a ways that it matches the slant of the letters at the place where it joins the following stroke.

UPDATE (March 2018)
I just uploaded a short video describing the 'i' stroke to my YouTube channel. You can find it here:  Copperplate Lessons - Group 1 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=urSbSvmP9GQ)

I made a separate video for the 'j' stroke as I also wanted to show the 'g' and the 'q' at the same time. Here it is: purl=https://www.youtube.com/edit?o=U&video_id=XXJv6pWSrds]Copperplate Lessons - j, g & q[/url]


Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: schin on September 12, 2016, 05:37:57 PM
This is a wonderful explanation. Thank you!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 12, 2016, 06:17:50 PM
Thank you for the kind words Schin. It means a lot coming from you :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 13, 2016, 08:44:53 AM
Thank you for these tutorials, I'm looking forward to following them.
I am a complete beginner which gives me lots of room for improvement  ;)
I've printed off some of the guidelines, and have a couple of the nibs listed. The only ink I have right now is sumi but I do have some Higgins eternal on the way, now to get started!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 13, 2016, 12:17:20 PM
You are most welcome @weavingheart - We were all beginners at one time :-) You will be an expert in no time if you enjoy the journey. Isn't it interesting that the masters of their craft are the people who enjoyed learning it when they were novices.

I will be looking forward to your practice sheets.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 13, 2016, 12:37:04 PM
Ok, I've finished my first session. I found your tutorial excellent. I started some 'u's too but soon discovered that I'm still very inconsistent, not something I'd initially noticed but it was very obvious when I wrote two 'i's close to each other so returned to the 'i's.
The part I find hardest is the entry hairline, I wobble all over the place. Hopefully I'll get some more practice in this evening.
I was hoping to attach a photo to this but I'm having some trouble working out how to do it, the files are too big so I'll see if I can reduce them.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 13, 2016, 01:53:41 PM
Hopefully this works
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 13, 2016, 01:54:47 PM
Not great but this was my first go
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on September 13, 2016, 03:51:41 PM
Hopefully this works

Hi @weavingheart,
You are off to a good start :D. Im also quite new to this forum but before Salman adds his details comments here are few observations of mine.
- Your slant angle is off. Dont worry a little bit of practice and few suggestion will get it right. So lot depends on the angle you keep your paper. Print the guidelines closes to each other so that you follow them during your practice and focus on letter forms rather than guessing the slant angle. Here's a small demonstration by Dr. Vitolo on how to position your paper and pen.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1CqzUU3wdXs&list=PLMIz4V6kVzdDRuX2EgVrspi-UMNxDU4mm&index=4

And for guidelines I use this site.
http://shipbrook.net/guidelines/

- The lead in strokes are too straight. It should vertical joining halfway between the baseline and waist line. In your first line the 2nd last 'i' lead in stroke is closer to what I'm referring too.

- The shaded strokes is of same thickness for the first 2/3 of the stroke. Release the nib pressure in the last 1/3rd of the stroke.

I would wait for Salman comments before you get back to your practise desk.
@SMK please correct if there is anything that i had mentioned incorrectly.

Keep writing,
- Ashok



Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 13, 2016, 04:11:32 PM
That's very helpful thanks. I forgot to mention I'm a leftie and have been struggling with the angle. I'm using a straight holder.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Mamashag on September 13, 2016, 06:17:53 PM
My calligraphy journey began mid April 2016. I'm still very much a newbie struggling with the basics. My instructors have been social media, YouTube, blogs, and books. Thank you for the opportunity to learn from your experience.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 13, 2016, 09:02:42 PM
@weavingheart

Rachel - it is great that you have started analysing your work from the very first practice sheet. This habit will help you more than anything else in your calligraphy journey.

It is not a bad start by any means as I can see improvement in the second sheet already. Left handed under-writers have an advantage in writing Copperplate as their pen is naturally aligned with the slant.

Here is what I have observed in your work:

1. You are not doing your practice in groups of 5. This method (as explained in the the 'i' part of the lesson) is very useful in developing a critical eye as well as preventing boredom from filling up pages of the same letter. It also helps me get the feel for a letter quicker. I strongly suggest you give it a try.

2. The slant has a tendency to 'stand up' i.e. be a little more vertical than required. This is easily fixed by turning the paper clockwise. Make a habit of checking that the slant lines are aligned with the slit in your nib. That's it - slant issue solved :-)

3. The hairline has a bit of a curve to it. It start low and curves up and more or less matches the slant line of 55 degrees by the time it reaches 1/2 x-height where it is supposed to meet the down-stroke. You will get the hang of it with a little practice.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 13, 2016, 09:04:58 PM
Welcome @Mamashag - I will be looking forward to your participation. Please feel free to ask any questions.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 13, 2016, 09:07:41 PM
@ash0kgiri

Your feedback is on point Ashok. The only thing I have reservations about is printing guidelines with more slant lines. It only takes a little practice to get the angle of the paper right and I think it helps not to rely too heavily on guidelines. Guidelines can easily become a crutch if one relies on them too much I think.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Mamashag on September 13, 2016, 09:40:09 PM
My first attempt with i's using Moon Palace blk ink and Zebra G nib on hp paper. I have tried many inks, nibs, and papers but my results all look about the same to my untrained eye. I am a lefty using a straight pen holder.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on September 13, 2016, 09:49:30 PM
Hi @Mamashag

Thats just amazing. Doest look like its your first attempt :D
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Mamashag on September 13, 2016, 10:06:47 PM
Many thanks. I have written many i's but never 5 together and never a whole page. It was a good lesson. I will work on the other letters in this lesson tomorrow and maybe get at least 3 correct in a series of 5.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on September 13, 2016, 11:10:09 PM
@ash0kgiri
Guidelines can easily become a crutch if one relies on them too much I think.

I need to then work towards getting rid of the crutches myself before its too late.

Thanks,
Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 14, 2016, 12:46:44 AM
@ash0kgiri
Guidelines can easily become a crutch if one relies on them too much I think.

I need to then work towards getting rid of the crutches myself before its too late.

Thanks,
Ashok

I think I should elaborate on this topic a bit. What I meant by Guidelines becoming crutches applies to the skill building activities. For fair work, I recommend using as many guidelines as needed.

I can quite comfortably write a full page at a consistent and more or less correct slant without using any slant guides but I will use all kinds of guidelines (along with pencilling in markers) if I was composing a letter to say Dr. Vitolo or Nick D'Acquanno :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 14, 2016, 12:53:27 AM
@Mamashag

Thank you for uploading your lessons. You have very good control of the slant and the letter shapes are very nice too. Your joins are particularly nice as they flow quite seamlessly into the following letter.

Here is my feedback:

1. The width of the shade is a little weak for this x-height. You might want to use a more flexible nib if it helps.

2. You have a tendency to start the taper a bit too early at the bottom. There are a number of 'i's in the first part of the page that are kind of wedge shaped. The lifting of the pressure and slight movement to the right is done only in the last 1/3rd of the x-height. This will be more apparent with a thicker shade.

Keep at it - you are pretty much there.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on September 14, 2016, 01:48:55 AM
Thanks for the explanation Salman. Appreciate.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 14, 2016, 04:12:00 AM
@SMK , that's excellent feedback. I started in the groups of five then drifted out of it so I'll make sure I do that next time. The information about the slit in the nib and the slant lines is really useful, I didn't know that
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on September 14, 2016, 05:29:47 AM
Its always good to go back to basics. And once I've done that here's what I feel about them.
For all others to refer, this is how I self analyse my worksheets. Im sure I've missed out on lot of things which Salman will point out.
From my learning its always good to be a tough critique yourself.

Hope this would be of some help.

Thanks,
-Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 14, 2016, 12:39:41 PM
Right, just finished today's practice. I was planning to share another photo but I'm still working on my earlier feedback so think I'll leave it. Please tell me that I will get better. Not like a little better but respectably better?
There's quite a few groups on a certain social media site where folk share their first attempts and it looks amazing compared to mine. I'm not scared of working hard, I just want it to be worthwhile.
Thanks
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 14, 2016, 01:55:45 PM
@weavingheart

Rachel - you will get as good as you want to be. There is absolutely nothing holding you back. Each of us learn in our own way so it doesn't really mean anything where you are in comparison with others. Your guarantee of success comes from the work you are willing to put into learning or doing anything.

Please don't feel like you need to do it in a hurry either. I believe it is more important to enjoy the process than to make progress quickly. It might not feel like it but you are improving with every stroke.

I shared the following in another thread but I think it is quite relevant here:

Quote
BTW - do you know the story about Lupfer when he joined the Zanerian College of Penmanship? The story goes that he showed such poor results after a few weeks of study that Zaner called him in his office and offered to refund his fees if he wanted to quit. Zaner did not think Lupfer had the required skill and control to be any good at penmanship. Needless to say, Lupfer refused, got to work and became one of the best penman of his time. He eventually rose to become the Principal at the Zanerian college.

You can see some of his work here:  E. A. Lupfer (http://www.iampeth.com/artist/earl-lupfer). Don't forget to look at the link titled Earl A. Lupfer - Progress in Script (http://www.iampeth.com/lesson/earl-lupfer-progress-script).

Keep at it.

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 14, 2016, 03:09:27 PM
Just what I needed to hear, thank you
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: hmc on September 15, 2016, 06:25:02 PM
Thank you so much for these lessons! I started studying Copperplate last year but, due to some crazy life events, had to put away the nibs and holders for awhile. I'm really excited to get back into it! Looking forward to learning from you :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 16, 2016, 02:11:31 AM
You are most welcome Hannah. It will be great to have you join in. We have a very helpful community here and I am sure you will find good support from all in your journey to master Copperplate.

I will be looking forward to your participation.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 17, 2016, 07:41:06 AM
Way far from perfect (esp those 'l's in 'will'!) but I'm really pleased to have made some progress. I need to focus on consistency in angle, letter spacing and squaring off but so far so good.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 17, 2016, 09:01:20 PM
@weavingheart

This shows much improvement Rachel. You have a natural sense of letter shapes. This is a good thing but it can sometimes dictate the strokes which is something we don't want. I will address this in the instructions for the next exercise below.

Your slant is still off but it is consistent. Remember to slide the paper after every couple of words to keep the writing area in the 'sweet spot'. Also, make a habit of checking that the slit of the nib and the slant lines are more or less aligned when you write - turn the paper if to align them, don't modify your grip.

Your work has clearly improved since the last exercise. Now we need to refine it. Here you go:

1. Lift the pen for a beat at the bottom of your stroke when you reach the base line. This will break down the letter into components and you will no longer be writing an 'i' or a 'u' but just drawing a shaded stroke. It also keeps the turns from becoming too rounded. This is important in Copperplate.

2. Introduce just a tiny bit more space between your letters so the exit hairline joins the shaded stroke of the next letter naturally at around 1/2 x-height. You will notice that there is very little space for the crossbar of the 't' when it is next to an 'l' - a bit more space between the letters will fix that.

3. The dot of the 'i' should be the same thickness as the shaded stroke of the 'i'.

4. Start your entry hairline at the base line and go up. In the 'i' of 'ill' and the 'j' of 'jilt' you have a curve that first goes down to the base line.

I think this exercise bears repeating with these points in mind. Keeping to the slant is important but being consistent in the slant is even more important - and you have that covered.

Let's do 'wilt', 'built', 'jilt' and a word of your choice for the next round. I will be looking forward to it.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on September 18, 2016, 03:18:46 AM
Wonderful, thank you. Your feedback is very thoughtful and thorough, I very much appreciate the time you have taken to help me
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Mamashag on September 22, 2016, 12:25:38 AM
I've worked through each letter and completed one line each of 'till, wit.' There is much work to be done on each. Still struggling with nibs and ink! Trying out several nibs, but not happy with any particular one. (No idea how to rotate these images, sorry.)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 22, 2016, 01:07:24 AM
@Mamashag

That is excellent work. The thickness of the shade is just right now and you are taking them down to the last 1/3rd consistently. The flow you have achieved in the 2nd 'w' on the last line is just lovely to see.

There isn't much to critique here. You are a little unsure on the exit hairlines. This is common with left handed scribes. It will go away in time and all your hairlines will look like that 'w' I mentioned. The crossbar of the 't' could be a little wider too.

The assignment for this lesson is to write the words ill, will, built, jilt and one word of your choice (I wrote out 'till' and 'wit' as examples of joins used in this group of letters). Judging from your work, I don't think you will have any problem with those. 

I think you are ready for the next lesson as soon as you submit the above :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on September 22, 2016, 03:13:03 AM
Hi @Mamashag,

This is amazing progress in such a short time. I also had lot of problems with nibs. Finally I settled in for Gillotte 303. As a beginner Walnut ink is what i would recommend as it gives finer hairlines and you can see the flaws clearly. Its also gentle on nibs unlike Sumi.

Hope this helps you.

Keep writing,
-Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: AllisonP on September 25, 2016, 05:20:04 PM
So I started calligraphy a couple of months ago (though with limited practice). There are a few smudges but it would be good to get some feedback  :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 26, 2016, 01:44:39 AM
Hi Allison - it is great to have you join us.

Your letter forms are quite good and you have command of the slant. This gives you a solid base to build from.

There are only a couple of minor tweaks needed here and there.

1. The turns at the bottom of your letters are too rounded. Interestingly you draw them better in the individual letter practice but in the words they become too rounded. The picture is blurry but it seems to me that you are not lifting your pen at the base line as you come off the shaded stroke. This is important as it establishes the exit hairline as a separate stroke. This is important because your exit hairlines will change shape depending on the following letter in some cases. You will see this in lesson-2.

2. The letting-up of the shade should occur in the last 1/3rd of the x-height. You are letting up at around the halfway point.

3. The shades should be about 25% thinner than you have them in this example. The weight of the letters is a bit too heavy for this size of writing.

4. I suspect this will get fixed if you take care of no.1 & 3 but some of your letters are crowding each other i.e. the exit stroke from one is meeting the next letter lower than the middle of the x-height - this brings the letters too close together.

5. The loop of the 'j' is a bit more pointed at the bottom. The thickest part of the counter (the empty space inside the loop) is at about the 1st descender line. Also, the exit hairline out of the 'j' should be the same as an entry hairline for an 'i'.

6. The two counters of the 'w' should be visually the same size. You have a tendency to make the second one bigger.

7. In 'jilt' - make sure the two dots of the 'i' and the top of the 't' are all at the same level. Yours are not even.

OK - I know this more than a few points but these are mostly minor. I am sure you will master them quickly.

Remember to practice in groups of 5. Please post the assigned words with the above in mind. I will be looking forward to it.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on September 26, 2016, 06:43:40 AM
So I started calligraphy a couple of months ago (though with limited practice). There are a few smudges but it would be good to get some feedback

Hi @AllisonP,

Thats really nice for the first attempt. Salman have given you the detailed feedback. Follow them religiously and you see the difference. :D
Keep writing and keep posting.

- Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: AllisonP on September 27, 2016, 06:33:57 PM
Thanks Salman for the feedback.  Lots of things to work on so I will post once I have had a bit more practise...

Thanks @ash0kgiri for the encouragement!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 28, 2016, 09:12:04 PM
Hi Allison - while the list is long, I am sure most of these are just things that will get fixed as soon as you start paying attention to them. I find most of my learning is knowing what to do - the 'doing' part isn't half as hard as figuring out what to look for.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: baodingball on September 30, 2016, 12:27:31 PM
Hello, I´ve been doing the exercises in this wonderful tutorial and I thought I´d share my work to get some good comments and suggestions so I would know that I am heading to right direction.  I am using a Leonardt Principal, some india ink which I diluted with water ( trying to do some experiment), and 20 gsm copy paper.  I will appreciate any feedback.  Thanks.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on September 30, 2016, 12:47:36 PM
Hi @baodingball,
This looks really good. Like the even Spacing between letters. The joins are good,  and Consistent slant. Salman will provide you with his detailed feedback.

Keep writing,
Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 01, 2016, 01:36:07 AM
@baodingball

It is good to have you join us. This is indeed an excellent start. You have gotten pretty much everything right in terms of letter shapes. I am particularly pleased with the counter of the 'j' as that can be a bit tricky. I also like the turns at the baseline - not too rounded but not too sharp either - very nice.

Having said that though, there are a couple of things that need attention.

- Your strokes are 'bouncing' all along the waist and base lines i.e. some strokes are coming down all the way to the base line while others turn around before they quite make it there (look at the base line of the first 'ill' on the last line). The same with the waist line (look at the 'w' and 'i' in the last 'wilt' on the last line). The dots of the 'i' and 'j' should also be at the same height. Are you working with the guidelines printed (or drawn) on the paper you are writing on?

- The spacing in your letters is generally good but inconsistent in some places. In 'built' on the last line, the two 'i' strokes of the 'u' are closer together than the space between the 'u' and the 'i' - these should all be the same. In 'jilt' on the last line, the space between 'i' and 'l' is more than the space between j-i and l-t.

- The crossbar of the 't' should be horizontal.

As you can see, these are all easy to fix just by paying a bit of attention. The spacing could be an exception but I am sure you will get that easily. Your practice has paid off. You are almost there :-)

I will be looking forward to a reworking of the same exercise. You don't need to post the whole page - just the assigned words and one word of your choice will do.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Anjali N on October 02, 2016, 12:04:50 AM
Salman, thanks so much for sharing your time and expertise! It is so generous!

Here is my attempt (I'm a newbie). It seems like the width of my downstrokes are highly variable - I assume no better way to practice consistency than just doing lots of downstrokes? Thanks for your critique and advice!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 03, 2016, 12:36:04 AM
@Anjali N

Anjali - you have a nice fluid style of writing with a consistent slant. This means you have a good posture and are placing the paper at the correct angle. This gives you a good base to build on.

I think you have good pen control so most of your work will be on figuring out 'what' to do rather than being frustrated by the 'how' - one can't ask for a better start than that IMO :-)

Now for a bit of the feedback:

1. It seems to me that you are writing at a pretty quick pace. This might be a remnant of your brush and modern calligraphy practice both of which depend on the fluidity of movement to a certain degree. Fluid movements are important in Copperplate too but one cannot let it affect the stroke shape or weight. I suspect the inconsistency you noted in the weight of the shade is mostly due to this. It will take a bit of practice to slow down just enough to have good control throughout the stroke.

I might be entirely wrong in my assumption here and you might actually be going too slow - so correct me if I'm wrong :-)

2. The width of the shaded strokes can be reigned in a bit. The 'i' in 'ill' is a good weight to shoot for. Also, go back and square-off the tops of the letters after completing either the letter or the word (but before the ink dries). This will make your script looks much more polished.

There are only 2 items in your first feedback but these are important. You might feel a bit off when adjusting the speed (up or down) and managing the weight of the letters. Stay with it though and you will soon reap the rewards.

I will be looking forward to your 2nd attempt at this lesson.

- Salman

ps - it makes my job easier if you let the ink dry before taking a picture :-)

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Anjali N on October 03, 2016, 01:12:21 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback, Salman! I truly appreciate it! I will practice and be back with a re-attempt  :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 04, 2016, 05:48:19 PM
(https://theflourishforum.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimgur.com%2F8SM83no&hash=e70f13f7ec9e9a24faca93ce0ab6a44f)
Here is my attempt. I didnt post the practice runs or individual letters on the page before!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 04, 2016, 07:06:33 PM
@jolittletime - Joanne, your attachment did not come through.

S.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Anjali N on October 04, 2016, 11:12:40 PM
Hi Salman, hope you are doing well! :)

Attached is my second attempt. I went much slower this time! Look forward to your thoughts!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 05, 2016, 12:32:46 AM
Anjali - this is excellent work. You should be well pleased with the quick progress.

The slowing down has revealed a couple of hiccups but these are easily rectified.

1. The last stroke of the 'w' should be a little rounded - just like you have drawn it in the 'b'.

2. Your letters can use just a little more space between them so the exit stroke has time to meet the following letter gracefully at about  halfway up the x-height. Your spacing in 'till' is a good one to replicate.

3. Your slant, while generally good, wavers from time to time e.g. the second stroke of the 'u' in the last 'built' is more upright than the strokes on either sides as is the 't' in 'till'.

You are almost there. I think one more shot at it and you will be good to move on to the next lesson.

How about the words 'bulb' and 'wit' for the next one.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Anjali N on October 05, 2016, 07:26:29 AM
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! I so appreciate it! :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 05, 2016, 07:34:58 AM
i hope this works now! 
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 05, 2016, 07:36:03 AM
haha - so good i attached it twice!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: baodingball on October 06, 2016, 10:30:55 AM
@baodingball

...

I will be looking forward to a reworking of the same exercise. You don't need to post the whole page - just the assigned words and one word of your choice will do.

- Salman

I really appreciate the feedback.  Sorry it took me a while to post this... I decided to write directly on the guideline instead of putting it at the back.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 06, 2016, 02:54:08 PM
@jolittletime

Joanne - you have a nice rhythm and good spacing. Here is my feedback:

1. It is really useful to write directly on the guidelines. You can draw the guidelines in pencil if the paper you are practicing on is hard to work through the printer. Even with thickness of the paper makes a difference when one places the guidelines underneath.

2. The bottom turns at the baseline are a bit too rounded. The curve in the bottom turns is formed the 'outside' (or left) edge of the shaded stroke to the hairline.

3. The spaces between the three strokes of the 'w' should be even. The last stroke in your 'w's goes out too far making the space on the right larger.

4. The little 'blob' at the end of the 'w' and the 'b' comes down 1/3rd of the way from the waist line. This allows us to form the exit hairline in a sort of 'u' shape that joins the following letter going along the slant line. In your example, the join goes almost horizontally into the next letter.

5. Try to keep the letter height consistent. The tops of the 'u' and 'i' in the 'built' are at 3 different levels. They should all be at the waist line.

6. The slant in your letters varies as you go down the line. Compare 'ill' and 'jilt'. This is usually fixed by moving the paper after every couple of words so you are writing in pretty much a 2 inch zone all the time. The means the relationship of the paper to your eyes and hand remains the same throughout the text.

Ok - this is a fairly long list of things to work on but these are things one 'gets' with practice anyway. Lets have another go at this lesson with the above in mind :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 06, 2016, 03:01:13 PM
@baodingball

Much improved consistency in letter height and on the baseline. There is only one letter that goes below the baseline on that whole line - this is good work.

Your slant is a bit inconsistent in places. The second stroke of the 'u' in 'built' is a bit more vertical that the strokes on either side. This is usually a sign that your paper needs to be rotated a bit so your hand naturally draws at the slant line.

Your letter shapes were already quite good but you have to be patient with that crossbar - the second one is 'taking off' again :-)

You are ready to move on to lesson 2 but do keep the above in mind when practicing. Also, do mix up the letters from this lesson with the next one when practicing/playing.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 06, 2016, 03:20:33 PM
Thank you salman. I will have another go! I really appreciate your feedback.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 06, 2016, 05:15:21 PM
I've had another try. My guideline paper wasn't great for writing on directly so i ruled over the top of the guidelines. I think i need a few more slant lines drawing in.

I have focused on less rounded bottoms of letters, more even tops and more even Ws (although i think that still needs more work to look better).
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on October 07, 2016, 06:26:22 AM
Oooo that looks brilliant to my uneducated eye, well done
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on October 07, 2016, 06:32:01 AM
Ok I'm still plugging away at my practice. I'm enjoying it, which is the main thing and I'm in no hurry, I'm holding the story about Knupfer in mind. I'm learning all the time: I've found the right posture for me and also that obliques work really well, despite being cacky handed (a leftie). Here's today's practice, just to record my, ahem, 'progress' - I've followed some exercises from the Elenor Winters book just to mix it up a bit, hope that's ok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: baodingball on October 07, 2016, 10:50:11 AM
@baodingball

...

You are ready to move on to lesson 2 but do keep the above in mind when practicing. Also, do mix up the letters from this lesson with the next one when practicing/playing.

- Salman

Yay!!!  Thank you for the feedback. I will keep on working!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 07, 2016, 03:16:50 PM
@jolittletime

Isn't it easier working directly on the guidelines? I can see that your consistency has improved.

You can add more slant guides if you want but don't get too dependent on them. I think having them an inch apart is good enough.

The next step for you is a bit of refinement in your script. Here's my feedback:

1. Your shaded strokes vary in width from top to bottom. You can see that more clearly in the tall letters like 'l' and 't'. When starting a shaded stroke, apply the pressure at the start and keep it consistent until the bottom 1/3rd of the x-height. Start lifting the pressure in this last part and move very slightly to the right - only enough to keep the right side of the stroke straight until just before you reach the base line. Study the examples I have written. This is one of those things that is harder to explain than to do :-)

2. While the letter height is more consistent than before you still tend to change it e.g. in the 'wit' the tops of all the strokes except the 't' should be on the waist line and the bottoms should touch the base line.

3. You are making your turns while applying pressure. The end of the shaded stroke ends with a very slight movement to the right at the base line. You should lift the pen off the paper for a beat before putting it down and drawing the hairline. Slowing down a bit helps. This script is usually written very slowly compared to your handwriting (or even other hands).

Let's just focus on these for now. We will move on to the joins in the next step :-)

Add the words 'wii' and  'wilt' to your practice for this round.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 07, 2016, 03:21:55 PM
Ok I'm still plugging away at my practice. I'm enjoying it, which is the main thing and I'm in no hurry, I'm holding the story about Knupfer in mind. I'm learning all the time: I've found the right posture for me and also that obliques work really well, despite being cacky handed (a leftie). Here's today's practice, just to record my, ahem, 'progress' - I've followed some exercises from the Elenor Winters book just to mix it up a bit, hope that's ok

It is great that you are having fun with the script. Any exercise that helps you master the pen is good for you. It is perfectly fine to use other resources but it is important to know that there are differences in styles e.g. Eleanor Winters' style has more rounded turns at the base line and is written in fewer strokes. The method I use combines elements of Copperplate and Engrosser's script and differs than EW's styles.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 07, 2016, 03:49:56 PM
Thanks salman. more practice for me! I really appreciate your help.

Also interesting what you are saying about eleanor winters having more rounded bottoms on her copperplate as that's the exemplar i have been following up til now!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: weavingheart on October 07, 2016, 07:29:37 PM
D'you know, when I was practising today I was really struggling to get the rounded part, I thought it was me but that makes a lot of sense now. I'll stick to the tutorial I think!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Anjali N on October 07, 2016, 10:27:24 PM
Hi Salman, here is wit and bulb. Thanks!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 07, 2016, 11:36:00 PM
@Anjali N

Yup you got it....except.....a minor thing about the shaded 'blob' (my term) at the end of the 'w' and the 'b'. The shaded part should be on the inside of the hairline - yours are drawn over the hairline.

The letter shapes are good, the joins are good, the curve at the bottom is fine. The shade weight could be more uniform though.

I think you can move on to the next lesson but include the group-1 letters in your practice, especially the 'w' and the 'b' and work a bit on keeping the shade uniform.

Include 2 words using 'w' and 'b' in your first attempt at the group-2 letters.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 07, 2016, 11:52:59 PM
D'you know, when I was practising today I was really struggling to get the rounded part, I thought it was me but that makes a lot of sense now. I'll stick to the tutorial I think!

...
Also interesting what you are saying about eleanor winters having more rounded bottoms on her copperplate as that's the exemplar i have been following up til now!

It is great that these kinds of discussions take place to have a better understanding of what we are doing. Of course, no style is better or worse than another. My goal for these tutorials is to prepare the students to pursue any style they choose - this is why we are focusing so much on understanding and analyzing form.

The 'mechanical' ability to execute strokes is simply a matter of practice but to apply it with an understanding of the form gives us the ability to express very different things with similar script styles.

Thank you for sharing this journey with me.

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 08, 2016, 06:34:29 AM
Another shot at it. I did another row of w words just to show that i can make the I after it touch the baseline! Thanks for all yoir advice salman!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 08, 2016, 02:17:21 PM
@jolittletime

Your spacing is improving but it seems to me you are writing a bit too quickly for good control. The reason I say this is that the same letter is drawn differently in different words e.g. none of the 'w's in 'wii' are identical on the last line.

Did you practice the individual letters in groups of 5? The goal for your practice is to write each letter in groups of 5 until you can get 3 or 4 good ones in a group. Then move on to the next letter. Since all the letters in this group are based on 'i' the practice you put in for it will make the remaining letters easier to write. For example the 'w' is just two 'i' strokes with the hairline of the second 'i' going up to the waist line.

I think you are very close but would benefit from spending some time practicing the individual letters in groups of 5. Writing words will also get you there but it will take a bit longer. I find it beneficial to practice the basics from time to time as well - especially if I have not written Copperplate in a while.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 09, 2016, 12:01:04 PM
Still battling on. I have done some more practice of individual letters and had another try at the words. I didnt think the first lot of ws were good so i did another line!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 10, 2016, 07:32:23 AM
@jolittletime  - lets work on that 'i', 'u' and 'w' individually for a bit. I can see that you have the pen control to draw these properly but for some reason you not doing it.

A couple of notes for your practice:

1. I don't see much evidence of lifting the pen at the bottom of the shaded stroke - this is important in the learning phase. One can draw the letters in one go when one develops a good sense of where to release the pressure. In the beginning there is a tendency to continue sideways into the hairline while still applying pressure - I can see examples of this in your practice.

2. At what speed are you writing the words? Writing Copperplate is more like drawing than handwriting in that you pay attention to each and every stroke separately. There is a kind of flow one develops along the way but it is still not even close to handwriting. I suspect you are going a bit too quickly.

This is where you are forming the foundation for your pointed pen capabilities. It can be a bit of a battle at times but the skills you develop at this stage will stand you in good stead with all kinds of scripts. Hunker down - I'm with you.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 10, 2016, 12:22:19 PM
thank you salman.  i will try again later.  i suspect the issue is too little time to practice and being tired when i am doing it - i usually don't get to sit down to it until 9pm or later!  but i am battling on!

i felt like i had slowed right down in the latest set, but clearly not enough.

I will try those letters singly and do some more words for critique.  thanks again!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 10, 2016, 02:40:13 PM
@jolittletime - ok that explains it then.

I would suggest focusing on one stroke per evening for about 20 minutes (in groups of 5) - that's it. The rest of the time can be your play time. This is the pace you should be going at given the amount of time you have to spend on learning Copperplate. It might seem like a slow process but you will find you make progress quicker this way.

Each practice session should have a specific and well defined goal e.g. even width of a shade - or - release the shade 1/3 of the way from the base line etc. Move on only after the goal has been achieved. The groups of 5 method is designed to develop a critical eye along with control of the pen. Both are needed but I would say the ability to see is more important than the ability to execute. If you don't practice, you might lose the ability to execute but once you learn to see the nuances of letter forms it will stay with you forever.

Attempt other letters only after you have developed a good control of the 'i' stroke by itself. You don't have to post every day, or even every other day, or even once a week - just post whenever you want feedback. There is no hurry whatsoever.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jolittletime on October 10, 2016, 02:55:13 PM
Thank you salman! Your advice is really helpful. One day i will catch up (probably when i dont have a full time job, a long commute, a house to run and an 8 year old with a packed diary!)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 10, 2016, 03:14:51 PM
I totally understand. What I wanted to get across was that there is nothing to catch up to - your Calligraphy practice should be a pleasant time you spend with yourself with a little bit of focused practice and some play time. The progress will come on its own - what does it matter how quickly or slowly as long as you are enjoying the process :-)

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: cciele on October 16, 2016, 05:40:09 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome on the other thread!

Here's my first attempts at the very very beginning -- letter "i" only.

I didn't like my first try, with Hunt 101 and Leonardt EF Principal nibs in oblique holder, watered down Noodlers black and walnut ink (the gray ones -- forgot to scan in color), on Hammermill Color Copy digital paper. Hairlines weren't very thin and there was feathering.

Second try on Canson marker paper, Hunt 108 crowquill (I love the old timey look this makes) in a straight holder and the Principal in an oblique holder, with the Noodlers. Getting there -- lots of work to figure out the best angles and pressure.

ETA: I was trying to conserve paper so just did my i's on alternating lines instead of just the baseline section. Also, I just read the comment about putting guidelines directly on the paper, so I'll try that with the marker paper for next time!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 16, 2016, 09:10:49 PM
@cciele

Good to see your work here Cathy.

That Hammermill paper is no good - any paper that feathers with even Walnut ink is useless for our purposes. Marker papers are really good for pointed pen work - good choice on that one.

I can clearly seen am improvement when I compare the first few 'i's on the second page with those at the end. The slope has become fairly consistent and the shakiness from the hairlines is almost gone. You are on the right track so for now just continue on it.

It doesn't really make any difference which nib or holder you use as long as you can produce good and consistent results. It is good that you are experimenting to find a good combination. Once you hit on a nib+paper+ink+holder combination that works for you, stick to it for your practice sessions. That way you can concentrate on learning rather than fighting with your tools. You can continue experimenting in your 'play' time :-)

Also, keep your practice sessions relatively short - 15-20 minutes is usually good. Each practice session should have a clear goal (yes just one). It could be something just getting the entry hairline right, or maintaining shade for the 2/3rds of the x-height etc. BTW - you can have more than one practice session a day - just not back to back :-)

I am quite happy with your entry and exit hairlines in the 'i' but you should work on the main shaded (i.e. the thick part) stroke. Your shade (the thick part) needs to remain the same for the top 2/3rds of the x-height. Start tapering and moving slightly to the right only in the last 1/3rd.

Your goal is to be able to make 3 or 4 good 'i's out of 5.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: cciele on October 16, 2016, 09:53:57 PM
Appreciate your detailed (and quick!) feedback, Salman!

I especially need to keep in mind the time of practice sessions -- good advice in any close work, I think. Sometimes I get carried away with the almost meditative nature of making the strokes.

Shading will be my focus on my next session. Maybe I'll move to "u" too ;)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: AngieD on October 20, 2016, 01:42:37 PM
My first pass using Higgins Calligraphy ink, Brause EF66 and copy paper.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: cciele on October 20, 2016, 09:41:06 PM
Trying to get in practice time this week, but it's been crazy!

Here's what I have so far for lesson 1. First row with watered down Noodler's Black; second with walnut. For some reason the writing look better with the walnut ...

Anyhow, looks like I need to be more consistent with my slants. And that bottom loop of the j is driving me crazy -- any tips on how to make it more graceful? Thank you!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: prasad on October 21, 2016, 05:53:46 AM

Here's what I have so far for lesson 1. First row with watered down Noodler's Black; second with walnut. For some reason the writing look better with the walnut ...


Salman will guide you perfectly.  I just wanted to say that this is really good work.  It took me just ages to get the slant right and that too I could get it right when I drew on the slant line itself.  So I cheated and had the slants much much closer :)

Keep up the practise.  you will get awesome in no time.
Happy writing
-Prasad
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 21, 2016, 03:30:36 PM
@AngieD

It is good to have you join us Angie. You have a very nice rhythm to your script. The slant is fairly consistent and the joins are well made. This is a good start.

Here are a few things for you to work on:

1. Uniformity of shades. The shade in the straight letters should be uniform from the top of the letter all the way down to 1/3 x-height from the base line. Your shade starts to taper very early, in some cases as soon as you begin the stroke. This causes the shade to take on a wedge shape. This is more noticeable in the 'b' and 'l' in the 'built' and 'jilt' on the first line. The 'b' in 'built' on the second line is pretty good- the taper starts at about 1/2 x-height but the shade above that is fairly consistent.

2. Your slant is generally good but does wander a bit. The 'u' and 'i' in 'built' is made as 3 'i' strokes next to each other and should be identical. The slant of the second stroke of the 'u' in the first 'built' is off a bit which throws off the spacing.

3. The crossbar of the 't' should be horizontal. Yours are slanting down a bit.

Lets give it one more go with these things in mind.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 21, 2016, 03:47:03 PM
@cciele

This is a marked improvement from the last practice sheet you uploaded - good work.

Here are some points to consider:

1. Your slant becomes more upright towards the end of the line. This is most likely caused by you writing farther away from yourself. It is useful to figure out the 'sweet spot' where you have the best control and move the paper so you are always writing in this spot. This is usually more than a couple of inches wide so it is useful to move the paper every couple of words.

2. You start to taper off the shade at different places - some letters start to taper off too early while others are shaded almost up to the base line. You will gain better control of this if you slow down your strokes a bit. The unfortunate side-effect of slowing down is that some shakiness is introduced but that goes away with practice - also, you can speed up a bit once your control improves.

3. The exit hairlines are too flat. The exit hairline should curve up as if it is the right side of an 'o' and math the slant of the letters at 1/2 x-height. This 'fixes' the spacing as well makes for smoother joins.

The bottom of the 'j' can be difficult. The counter of the 'j' (i.e. the empty space in bottom loop) is shaped like an elongated teardrop. The widest part of this teardrop is not at the bottom but slightly above it.

Also, try adding some more water to your Noodler's ink - it might help with the flow a bit better. Black ink in unforgiving as it shows up inconsistencies better than lighter inks. The plus side is that it looks gorgeous once you get it right :-)

Lets have another go at these words with the above in mind.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: cciele on October 21, 2016, 05:11:05 PM
Prasad - thank you so much for the encouragement! I have a long way to go but I really like drawing letters :)

Salman - your advice is on point as always! I will apply your tips to my next practice sessions and we will see what happens. I will try the trick with adding more water. I'm also trying out a new-to-me iron gall ink. I'm afraid I'm turning into one of those ink hoarders! :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: sarthina on October 21, 2016, 05:15:25 PM
OK. Here's my practice for lesson 1 (as promised). I know it's not much, but maybe it's enough for you to have an idea about my mistakes. I mean apart from my wobbly ascenders and from my lower loops at "j" (which I still don't know how to get better at). Thanks in advance anyway.
Some technicals: L Principal nib, oblique holder and "own"made walnut ink ( 8) ), herlitz paper.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 21, 2016, 06:16:54 PM
@sarthina

That is pretty good work. The wobbliness will go away with practice and you will naturally speed up a bit a you gain better control.

Your slant, spacing and joins are pretty good and you have a good idea of the letter forms. We will work on some refinements.

1. The shade needs to be uniform all the way down the stroke up to 1/3rd x-height from the base line. You have a tendency to start tapering too early giving the letters a wedge shape.

2. In some cases, you taper off the shade slightly before reaching the base line. This causes the bottom turns to become too pointed. You can notice this most clearly in the first 'w' and the line of 't's.

3. Practice your letters in groups of 5 as described in the group-1 description. Stop to analyze your work after every group. This helps train the eye to pick up the details.

4. The loop of the 'j' looks pretty good to me. You have the teardrop/almond shaped counter most of the time. The right side is a bit too straight though. You can adjust how you taper the shade to make the inside shape (the counter) more balanced.

You might want to increase the width of the shade a bit. This will let you see the details more clearly. I very much like the delicate look of your script though so we will come back to it after refining the basics a bit.

Please feel free to make up different words for the group-1 letters if you are too bored with the assigned ones.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: sarthina on October 22, 2016, 03:59:47 AM
Thank you for the reply and for the to-the-point instructions. I'll post my practice sheet of today (which is not better than the first, or just a tiny bit) but this is not to put pressure on you to answer back or anything. I know how busy I am myself with every day life, with our "Sisyphean existence" (thanks @jeanwilson for the phrase) and so I don't hurry people. Not to mention that I am very impressed by how much time and ...effort (after all) you guys put on teaching and guiding us. So I guess I have everyone's consent that one way to thank you is to try our best on our struggle(s) here. Well, I continue to feel profane when posting my clumsy "work", but, hey, I'm a baby. Starting to walk... ;D
OK. Now for the practice sheet: the tapering thing is just killing me. I really don't know which of the letters are OK from this point of view, so I kindly ask you to point out which are those (if any  ::) ).
Next thing I want to say is that I am still working on my grip and on the way I hold the pen. Found myself thinking about it while writing and sometimes letters are not consistent because of that. I guess. And I also found out that keeping the nib at a lower angle helps in making thicker shades easier (yeah, I just invented the wheel).
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: AngieD on October 24, 2016, 01:20:27 PM
Sorry.  Hopefully this one isn't upside down.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 24, 2016, 01:59:11 PM
@sarthina

The taper issue is much better in your second worksheet. The first group of 'i's on the very last line (where you have a question mark under them) is pretty good. That should be your model. If you notice, the left side of the shaded stroke starts the rounding process about 1/3rd x-height from the base line in these and this curve is continued by the hairline exit stroke. This makes the bottom of the letter a bit rounded and balanced. In the very next group of 'i's on that line, the rounding is reduced which makes the bottoms a bit pointy - you want to avoid this.

I will be looking forward to your attempt at the exercise words.

- Salman

ps. I think it is awesome that you are studying the shapes by drawing them first. I have been thinking of starting with this in my workshops too :-)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 24, 2016, 02:15:16 PM
@AngieD

This is a marked improvement on the previous attempt Angie - well done.

Your slant is a bit upright but the good news is that it is consistent all the way through. This can be easily fixed by turning the paper counter-clockwise a bit (assuming you are right handed).

OK- so for the next bit of adjustments then:

1. The bottom turns on your letters are a little inconsistent in places. This causes the spacing between letters to be off. In 'will', the 'i' turns up too sharply, causing the i and l to be too close, where the very next 'l' is too rounded which causes the two 'l's to be further apart.  A good test for uniformity is to cover the top half of the letters and compare the bottom turns. You will start to see things much clearer.

2. The loop of the j could be just a tiny bit wider. The counter (inside shape) of the bottom loop on the 'j' is almond shaped which you have done correctly - it just needs to be a little wider.

That's it - you are close.

Let's have a go at 'jill', 'bulb' and 'wit'. I will be looking for correct slant, uniform shading and good spacing.

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: sarthina on October 24, 2016, 05:33:38 PM
Thanks for your reply. Yes, well, those question marks are where I thought the letters looked good (better than others anyway) but wasn't really sure. Now you made that clear to me.
I'll post my latest worksheet - is there any progress or not? And a question: how long should I be practicing at such large scale? X-height on that pad I am writing on is about 7.5 mm (which gives me a total of 1.5 cm ascender height  :o ). It looks huge to me... And to my hand, of course. Although I understand now the theory behind it.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: AngieD on October 25, 2016, 05:24:48 PM
Here is my first attempt at the new words you gave me.  As always, thank you for taking the time to critique and offer advice.

Angie
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: cciele on October 26, 2016, 01:09:29 AM
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Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 26, 2016, 02:37:58 AM
You can edit your post by clicking on the 'Modify' option to the top right of the box that contains your post. Alternately, you can just make a new post and I will delete the old one.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 26, 2016, 02:44:13 AM
@AngieD

OK - the spacing is much more uniform as is the shape of the letters .....but you have made the letters too wide now. Ideally a letter is half as wide as it is tall. A little wider is generally fine but yours are dangerously close to being square. The width in your previous attempt was good - it just needed to be consistent.

How about giving it another go with a slightly compressed width. Careful with the width of the shade - don't start to taper too early.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: AngieD on October 27, 2016, 12:16:05 PM
I worked on the letter width and tapers.  I look forward to your feedback.  Thank you.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 28, 2016, 03:05:24 AM
@AngieD - your consistency and slant is pretty good Angie. The bottom loop of the 'j' is a thing of beauty.

Your letters are a bit too wide still though. It doesn't post much problems in this group but you will see it mess with the 'm's and 'n's in the next one.

Lets move on to group-2 and we will work on the width there.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 28, 2016, 03:09:19 AM
Thanks for your reply. Yes, well, those question marks are where I thought the letters looked good (better than others anyway) but wasn't really sure. Now you made that clear to me.
I'll post my latest worksheet - is there any progress or not? And a question: how long should I be practicing at such large scale? X-height on that pad I am writing on is about 7.5 mm (which gives me a total of 1.5 cm ascender height  :o ). It looks huge to me... And to my hand, of course. Although I understand now the theory behind it.

@sarthina - yes, there is an improvement in the bottom turns an there are hardly any with the wedge issue. This is well done. Please move on to group-2 :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: AngieD on October 28, 2016, 09:29:25 AM
Thank you for all your help and advice on group 1.  I am excited to move on to group 2.  I will continue to work on the spacing.  I find it slightly frustrating that I started out with good spacing, but when I worked to adjust the consistency of the spacing, I started to get too round with it and haven't been able to correct that since :-\.  The good thing is that I know I can do it since I had it correct before.  I look forward to working on it along with the new learning group 2 will bring. 

I also realized that I never really introduced myself on this group.  I have always loved handwriting.  I had a speedball calligraphy kit when I was a teenager and I loved working with it.  I remember making cards and poems as gifts for my relatives.  I got interested in it again a few years ago when I took a small course in more traditional broad edge nib calligraphy.  Though I enjoyed it, I started following some blogs and online tutorials and realized that the pointed pen style is more appealing to me.  I practiced with a really loose modern style and even did some wedding envelope addressing for a friend.  As I did research, I started learning more about copperplate and Engrosser's script.  I  love the order and rules that apply to creating something so beautiful.  I felt like my calligraphy would benefit from learning the foundations of these styles and that I would then be able to, not only succeed at those styles, but also break off and experiment more with looser styles of modern calligraphy.  I, thankfully, came across the Flourish Forum and was immediately pointed in the direction of your lessons by another member.  I am so glad to be learning from you as well as the work of others participating in your teaching. 

Again, thank you for your time and help.

Angie
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on November 01, 2016, 06:10:27 PM
Thank you for the introduction Angie. It is great to know you a bit better :-)

I believe that learning the basics actually free us up to explore our own personal style even better. It is great to see you have come to a similar conclusion. Having a solid foundation is always better than trying to balance on a shaky one :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Funietchi on November 21, 2016, 12:53:01 PM
Hi Salman,

Today is my day 41 of my Copperplate Challenge, I decide to start practicing my minuscules before I start with the Majuscules. It seems that I need to work harder 🙈 please help me.. Thank you so much.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on November 22, 2016, 03:04:20 AM
@Funietchi - great to have you join us.

I would like to see the assigned words for this group but will start with a little bit of feedback you can incorporate in your practice:

- you seem to be moving from the shaded stroke to the hairline in one continuous motion. This is ok if you can do it with control but I can see a lot of inconsistency in your 'i' strokes. For example, the first 5 strokes in the letters on the las line should be identical. I suggest you try lifting your pen at the base line and make the hairline as a separate stroke.

- The crossbar of the 't' should be between the waist line and the top of the 't'. you are drawing it at the waist line.

- The exit stroke of the 'j' should match the slant of the other hairlines. The one in your example comes out in a wavy line at a shallow angle.

I will be looking forward to the practice words written with the above in mind :-)

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Funietchi on November 22, 2016, 02:21:27 PM
Thank you for your feedback,  Salman.. I really really appreciate it, I was trying to do your suggestion tonight, and I would love to hear your feedback again. I have overlapping problems especially with my "i". And also have inconsistency, slant and hairline problems too, I promise I will work harder to fix them.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on November 22, 2016, 02:37:24 PM
@Funietchi

Your slant isn't all that bad Stephanie, It looks like your turns at the base line are causing you problems. I see 2 main issues with the turns:

1. You start lifting the pen at about 1/2 x-height. This is too early and causes the bottom turns to be too rounded.

2. You continue into the exit hairline with one continuous stroke.

This can be easily fixed by going back to the 'i' stroke and drawing it as instructed. It is well worth it to spend time on this stroke as it will be the foundation of everything you do in Copperplate.

I will copy the instructions here for convenience:

Quote

i - Start with a hairline at the base line and go up to the middle of the x-height or slightly above - this is the entry hairline. Now place the pen at the waist line and apply pressure to the nib to spread the tines and pull down towards the base line. The stroke should be placed such that it meets the entry hairline halfway down the stroke. Gradually release the pressure on the nib two-thirds of the way down while moving the pen to the right bringing the stroke to a point on the base line directly below the right side of the stroke. This will cause the left side of the stroke to have a curved shape. Now lift the pen for a beat, put it back down and draw the hairline back up to the middle of the x-height, this is the exit hairline.

The dot is placed directly above the ‘i’, halfway between the waistline and the the 1st Ascender line. It is the same thickness at the letter - no more. You can go back and make the top of the starting stroke ‘square’ now. In time, you will learn to square the tops directly at the start of the stroke but there is no need to spend time on it at this time.

It is worth your while to practice this stroke until you can do it without thinking. The best way to do that is to use Mr. Geoff Ford’s method of practising in groups of 5. Here is how you do it:

Write the letter 5 times. Now stop and look at each letter you have drawn and place a tick mark against ones that are good. Now pick the best one and try to replicate or improve on it 5 more times. Repeat.

This process not only take the boredom out of the practice, it helps sharpen the eye in the process. Once you can see what a good letter is, making it well is just a short distance behind.

So when do you know when you have it? When you can consistently make 3-4 out good ones in a group of 5.

Let me see your practice sheet for the 'i' stroke in groups of 5.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on November 26, 2016, 03:54:05 AM
Hi Salaman,

I just recently joined The Flourish Forum.
I've been practicing engrossers for four months using dr. Vitolo's videos and book. At the time I was in a hurry to learn all letters because I couldn't wait to start writing real sentences and make cards for my friends. Looking at my work I got impression I miss some basics so I decided to start from the beginning and learn all letters once again. This is my try, done with oblique holder, leonardt principle EF, Blots Iron Gall and Faber-Castel cold pressed paper.

Looking forward to your critique!

Katja
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on November 28, 2016, 12:19:09 AM
@neriah - welcome to the lessons Katja.

Your previous work shows in your attempt at the group 1 lessons. You have a very nice sense of spacing and a pleasant flow in the lettering.

The only major issue I see is the taper. You start to taper your shaded strokes too early. Most of the strokes start to taper halfway down the x-height. the last 't' on the second line in 'built' is the first good example of a proper taper. All your letters should be like this.

Please upload a second attempt at these letters with this in mind.

Also, it would help me if you can take picture from the top of the page. Even a slight angle skews everything and makes it difficult to read the slant and evaluate the details.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on November 30, 2016, 03:17:09 PM
Salman thank you so much for providing these tutorials and especially for the feedback. I am always eager to improve my lettering.
Ann Shoshkes
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on December 01, 2016, 02:41:19 PM
@SMK - Thank you for your reply.

Here is my second try. I wasn't happy how the first 4 lines looked so I did everything again. I'll start with self critique: It took me some time to figure out where exactly should I lighten the preassure so I divided x height in thirds to help myself. Also, I focused only on that so my spacing, hairlines and slant are a bit off sometimes. Apart from that, I noticed that I have bigger problems with ascenders - when letter is "tall" I tend to start taper too early. I definitely need more practice to learn it the right way this time :)

These are things I see that need further practice. Is there anything I missed?

Best regards,

Katja
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on December 02, 2016, 11:03:32 AM
This have come out nice @neriah. Keep writing.

- Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on December 03, 2016, 08:00:19 AM
Hi Salman,

Here's my first attempt.  A few things:

Nib: I'm using a Nikko G.  I tried with the Hut 101, and, although I love how flexible it felt, it just wasn't holding the ink and I could only get one letter at a time.  Maybe it was how I prepared it; it any event, I'll keep trying to get it right since I really like it.

Ink: I'm using Walnut Ink.  Is it supposed to be more that brownish colour?

Guidelines: A bit too many slant lines for me, but I have a few pages of these, so I will use them up first and then start using another set without so many slants.

The shade lines are a bit thin - I'm thinking maybe a bit more pressure on the nib to get the tines to spread more.  I'll have to experiment with that.  They were a lot wider with the Hunt, though, and I liked that.  The two sets of three that are underlined are the last ones I did, where I started to get more of a feel for the pressure, and moving the pen to the right on the shade stroke.  I liked the lower set of three better.

Chet



Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 03, 2016, 12:56:20 PM
@annshoshkes - welcome to the tutorials Ann.

There is a nice flow to your script that will help with spacing later one. For now, the main issue in this worksheet is the slant. Your letters are too upright i.e. if you draw a line through the main parts of your letters, the slope will be less than the slant lines.

A good method for keeping consistent slant is to make sure the slit in your nib is more or less aligned with the slant lines on the guidesheet as your write. Rotate the paper if they are not aligned, don't change your grip! Also, slide the paper every couple of words as your write keeping the writing space in the 'sweet spot' for you.

I cannot stress the importance of practicing in groups of 5 - don't skimp on it. Make sure you can consistently write a letter well at least 3 out of 5 times before attempting the words.

I will be looking forward to your next upload.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 03, 2016, 01:07:38 PM
@neriah

This is good work Katja.

I am glad to know you are taking a methodical approach to learning Copperplate. Starting the taper too early in longer strokes is a common issue. It is great that you have caught on to it so early.

I think you have pretty much figured out the group-1 letters but I would like to refine just a couple of things before moving on. I am sure you will be able to handle them easily - it is simply a matter of being aware of them.

- Move your pen slightly to the right as you start the taper i.e. when you start decreasing the pressure. This will keep the right side of the shaded stroke in line with the slant causing the left side will taper in with a curve. Your taper is going to the left side (the first 'b' in the second last line shows is most clearly) causing the bottom curves to move to the left. This isn't always the case in your writing but it happens often enough that it should be remedied.

- The loop of the 'j' should come down 1.5 spaces - yours are coming down almost 2 spaces. Also, the counter (inside) shape of the loop should be like a teardrop i.e. the widest part is a little above the bottom of the loop.

- The dot of the 'i' (also called a 'tittle') should be the same height as the top of the 't'. The two dots in 'jilt' should be the same height.

Lets have another go with this group. Please feel free to substitute other words if you are bored with the assigned ones :-)

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 03, 2016, 01:17:44 PM
@Chetwyn Clarke - good to see your work Chet.

I think it will be worth the trouble to figure out the issue with the Hunt nib when writing at this size. It seems to me the nib could use another wash from what you describe. I wash my nibs with toothpaste. Most of the time they work fine after one wash but some nibs do require 2 or even 3 washes before they hold ink properly.

Walnut ink is great for practice. It can be made darker (by adding more crystals if you are using them) or lighter (by adding more water). Use what looks best to you as long as I can make out the letters in the picture :-)

The shades on your letters need to be much thicker than that. Nikko G is a fairly stiff nib and it will be hard to write with it at a 1/4 inch x-height. Your slant is pretty good and the lighter touch needed with the Hunt 101 will help with the shades.

The entry hairline should join the shaded stroke smoothly. This is done by drawing the hairline such that it pretty much matches the slant of the letters by the time it reaches 1/2 x-height where it is supposed to meet the shaded stroke. This stroke has a bit of curve. BTW this applies to the exit hairline as well since that will be the entry hairline for the next letter in the word.

Lets give this another try and see how it goes.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on December 03, 2016, 02:03:33 PM
@SMK thank you so much for looking at my practice sheet - here is my second attempt....I see what you mean about the slant - I tried your suggestion and I think it helped me a lot to focus on that....
Ann
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 03, 2016, 02:38:54 PM
@annshoshkes

The slant is much improved Ann.

Now you can focus on the second suggestion in my feedback (practicing in groups of 5). Don't skimp on it - it will take you about a page or more of one letter to get the hang of it. Start with the 'i' and spend as much time on it as you need as it is the basis for the rest of the letters in this group.

Your hairline in the 'i' stroke is going all the way up to the waist line - it should join the shaded stroke halfway up the x-height. Also, lift your pen at the bottom of the shaded stroke for a beat, then put it down for the exit stroke. The entry and exit strokes should be similar as the exit stroke will be the entry stroke for the next letter.

Make sure you don't start to lift the pen too early. The tapering at the bottom of the stroke should start about 1/3rd x-height above the base line.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on December 05, 2016, 06:04:21 PM
@SMK Thanks for the advice on preparing the nibs.  I took some toothpaste to the Hunt, and it seems to be working better.  I might have to do it once more like you suggested since there are still one or two issues here and there.

The attachment was done with the Hunt.  I've been trying to work on the width of the shades, and the slant of the hairlines like you suggested.  Getting the pressure right started off a bit tricky, but I think as I got to the end I started to get a bit more feel for it. I think the hairlines on the W's might have a bit too much curve as they reach the waistline.

Chet
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 06, 2016, 11:31:48 PM
@Chetwyn Clarke

It looks much better with the Hunt Chet. The last hairline on the 'w' is just fine.

The entry hairline on the 'i' stroke should meet the shaded stroke at about 1/2 x-height. Yours are joining in too low causing an abrupt transition. It takes a little bit of practice to judge the placement of the shaded stroke so keep at it.

Also, watch your slant. The 'i's seem to stand up (i.e. less than the required slant) as you move down the line. It helps if you move the paper after every 1-1.5 inches of writing so the part you are writing on is always in the same spot relative to your body. The goal is to only write in the sweet spot.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on December 07, 2016, 03:58:42 PM
Hi Salman - I am so grateful for your advice! I wanted you to know I am still practicing these forms. I think I may be having trouble when I lift up my pen, and then try to reconnect the lines - but I am working on it... Any additional commentary from you would be most appreciated. Has anyone told you yet that you are an angel?
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on December 12, 2016, 08:03:41 PM
@SMK  I was away for a few days, but I'm back at the desk now.  I've been trying to work on the slants and where my hairlines meet the shades.  Work in progress, but I'll keep at it.  Here's the latest:
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on December 13, 2016, 04:01:54 AM
@SMK thank you for your advice!

I was busy with holiday exchange, finished that so I'm back to regular practice.
This time I circled the letter (or word) which I like the most. My goal was to write at least one of each which looks good to me. Towards the end, I didn't have much time because I had to go to work so "jilt" and "but" were written in a hurry. What I see as a problem are my shaky hairlines, there are variations in width of strokes, ascender loop is inconsistent and I can't figure how to get it right, and stroke of "j" isn't straight - it often goes to the left. I do try to make a straight line but I end up pulling the nib down and to the left.
And one more thing I just noticed when zooming picture is inconsistency in dots of "i" and "j". Sometimes the dots do not have a circle shape ("i" in the third "jilt").

Thanks!

Katja
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 13, 2016, 12:18:15 PM
Hi Salman - I am so grateful for your advice! I wanted you to know I am still practicing these forms. I think I may be having trouble when I lift up my pen, and then try to reconnect the lines - but I am working on it... Any additional commentary from you would be most appreciated.

@annshoshkes - you are on the right track Ann. Keep using the guidesheet though. It helps a lot to write directly on the guidelines.

The lifting of the pen is very slight. You lift it barely off the paper before putting it down and continuing. The purpose of the lift is to break the stroke down so we are not writing letters but drawing strokes. Drawing of the strokes is much easier and more accurate than writing letters :-)

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Has anyone told you yet that you are an angel?

Thank you for saying that Ann. I have been trying to convince my wife of the same but she maintains that I am nearer the opposite end of the spectrum   ::)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 13, 2016, 12:21:59 PM
@SMK  I was away for a few days, but I'm back at the desk now.  I've been trying to work on the slants and where my hairlines meet the shades.  Work in progress, but I'll keep at it.  Here's the latest:

@Chetwyn Clarke - this is nice work Chet. Several of the 't's are nicely shaped. Interestingly, you seem to have better control of the longer stroke in the 't' than the shorter 'i'. This can only be a good thing as usually it is the longer stroke that people struggle with.

The loop of the 'j' is teardrop shaped i.e. the widest part is a little higher than the lowest point of the loop. Yours are too rounded at the bottom.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 13, 2016, 12:42:52 PM
@neriah - you have a very good eye Katja. The words and letters you have circled are indeed well done - this is excellent work.

The loop of the 'j' looks unbalanced because the hairline part of the letter is coming too far to the left at the bottom. The bottom of the loop should be slightly pointy and the thickest part is about 1/3rd of the way from the bottom of the stroke. This gives the loop a teardrop shape and it will appear more balanced. The tapering shade stroke is done correctly.

I cannot stress the groups of 5 exercise enough. It helps train the eye and develops consistency. My goal is usually getting at least 4 out of 5 good ones but even 3 is pretty good. I find it helps me to do a session of these every couple of months - it keeps any bad habits (shortcuts) from becoming too permanent.

Lets see the exercise words written out in your next upload.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on December 13, 2016, 11:02:52 PM
@SMK   Thanks Salman!  Started working on the j's and two of the words.  Here is my 30 minutes for today:



Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 14, 2016, 12:38:07 AM
@Chetwyn Clarke

Good work Chet - keep an eye on that slant (you might want to rotate the paper counter-clockwise a little).

The loop of the 'j' is starting to look much better. Make the hairline part a bit flatter as it approaches the base line - this will thin out the top part of the teardrop shape giving it a better balance. The second last 'j' has the teardrop shape right even though the slant is off.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on December 14, 2016, 08:07:09 PM
@SMK   I've been working on rotating the paper; I think in one or two cases I might have rotated it a hair too much.    I've tried a bit on the j's in this attempt:

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on December 16, 2016, 04:29:21 AM
@SMK thank you again for your advice, you're helping me a lot! There are many things I wouldn't be able to notice without your help.

This time I focused on letter "j" so I started with it and then word "jilt". I'm missing two words in my practice, "ill" and "but". I didn't have more time this morning and I wanted to practice so this is what I managed to do :)

I think some of the shaky hairlines from my last upload came from nib that was worn-out. I still don't know how to tell if the nib should be replaced, but I tried with new Principal EF and it is so much easier to write.

Second "j" in the last series of 5 was an experiment - I tried to draw a teardrop instead of looking at it as a letter, just to see the shape. I did it as a down stroke just to try to approximate the shape that is why is so thick. I still have much work to do on that ascender loop but I think I'm closer to the right shape now.

As to other practice words - I tend to lose focus, my first word usually looks the best and the more I repeat it the more mistakes I make. For example, second "jilt" has wrong slant, I started writing "built" but wrote "l" instead of "b" and gave up on that try, etc. And I still have problem with thick strokes, sometimes I find it hard to keep even pressure when doing these long lines.

Katja
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 16, 2016, 05:26:31 PM
@Chetwyn Clarke - keep up the good work Chet.

In addition to working on the 'j', keep an eye on the weight of your shaded strokes. They should be uniform in thickness all the way down to where you start to taper them.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 16, 2016, 05:40:24 PM
@neriah - nice work Katja. Your systematic approach to learning Copperplate will stand you in good stead. Your observations help me a lot in guiding you where you need help.

As for noticing new things, this is where I believe most of learning Calligraphy happens. While one would expect the skill of the hand to be the primary focus of learning a craft like this, I believe it is the 'knowing' of what makes good letters and layout that differentiates a good scribe from the rest. I try to focus on this aspect of the learning more than anything else in my lessons. I am glad you are benefiting from this.

When making the longer strokes, it helps to look at the 'destination' rather than your pen as it is moving. Place the pen at the starting point, apply pressure to make the shad and look at the base line where you want the stroke to end as soon as you start drawing it. It will take a little getting used to but you will get the hang of it if you do it with a bit of confidence.

The 'j' in the last two 'jilts' before the 'build' is just right. That should be your target. Knowing you can do it so well should give you confidence.

You are losing your slant a little on the last line but I guess you were a bit tired by that time :-)

I will be looking forward to your next attempt.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on December 17, 2016, 05:41:33 AM
@SMK - looking at the destination really helps. It is a bit weird but I notice I don't think about thickness of my stroke, it just happens.

I used different paper now, Navigator ultra smooth printer paper. It really is smooth but it has 2 sides and I printed guidelines on the wrong one so guidelines smeared and my nib was catching so much paper that thin hairlines become impossible to achieve :(

I finished practice on this paper, by the time I realized it has two sides I was writing my last row.

The row of "but" was paper/ink troubleshooting, just ignore it. And first four "jilt" as well.

I underlined 3 of each words that I like the best. I find doing more than one group of 5 words bit too much for a single practice, even 5 of each word gets me a bit tired :)

As to other things, I think I understend the concepts of this group of letters now, I don't see any new problems. I still have consistency problems, shaky hairlines and spacing and slant get lost when I lose focus. But I know tese things improve with practice.

Thanks!

Katja

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on December 17, 2016, 08:04:08 AM
@SMK  Thanks, Salman.  Your advice has been great so far!  The practice sheet has two parts: yesterday's practice and this morning's "Saturday fun".  Yesterday I was trying to work on getting the hairlines and shades to join around midway; sometimes I still join too low.  This morning was incorporating your latest suggestions about the width of the hairlines, trying to get the spacing between the letters right, and having a bit of fun with words.  I don't know if you have come across this, but if anyone needs ideas about different words using the groups of letters we are practicing, I found http://www.litscape.com/word_tools/words_made_from.php (http://www.litscape.com/word_tools/words_made_from.php) to be quite useful - just add all 6 letters and it gives you a great list.

Chet
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 23, 2016, 02:25:16 PM
@neriah - this is looking good Katja. You have developed a good eye early in the game along with developing very good control. This will make the subsequent groups much easier to grasp.

Please continue to practice and upload the assigned words when you are happy with them. I will be looking forward to it.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 23, 2016, 02:29:11 PM
@Chetwyn Clarke - that is a very useful link Chet. I will add it to the starting post so it doesn't get buried in the thread.

Please continue to work on the items I have already pointed out - consistency of shade along the long strokes, starting the taper at 1/3rd x-height above the base line, the shape of the counter of the 'j' and making sure you lift your pen at the base line for a beat before continuing to draw the connecting stroke.

Do use the groups of 5 to analyze your work before moving on. This method is very helpful in developing a good eye.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on December 24, 2016, 06:30:16 AM
Thanks for sharing @Chetwyn Clarke. There are few other sites which gives you the same result. Just Google Word finder and you will have them handy. Keep postinf

- Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on January 02, 2017, 09:29:11 PM
Salman I've finally circled back to this lesson, hopefully much improved. In reviewing my letters I see that my J's are very inconsistent. Any advice with the "j"?
Thanks so much, Ann
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on January 03, 2017, 08:08:37 AM
Well done Ann. I guess you are keeping the guide sheets below your actual worksheet. Or are you not using them at all.

-Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on January 03, 2017, 10:52:51 AM
Good morning Salman - I have the guide sheet underneath but thought you might want to see the guides so I completed another set last night - my printer paper picks up a lot of fibers when I write directly on it....
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: sarthina on January 03, 2017, 02:28:12 PM
Hi, Ann. Sorry for jumping in - I sure am not a specialist, but there is one thing I can tell for sure: regular printer paper is not good. Especially when starting learning this beautiful art. At first I thought it will work anyway, but very soon after that I discovered that I have to get some quality paper. Now all my practice is done on Herlitz notebooks (with printed grid beneath). I am not recommending this particular brand for you to use. I'm just saying you should invest in some quality paper. For me this was the first step (then came the ink and nibs - well, at about the same time  :) ).
Keep practicing and ...enjoy.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on January 03, 2017, 03:40:10 PM
Sarthina your comments are much appreciated! I currently use a pad by Borden and Riley - but I think I will search for a printer paper that is smooth so I can write directly on the guide sheets as Salman has suggested. You are right but this is a beautiful art and someday I promise myself I will be good! :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 03, 2017, 11:14:05 PM
Hi All,
 I started working on this tutorial last week and am hoping to get some advice on some issues I'm having. Looking on the second line with "till"s on the attached picture. Here's what I'm seeing, but of course I may be missing the root cause of my problems:

On the bright side this is a lot better than my first practice sheet of "i"s (I'll spare you), and also I feel like I keep a pretty consistent slant... except when I realize I'm way off for connecting my shade with hairline and then instinctively move to connect them better (hence the bowed "l"s).

Those are my feelings / observations, please let me know what you see - thank you!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: prasad on January 04, 2017, 03:30:17 AM
Great job so far Brad.  Salman will give you the correct feedback on what to focus on.  I am going to give you some beginners cheats :)

Hi All,
  • my shade widths are pretty inconsistent, especially I notice my "i" is consistently thiner than my "t" and "l".
I have this problem too.  Its just practise and more practise that gets it consistent. Just have to pause, spread the tines to the width you want then start the downstroke keeping same pressure.  It helps to do this....  before you start the downstroke, draw a small horizontal line to the width you like,  from left to right.  Keep nib at right side and apply pressure till the left tine moves to cover that line you drew, and maintaining that pressure do the down stroke. 

  • I have a hard time connecting the hairline and the shade... like in the 4th "till" those are some pretty big gaps in the "ill" and also I have bleeding issues like in the third "till" when I do get a bit too close (possibly this part of the issue is that in the 3rd word that shade is really thick). Are there any tricks to connecting the hairline and shade?
I realised in copperplate, there is lot of hiding of lines.  What I do for the connections (still a cheat and probably not the right way ;)  )
For the "i" continue the connector like you would for a "v" Don't stop the connector at half height.  extend it a bit more with a slight flick, so that the end does not have a small spot of wet ink. DO the above mentioned thing for the downstroke, making sure that as you come down you cover a little bit of the connector.  The swell covers the thin and it looks ok.


  • my tappering of my shades is not smooth a lot of the time.. it's like really thick and then bam it's thin like in the very first "t" on second line - I feel like this could also be related to how hard I'm pushing on the shade.. sometimes the nib feels like it springs closed as soon as I ease a little bit.
This just takes practise to release the pressure of the spread tines consistently till the end.  TO get a feel of the pressure what I did was draw the letter with a pencil at about 8 mm height.  I draw the double lines to get what the shade should be like.  Then use the nib to fill it in with the swell. Making sure the tines follow the pencil marks.  Makes sense ?  Works best with a nib not dipped in ink, so you can see the Tine movement.

Will try to make an image of this if what I said doesn't make sense  :)

Keep at it.
Happy writing
-Prasad[/list]
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Empty_of_Clouds on January 04, 2017, 04:34:38 AM
Um... somewhat shamefaced about not practising more (or even at all lately), so thought I'd give Master Salman's lessons a try. Today was first day. Forget about anything I thought I knew. Start from the beginning.

Anyway, I have a question for Salman (or anyone else who may want to pick this up).  What is the learning path here? What I mean is, do we do the drills in lesson #1 every day until we are satisfied with our own improvement before going on to the next lesson? Or do we do lesson #1 today, then tomorrow repeat lesson #1 and add lesson #2, and so on?

I hope that makes some kind of sense.  I guess I am really asking how long - in a general kind of way - should I stick to a single lesson.

By the way, many thanks Master Salman for taking the time to put this series together.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on January 04, 2017, 04:37:35 AM
Hi Brad,

Prasad was quick enough to give you some valuable tips.
My 2 cents on the worksheets. Start with the basics before you start writing words. (This applies in the 20min work time you dedicated to yourself) rest of the time have fun.
This will build muscle memory and allow you to understand the letter forms. As Prasad said Salman will provide you with detailed input and method.
I think if you follow your new year's resolution I think you will see  substantial difference in your writing. :D

Keep writing,
-Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on January 04, 2017, 04:48:25 AM
Do we do the drills in lesson #1 every day until we are satisfied with our own improvement before going on to the next lesson? Or do we do lesson #1 today, then tomorrow repeat lesson #1 and add lesson #2, and so on?

Adding up here till Salman replies back.
IMHO its better to stick to Lesson #1 until you have build muscle memory and have engraved the letter form in your head.
The lesson are designed in such a way that the first lesson forms the base to all the other alphabets that will follow in the next lesson subsequently (mostly)
So the stronger your base the quicker you will move ahead. Now its up to individual how quickly they learn the lessons.

In my case some lessons I learned in a day and some took more. The thumb rule is, the more you practice the early you learn. :D
Please feel free to ask if you have any doubts.

Keep writing,
-Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 04, 2017, 07:31:29 AM
Thanks for the tip Prasad - seems very helpful, and I will try it tonight when I practice.
Ashok, thanks for the encouragement. I will continue working on my letters tonight. I will probably end up posting my "i"s later this week - especially since I am so new I really do not have the confidence to know when a letter is  pretty good or not. even if I think it's OK, it's hard for me to know if I'm looking at the sample letters correctly. So that does make applying the group of 5 technique a little challenging for me. I guess this is where having immediate feedback from an in person teacher would be so valuable.

Thanks again :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 04, 2017, 01:32:28 PM
Thank you for stepping in @prasad and @ash0kgiri - your feedback is spot on and very helpful.

@sarthina - your advice about using good quality paper is just excellent. When we spend so much time on practice, we are doing ourselves a disservice if we use less than the best materials and tools we can get our hands on.

I try to get back to these lessons at least once a week but that doesn't always work out if the weekend is a busy one. This week and the upcoming weekend are shaping up to be rather hectic. Also, I will be teaching a Copperplate workshop this Saturday - that is something I am looking forward to.

S.


Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 04, 2017, 01:46:07 PM
@annshoshkes - thank you for writing on the guidelines Ann. It does help me to see the guidelines but not to the degree that I would subject you to writing on less than friendly paper. Please continue to write on your pad until you can get better paper to print the guidelines.

- The first thing that jumps out to me is the slant. Your slant is a bit, well less slanted :-) This is usually a sign of the paper orientation needing a small adjustment. In your case, you might find it easier to maintain the slant if you turn the paper counter-clockwise a little. A good check is the see if the slit in the nib is aligned with the slant lines on the guide.

- The shades on longer letters are not uniform. It is just a matter of practice until you develop the control to draw them properly. It helps to keep your eye on the 'destination' as you draw your 'l's, 'b's and 't's i.e. after you place your nib at the top of the letter, apply pressure and look at where you want to end up and confidently draw your stroke. Try to relax your body as you do that.

- The counter of the 'j' is tear-drop shaped which means the widest part is a little bit above the lowest point of the bowl. As you draw the shaded stroke of the 'j', taper off as you move below the base line while moving the pen very slightly to the right coming to a hairline by the 1st descender line. This will create a wedge shape that tapers on the left side keeping the right side aligned with the slant. Now draw the rest of the bowl with just a hairline stroke keeping the tear-drop shape in mind.

Your 'i's and 'u's need a bit more work so keep at it. You are making progress in ways that don't yet show on paper.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 04, 2017, 02:04:35 PM
@brd4790

Good to see you join in Brad. I am impressed with your methodical approach - this, more than anything else guarantees your success.

You have received good advice from Prasad and are already working on the exercises so I will just comment on items you have already noted.

1. Inconsistent shade width. I agree with Prasad in that it will get easier with practice. Making thick shades with stiff nibs is harder though. You lose accuracy as you apply more force. Nikko G is an excellent nib but requires a bit too much force to produce shades needed for 1/4 inch x-heights.

2. Connectors bleeding in or too far. Don't worry about it just yet. This will get much better with time almost automatically as you start to get a better sense of spacing. I like Prasad's advice about moving the hairline a bit higher. That trick might not work with all inks but is still worth a shot IMO.

3. Inconsistent taper. This is also something that will get easier with practice but I suspect your choice of nib is making it a little harder. Since you need to apply significant force to produce a wide shade, reducing that force to nothing in 1/3rd x-height is hard to control.

I will be looking forward to your next upload.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on January 04, 2017, 02:08:41 PM
This is my try from today. I didn't have much time to practice during last few weeks, but when I did, I mostly focused on single letters practicing a group of 5. Apart from that, I was just practicing long downstrokes and hairlines. This attempt still has some imperfections but I can live with those for now.
I think that my control of thickness in the long lines improved and some of the shakiness from my hairlines is gone.

@SMK - can I go to the next group now? Repeating these 7 letters over and over again has become a little boring for me now. But in case my future progress will benefit from repeating them a bit more I'll find a way to make it less boring :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 04, 2017, 02:25:17 PM
Um... somewhat shamefaced about not practising more (or even at all lately), so thought I'd give Master Salman's lessons a try. Today was first day. Forget about anything I thought I knew. Start from the beginning.

Anyway, I have a question for Salman (or anyone else who may want to pick this up).  What is the learning path here? What I mean is, do we do the drills in lesson #1 every day until we are satisfied with our own improvement before going on to the next lesson? Or do we do lesson #1 today, then tomorrow repeat lesson #1 and add lesson #2, and so on?

I hope that makes some kind of sense.  I guess I am really asking how long - in a general kind of way - should I stick to a single lesson.


Glad you have you join us @Empty_of_Clouds :-)

The plan is indeed to work on each group until one gains competence before moving to the next. The first 3 groups have letters based on basic strokes. I believe it is easier to develop skill when we work in a series of exercises with a narrow focus.

The goal for each letter is to be able to draw at least 3 good ones in a group of 5. After you are done with all the letters in a group, you move to the assigned words. When you are happy with your work, you upload the assigned words for assessment. BTW - please feel free to upload a practice sheet and ask for feedback if you need help along the way :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Empty_of_Clouds on January 04, 2017, 03:43:22 PM
Thank you, Master Salman, and for others who also addressed my question.

This practice is a new habit for me this year. My intention is to do 30 minutes of practice per day. 

At this point, one day in (I was away for the first 3 days), I am far too shy to post an example.  Today (5th Jan here) I will print out guidelines on some nice paper.

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 04, 2017, 04:17:01 PM
@Empty_of_Clouds - great to hear that. I will be looking forward to your joining us.

Thank you so much for the honorific of Master. I greatly appreciate the gesture, and as much as I would love to be called that someday, at present I consider myself just approaching competence. (hmmm... that has a nice ring to it too 'The Barely Competent Calligrapher'  :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 04, 2017, 04:24:51 PM
@neriah - you are almost there Katja.

There are just a couple of tweaks that you can work on while practicing group 2.

- The finishing stroke of the 'w' in 'will' is a good one and should be used for 'b' too.
- The pointy part of the bowl of the 'j' should be a bit to the left so the letter appears more balanced.
- Move the pen very slightly more to the right when tapering your shaded strokes. This will bring the lowest point of the letter a bit closer to the middle of the letter and they will look better balanced.
- The shade can be a bit lighter i.e. not so thick. This is more a personal thing so stick with what you have if you like it best but experiment with a lighter shade too :-)

As for getting bored, these lessons are for your 'practice time' and should be about half an hour a day, or at a time if you want to practice multiple times a day. The rest of the time is for playing, writing envelopes etc. so please feel free to write other letters and play with flourishing etc. The more your write, the better your control of the pen.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 04, 2017, 08:37:38 PM
Thank you Salman. I have ordered some of the nibs you recommend, which I should receive tomorrow. I'm hopeful that I will have more control with these, and I will go back to mastering the "i" based on the feedback I've received here. I'd like to submit an acceptable practice sheet of "i"s before moving on, because it will give me more confidence.
Thank you so much  8)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 04, 2017, 08:51:13 PM
Hi @prasad, looking more closely at your advice I see you say in quote below "slight flick"
... Don't stop the connector at half height.  extend it a bit more with a slight flick, so that the end does not have a small spot of wet ink.

do you mean flick of the wrist? I've realized while writing in this style I do not move my wrist or hands at all.. rather the movement comes from my shoulder / elbow (strange because I normally do write with my hand / wrist... but I do draw with shoulder / elbow movement typically). Now is this incorrect? should I be using my wrist? looking back at Erica's tutorial I see in the video she uses her wrist quite a bit.

Thank you.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 04, 2017, 08:55:55 PM
Brad - I think the goal of Prasad's technique is to have the nib leave the paper similar to an airplane taking off. This can be achieved either by a flick of the wrist (which I don't recommend for other reasons) or just a smooth lift off the page using the whole arm. This leaves the hairline devoid of any extra ink thereby reducing the chances of ink flowing back into it when the shaded stroke connects to it.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 04, 2017, 08:59:02 PM
ok i see thank you Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on January 04, 2017, 10:02:36 PM
Hi Salman - I will work on your suggestions - but I have a quick questions - do the letters l and b receive a loop in the ascender in later lessons or are they always written without the loop?
Ann
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 04, 2017, 10:06:56 PM
Hi Ann - I did not include the looped ascenders in these lessons on purpose. I do plan on a couple of 'advanced' topics after the majuscules which will include these. In essence, the looped ascenders are the same as the looped descenders so feel free do try them out :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on January 05, 2017, 03:46:16 AM
@SMK - thank you for your feedback!

Ah, 30 minutes explains it, I sometimes go 1 hour+ with just these letters. I'll give it another go having in mind tips you just gave me :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Empty_of_Clouds on January 05, 2017, 04:22:41 AM
Just noticed something.  I went back and re-read the first post about what nibs were recommended.  I've been using a Zebra G. Partly because I don't have any of the nibs listed (and it will be weeks before any will get here) and partly because my flange is set for the G nib and I am not confident in adjusting it for, say, Cementee 2552 nibs (of which I have a box full, and are softer than the Gs).

Is the G going to hold me back significantly?
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 05, 2017, 04:49:28 AM
I recommend the Hunt 101 (or nibs with similar degree of flex) because of the rather large x-height we use for the minuscules.

The Zebra G is a bit more flexible than the Nikko and Tachikawa variants. I just tried it and I can write at 1/4 inch x-height with it. It takes more force than a Hunt 101 to produce the shades of require thickness but it is quite usable. It might take you half a page longer to develop the required consistency but I don't it will hold you back much.

Have you tried the 2552 in your holder? Sometimes they will fit a holder set up for a G nib. Don't force it if they don't fit - a Zebra G will work fine.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on January 05, 2017, 11:49:14 AM
Hi Salman, I have been working on my slant and I switched to a Zebra nib and I think I've made some improvement - hope you agree!
Hope you are having a wonderful day.
Annie
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 05, 2017, 03:35:14 PM
@annshoshkes  - you have definitely gotten the hang of using a flexible nib. Now its time to work on refining the letter shapes.

Here are a couple of things to work on:

- You are writing the whole letter in one go i.e. the shaded stroke goes into a hairline in one stroke. Also, I suspect you are writing it fairly quickly. This results in the letters being a bit too wide. I don't mind the speed, or the single stroke, but it helps to just make the shaded stroke, lift the pen for a beat and then draw the hairline. This way, you are not writing letters but just drawing a series of strokes. This technique results in very good control - especially when you need to write two of the same letter in a word. What I would like to see is an 'i' that is half as wide as it is tall. The width of the 'i' strokes in the example above are about 3/4'ths of the height.

- It is time to start squaring the tops i.e. after you write a shaded stroke, go back and make the top of the stroke 'square' i.e. the top should be parallel to the base and waist lines and the edges sharp. This is on a tiny scale but you'll get the hang of it. One thing to watch out for is to keep your 'i' strokes no higher than the waist line - it is really easy to make them too tall when squaring them up.

- The shaded strokes need to be uniform. A number of the longer strokes in your exercise taper along their entire length resulting in wedge shaped shades. The shaded stroke should be uniform all the way from the top to just 1/3 x-height above the base line. The tapering takes place in just this last bit.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on January 06, 2017, 03:28:52 PM
Hi Salman, this lesson is proving more difficult than I ever imagined! and yet its only the first one! I have tried to absorb all of your comments - slope, width of letters, square tops, uniform longer strokes. I hope you see some progress!
Thanks for looking at my humble work
Ann
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: annshoshkes on January 09, 2017, 10:48:56 AM
Morning Salman - happy Monday! I hope I have made enough progress and you feel I can continue on to Group 2?
Hope you had a great weekend!

Ann
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 09, 2017, 04:47:02 PM
@annshoshkes - Hi Ann, you have indeed made very good progress. The first lessons is the hardest by far. You are not only learning the letter forms but also coming to terms with your tools. It makes for a steep learning curve and can be sometimes a bit frustrating. You are making progress in ways that don't necessarily show on paper just yet but keep at it and you will see the results pretty soon.

There is just a little bit more to do with this group. Please feel free to play with all the other letters but work on this group once or twice a day for 20-30 minutes. It helps if you focus on one or two elements to practice for each session. You will be able to see improvement with each passing day.

Also, I am giving you feedback piecemeal. This is because some elements will not be applicable until you get others right. A big part of learning any Calligraphic hand is understanding the underlying structure and 'seeing' the core elements that make up a good execution. This takes a bit of time.

A couple of things this time:

- Now that you have better control of the pen, it is time to start working on the shape of the letters. The width of an x-height letter (i, u, w) should be half its height. Your letters are too wide - almost square.

- The shade width is more consistent now - well done. However, you start to taper off a bit too early. The taper starts almost as soon as you pass the halfway point in the x-height - hold that shade just a bit longer. The first stroke of the 'w' in the last 'wilt' is a good example.

- It seems to me you are still making the letters in one stroke most of the time. This might be contributing to too much rounding at the bottom turns. Study the examples provided a bit more closely and you will see what I mean.

- The shade at the end of the 'b' (and 'w') that connects to the next letter is supposed to be inside the second counter space - study the examples provided for this.

I will be looking forward to your next post.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: liavarm on January 09, 2017, 09:12:43 PM
@SMK : Hi Salman!! Happy to join your tutorials. Here is my first attempt at group 1. Thanks for the effort you have put in your tutorials, everything is very detailed and well explained :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on January 12, 2017, 04:27:00 AM
@SMK - practice from this morning. Things stopped being boring now when I write other letters and words besides those practice sheets. Now I can go with this practice as long as necessary :)

I think I finally understand how to form a proper "j". I need more practice getting consistency but I believe I figured it out. I printed out this exemplar: http://www.zanerian.com/ZanerScEx.jpg and measured various things with ruler. So if I'm right, downstroke is wedge shaped, it ends just before the middle descender line and it is done so that the right tine forms a straight line while downstroke narrows on the left side. From there loop is formed by first pulling just a bit down and then down and to the left so that it extends half the x-height and then it curves back to the base line. The widest part of the loop is around middle descender line and it should be as wide as letter "o" (in this case, same as spacing between letters). Did I get it correctly? I find it hard to draw the letter if I don't understand every aspect of it.

I paid close attention to things you pointed out in your last comment. I do pull a bit more to the right when doing taper and letters look better now. But I still sometimes forget to pull right (b in first built). Now when I pull more to the right I find it much easier to do a better finishing stroke for letter "b". Apart from that, I tried ascender loops. I find double "l" to be impossible :)

I also experimented with stroke thickness and I prefer a bit lighter stroke from the one I used earlier. I read somewhere that it should be 1/5 of the x-height. Is that true? And width of the letters is 1/2 of the x-height? Ascender and descender loops are 1.5 x-height? What about t, d? I got a bit confused with proportions of the letters because earlier I watched dr. Vitolo's videos and his ascender and descender loops are almost 2 x-heights and t and d go to the first ascender line. But when looking at Zaner's exemplar, loops are closer to 1.5 x-height but t and d go up to first ascender line. Lines aren't visible on the link but I printed it out and draw guidelines on it to see proportions of the letters. Do copperplate and engrosser's differ a lot when it comes to proportions of the letters?

Thank you!

Katja
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on January 12, 2017, 09:54:23 AM
Hi @neriah,

This is really good :D.
And its good that you are judging your own work. So the learning process is in place. Nice!
The 'w' is very consistent across. Bravo... the shade is equal, slant is perfect and the spacing is correct. The tops are squared :D :D

Over to Salman for expert comments.

Keep writing,
-Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: sarthina on January 12, 2017, 09:58:19 AM
Hi @neriah - I couldn't hold myself to say your script looks really good. I like it.
It is not the answer(s) you are expecting since you have quite a lot of questions ( :D ) and I am not able to answer all of them. What I want to say is: this is exactly what I did when I started this type of calligraphy. Also looked closely to Baird's letters and did the same with measuring lines, widths, slants etc. "Study as much as you practice" - they say - and I think this is the way. So I like to see you are studying...
I'm sure Salman will bring some light on most of your uncertainties and will guide you through. As far as I know, the height of ascenders / descenders differ from artist to artist and I think it's all a matter of preference (I hope I'm right), and in the end consistency is what matters and the balance of the whole (please someone right me if I'm wrong).
And I also draw lighter shades  :) though sometimes I see members here with thick shades and get concerned whether mine are OK or not... Anyway, keep practicing. And studying.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on January 12, 2017, 10:10:24 AM
@ash0kgiri, @sarthina thank you for your comments!

I noticed that difference between height of ascenders/descenders, that is why I got a bit confused. I'd like to know what is the standard and what are interpretations.

And it's good to know I'm not the only one printing and measuring other people's letters :D
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 15, 2017, 01:23:39 PM
Hi Salman and group, is it OK if I practice at a larger x-height? I practiced some with Dr. Vitolo's 3/8 inch guidelines from his book and I find this much more comfortable and easier to control. I'm using hunt 101 nib which I think can accommodate this size. Please let me know if this is ok to do this tutorial at that size. Thanks!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: sarthina on January 15, 2017, 02:40:52 PM
Hi. I guess that x-height is good (though it looks very big for me) as Salman advised us to start at bigger x-height (my practice sheets are at 7.5 mm or 8 mm which I found to be about 19/64 inches).
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 15, 2017, 04:02:42 PM
ok, thanks Sarthina - mine is a bit larger at 9.5 mm, but not too bad :P

Here is some practice I did on this for "i" and "l", and then later I did some "l", "b", & "w"... I still see lots of room for improvement here. I feel that I struggle much more with the "i" & "w" than with the "l" & "b". Since I realize there is a lot to improve on this, I'm mostly looking for encouragement to confirm if I'm on the right track.. if there's anything really off base here or other advice you think is helpful at this point, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!

The good news is that I feel like my practice is finally starting to be productive. I read in Dr. Vitolo's book how to adjust the oblique holder and align the paper correctly, and that has made a huge difference along with raising my chair a bit so that my shoulder can relax.  Overall practice much more enjoyable and productive for me (I think :P)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 15, 2017, 10:53:04 PM
@liavarm -  it is great to have you join the lessons. This is good work for a first attempt.

Here are some pointers:

- I like that your slant is well controlled. Some of the 'w's are a bit too upright but that can be fixed by rotating the paper counter-clockwise a bit until the slant line is more or less in line with the slit in the nib. It is useful to make a habit of it to check this every once in a while.

- Try to keep the shade width contstand throughout the stroke until the taper-off point. This is a third of the x-height above the baseline. Some of your letter do have a consistent shade so just a bit more practice will get you there.

- Once you have drawn a shaded stroke, go back and 'square off' the top. This is delicate work and often makes the letter a bit too long. You will get the hang of it by the end of this lesson.

- The little dot at the end of the 'b' and the 'w' should come down 1/3rd of the x-height. This creates better balance as well as makes the join to the next letter a bit easier.

- The bowl of the 'j' shoudl close just slightly below the base line. Yours are closing a bit too early causing the exit hairline to start below the base line and upsetting the flow of the letters.

I think these are enough to work through for a bit. I will be looking forward to your next submission.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 15, 2017, 11:09:16 PM
@neriah

You got the 'j' figured absolutely correctly Katja. The shade should taper to the right and turn into a hairline by the 1st descender line. The rest of the bowl is drawn with a hairline. The widest part is indeed about the 1st descender line with gives it a pleasant teardrop shape. The width of the bowl can be as wide as an 'o' but I prefer it to be a bit thinner. Incidentally, the looped ascenders are just flipped over 'j' strokes so the same proportions work there too :-)

The width of the shade is recommended to be 1/5th of the width of the letter (not x-height). The width is indeed half the length. It is important to note that the length of a letter is just slightly longer than the x-height due to the slant :-)

The classic proportions of the ascenders and descenders to x-height is 3:2:3 i.e. the ascenders and descenders are 1.5 times the x-height. The 't' and 'd', however, have slightly smaller x-heights and are never drawn with a loop (obviously :-)

There is a slight difference in the proportions and execution of the letters between Copperplate and Engrosser's script. In classic Copperplate, the shades taper in and out in about 1/4 of the x-height. This slight change can give your script a very different appearance. Also, the letters in Copperplate are narrower and usually do not have looped ascenders. However, it is more in the execution than in letter forms in my opinion. I have tried to find a middle ground between the very formal Engrosser's script and the 'almost handwriting' Copperplate in these lessons. The tools we are using now are vastly different than the ones used for the original Copperplate so it makes sense to me to adapt the script a little and benefit from the tools rather than just emulate what we see as historic examples. This could easily turn into a much longer rant so I will stop here in the hope that I have at least clarified my point of view :-)

Since my lessons do not include the looped ascenders/descenders (yet), I will base my feedback on the first line only. Your letters look really good structure wise. The longer strokes are a little unsure so watch out for that. You are ready to move to the next group.

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 15, 2017, 11:13:52 PM
@brd4790 - welcome to the lessons Brad. There is encouragement enough for you on that practice sheet. This is very good work indeed. You have nicely balanced shades and nice graceful the turns at the baseline - well done.

I think your 'b's and 'l's will benefit from moving the pen slightly to the right as you begin to taper off. You have done this very nicely with the 'i's on the first line.

Write the 'w' as just two 'i' strokes. Try to break down your writing to strokes so you are not thinking of letters. This will give you better control of your script and it will flow well too.

Keep working - I will be looking forward to your next submission.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 15, 2017, 11:25:56 PM
Great, thank you Salman - I will continue practice with more confidence now :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on January 17, 2017, 04:26:31 AM
@SMK - thank you for the feedback and answers to my questions. Explanation you provided is the answer I was hoping to get!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 17, 2017, 09:31:15 PM
Hi Salman and/or Prasad, Ashok and/or others, :)
  I felt I was ready to practice the words today, and would love to get your thoughts on this. The 1st line was my warm up and I feel the spacing was way off, which I think I gradually corrected by the 3rd line. However, by that line I was quite tired and my tapering suffered on some letters. Still I feel it is a pretty decent effort - even with the typos ;)
I draw these very slow. This sheet took me 20-30 minutes, and I'm very tired after this.
I think I will alternate days of practicing letters one day and words the next, and try to submit the words next week.
Do you also recommend practicing the words in groups of 5? This seemed very time consuming to me, because maybe I am just too slow at drawing to do groups of 5s on these words.
Please let me know if you think this makes sense, or if you have another suggestion.
Thank you so much!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: prasad on January 20, 2017, 04:27:59 AM
Very very good improvement.  You seem to have caught on what to critique all by yourself :)  I'll let Salman get into the details.  Just to say that this is great work.

Practise whatever makes you feel comfortable.  Today can be 2, tomorrow 3 and it will get up to 50 too.  I found that pressurising myself to complete a certain amount everyday made the writing worse.  Stop when you feel tired. 

Happy writing
Prasad
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 20, 2017, 07:36:53 AM
Thank you prasad! And thanks for the tips about practice. I think you're right on this, especially as I'm in no hurry and really want to enjoy this - after all this is my fun hobby not my work ;)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on January 22, 2017, 12:46:06 PM
Hi @brd4790,

This is wonderful progress indeed. Been your own critique is very important and it shows that you are learning and not just writing. :D Keep it up.

As you rightly said the spacing is improved in the third line. The slant is consistent. The stroke width is just perfect for the height and pleasing to the eye. I personally like 'will' in the third line. The arc at the bottom of the letters are consistent and at the right place. Make sure the dots on the 'i' is halfway between the 1st Ascender and waistline.You will need a little more work on 'j'. In your case its starts to get thinner too early and it inclined too much on the left. I think it should be a little less. Because of which it looks like the letter is tilted more on the right.

Also you should try and lift the nib with every hairline upstroke.

Hush.... This is my first detailed comments / feedback on this forum. Salman, my apologies if I have gone wrong anywhere. Over to you.

- Ashok

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 22, 2017, 02:28:11 PM
Thank you Ashok! I see what you mean on the j - I'll work on that tonight! Amazingly I never noticed how inconsistently placed my dots are... now it seems so obvious especially from a zoomed out view.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 22, 2017, 02:46:47 PM
@brd4790

This is good work Brad.

I agree with Ashok on the 'j' loop tilting to the left - the tapering looks fine to me though. The shape of the counter (the inside space) is very nicely done. You will get a more balanced letter if you move the tapered part to the right a bit as you move below the base line. There is a good explanation of how to form this letter by Katja (neriah) - with my comments a bit later - on the previous page.

I see several letters have multiple starts at the bottom turns. I am not sure why that is. You should stop at the baseline every time and lift the pen just a hair before continuing with the exit hairline. This will break down your letters into strokes so you are no longer writing an 'i' but just making a shaded stroke followed by a hairline connector. Seeing letters (and words) as a series of strokes will make your script more consistent.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 22, 2017, 04:01:38 PM
Thank you @SMK . RE: the multiple starts of the hairline, it is because I was trying to correct the shape... I'm trying to stop doing that. I currently do not write with any flow at all.. I draw the shade,  then pick up my pen completely... I maybe wait for 3-5 seconds before drawing the hair line... because I'm thinking about what to do.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 22, 2017, 04:46:46 PM
Ah - that explains it. The lift at the base line should not break your flow. It is designed just to break up the letter - the nib barely leaves the paper before going back and continuing with the hairline. It is stop-start but one can still maintain a good rhythm. The break should be only a beat - less than a second. Give it a try and see if it makes any difference :-)

S.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: mj_letters on January 26, 2017, 08:26:52 AM
Thank you so much for this wonderful explanation. I love the tip of practicing in groups of 5. I just wrote that down in my practice journal and will start using it immediately!
--Meredith
@mj_letters
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 26, 2017, 08:21:27 PM
@mj_letters

You are most welcome Meredith :-) I am really glad that people are finding these tutorials useful.

S.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on January 27, 2017, 06:37:31 PM
@SMK   Hi Salman: the last 2 months were busier than I thought, and I really did not have a chance to practice.  I'm back; trying a new nib, and starting from scratch, so we will see how it goes.  I'll try to decide between this an the Hunt as I get more practice in.   This was with the Brausse.   Need to change the paper though!

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 27, 2017, 07:10:59 PM
hey chetwyn! is that just normal printer paper? definitely got to change it, it's impossible for me to write on that stuff.
Just an idea from a fellow newbie: You might consider writing larger at first - like x-height of 3/8in or 1/2 in. For me this was super helpful at being able to write a consistent shade width all the way down the letter. After a couple of weeks practice at that size,  I was able to move back to 1/4in again and am doing fine with that now.

If you're interested in writing larger, you can get guidelines for that here: http://www.iampeth.com/pdf/vitolo-engrossers-script-guide-sheets (print these in landscape)... of course there's other guidelines you can fine if you search this forum.

Good luck!

.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 27, 2017, 10:12:33 PM
This week I decided to move back to the 1/4in x-height, in addition to the "j" shade and "i dot" height, I worked primarily on my flow & rhythm... I'm not a snail anymore  8)... I'm happy with the way the writing feels - more confidence now.

I tried the four lesson 1 words at the end of my practice today - Not as tight as my last submission, but it went pretty well I think except a few things I noticed in particular: the "j" loopey parts were not shaped right, slant messed up in a few places, spacing / shape of turn not consistently tight, and I crossed the base line on a few letters where I shouldn't have (not sure if that's a big deal or not).

Please let me know if you see anything else I should work on - thank you so much!  ;D
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on January 29, 2017, 11:19:46 AM
hey chetwyn! is that just normal printer paper? definitely got to change it, it's impossible for me to write on that stuff.
Just an idea from a fellow newbie: You might consider writing larger at first - like x-height of 3/8in or 1/2 in. For me this was super helpful at being able to write a consistent shade width all the way down the letter. After a couple of weeks practice at that size,  I was able to move back to 1/4in again and am doing fine with that now.

If you're interested in writing larger, you can get guidelines for that here: http://www.iampeth.com/pdf/vitolo-engrossers-script-guide-sheets (print these in landscape)... of course there's other guidelines you can fine if you search this forum.

Good luck!

.

Hey Brad,

Yes, it is.  I don't have access to a printer right now, so I had to use a print shop, and unfortunately, that's what I ended up with.  I'll make sure that gets fixed the next time I get a batch printed, or I might experiment with Rhodia pads.  We'll see.

Thanks for the tips!  I was using a Hunt 101 before, and was getting better at the shade, but I decided to try a Brause, and this was my first go at it.  I'll give the largerr x-height a try and see where it leads!   Thanks!!  :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 30, 2017, 02:37:19 PM
@Chetwyn Clarke - the 'i' shape is done well. The dot (called a tittle) should be round. It is drawn and then filled in.

Lets see some u's and w's (and the rest if you are ready) next.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 30, 2017, 02:42:16 PM
@brd4790

 You have done a good analysis of the worksheet Brad. The looped descender is a little tricky - speeding up might help. The crossbar of the 't' should be perfectly horizontal, yours are slanting down.

It is good that you are actually 'hitting' the base line.That is how it should be done. Crossing over isn't good but that will be fixed with a bit of with practice.

This is nice work. You are ready to move on.

Practice the 'j' in groups of 5 until you are happy with it and include a word using it in your submission for the group 2 letters.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on January 30, 2017, 06:37:49 PM
thanks a lot Salman!

edit: I just finished my 1st practice of group 2 letters - it's already improved my turns and spacing dramatically... I see there's the i, the inverted i, the compound curve, and the required symmetry to make them all fit together for forming the letters. For me, for example, it was a revelation to draw a "y" b/c if the turn is off on the compound curve it's obvious because the letter looks terrible. Very cool!  8)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on February 07, 2017, 03:25:40 PM
@SMK   Thanks Salman.  Here are the u's and w's.  I'll be working on the rest of letters this week.   

I drew some lines this week since I haven't gotten any new sheets printed; but I should be back up to speed on that end shortly.

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: brd4790 on February 07, 2017, 07:10:20 PM
hi Chetwyn, nice practice sheet! Your shade seems too thick to me. You might try easing up on your downstrokes, and that may also help with your tapering...  In my (limited) experience, tappering smoothly is difficult when you open the nib really wide. IMO it's better to start with shades that are too thin and marginally apply more pressure as you practice until thickness looks right. good luck!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 07, 2017, 09:27:16 PM
Ok, I am now about 3 weeks into calligraphy and 2 full weeks into copperplate! If find it both therapeutic and rather addicting :-\. I get up and walk away, then feel a pull to go back and work on another practice sheet. My least favorite stroke is the pesky "entry" or "connecting" stroke. 

I find myself rotating between the lessons here as well as working on Erica's worksheets.

I hesitate to write words, but know that will help me develop a rhythm and consistency. I see in my example my letter spacing if off in "jilt".

I greatly appreciate the friendliness of this forum. Thanks for anyone who can offer me feedback. I will continue to practice!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 07, 2017, 10:04:15 PM
@Chetwyn Clarke - nicely done Chet.

The shade could be a little lighter. This a little too dense but it is ok with me if you like it this way :-)

The blob on the last stroke of the 'w' can come a bit lower. It will look more balanced and easier to connect to the next letter.

Let's see the rest of the letters and the words in this group.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 07, 2017, 10:08:10 PM
@jtandy - welcome to the lessons. Can you kindly upload your work as images so we can see it directly in the browser without having to download a pdf?

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 07, 2017, 10:46:11 PM
@jtandy - welcome to the lessons. Can you kindly upload your work as images so we can see it directly in the browser without having to download a pdf?

Regards,
Salman

Sorry, scanner illiterate as to type of file I needed to save it as :-\ hope that works now.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 08, 2017, 06:32:56 PM
@jtandy - this is a good start for someone who has just started Calligraphy. You have managed to get a good counter shape for the 'j' which many find challenging - this is excellent :-)

Lets start with a couple of basic things and we will build from there:

- The slant is off i.e. many letters are too upright compared to the slant guides. This is most likely due to the paper being too 'square' to your body. Try rotating the paper a little counter clockwise. As you put your nib down, check that the slit in the nib is more or less aligned with the slant lines - this will help keep the paper in the right position. Make it a habit to check for this from time to time as you write and it will become automatic. Also, move the paper as you write so you are always writing in the most comfortable position - the paper doesn't mind being moved about :-)

- You are forming the strokes in one go. For example, the 'i' is made out of 3 distinct strokes: the entry hairline, the main shaded stroke (where you press down) that ends at the base line and the exit hairline. Lift the pen (just a little) off the page after each of these strokes and you will get it right quicker. It is important to note that the curve at the base line is formed from the 'outside' (i.e. left side) of the shade going into the exit hairline. The 'inside' of the shaded stroke makes a sharp turn into the exit hairline.

- The shade should be thicker for this x-height. It might be hard to get thicker lines with the Nikko G nib as it is quite stiff. You might fare better with a more flexible nib like the Hunt 101.

This will give you the letters 'i', 'u' and 'w' - the  't', 'l' and 'b' will be easy once you get the hang of these.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 09, 2017, 10:59:23 PM
Salman, I really appreciate you taking time comment! I have been practicing but still see obvious problems with my work, so continuing to try to address those issues.  It is so helpful to know "what to look for".

The light finally came on as I read your comments on others work where you said ... "this will break down the letter into components and you will no longer be writing an 'i' or a 'u' but just drawing a shaded stroke." At the start, I see that is really is all about getting that fundamental shaded stroke down.

I'm trying some different nibs but still not thrilled. Unfortunately the one that "feels the best" is the Nikko G, but I guess I can't get the shade I need with it. Will try the Hunt 101 you suggested once it arrives. I
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 10, 2017, 05:12:45 PM
I think I am doing better with my slant.  It was frightening to see what my letters look like when "zoomed in". Looked better at normal magnification. My old eyes make it difficult to line up the exit stroke. I have sheets and sheets of i, u, and w's... Beginning to ask myself why I was drawn to copperplate which seems so exacting  ??? I understand....practice, practice, practice. Back to more i's
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 10, 2017, 09:28:54 PM
Salman, my ultimate respect to you and your willingness to moderate this tutorial and give very kind and helpful feedback. I just shared this on the introduction page:

"So as I have explored the site I have begun to realize that I feel like I got on the wrong ski lift. Remember the first time you went skiing and the fear you had that you might get on the wrong lift that takes you to the very top and there are only the black diamond slopes to get down? In my innocence I thought that all "copperplate" was alike :o  After visiting Salman's tutorials I quickly realized how wrong I was. Man what beautiful and precise work he does! The problem is, my presbyopia (old eyes) makes those very rigid rules hard to complete, i.e. lifting pen after entry and before exit strokes. The easy flowing technique that I see in Erica's lessons suits this newbie much better. I believe she calls it "casual copperplate". Much respect to Salman and the guidance his gives! Maybe someday I give that style a go again, but off to do my "casual" worksheets"

I likely wont be posting on this thread again, but realize I haven't given up! In my complete newness to calligraphy, I realize the more "casual copperplate" is more suiting to me now. Thanks again for your dedication and passion!

Jim
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on February 11, 2017, 09:19:42 AM
@brd4790   Thanks, Brad.  You know, after I finished and was looking at it, I was thinking the shades could be thinner!  Still trying to get used to the Brausse which doesn't need as much pressure as the other nib I was using.  Thanks for the feedback!

@SMK   Here is my first pass at the t's and l's.  I drew in an extra line to help me figure out where the ascender on the t should stop.  Getting such a long stroke on the l was difficult! I underlined the group that I thought was the best of the lot.  I will take a few more swings at it over the weekend.

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 11, 2017, 03:12:02 PM
Thank you for the kind words Jim. I am glad and grateful that these lessons are proving to be useful for some but do understand that they might not be for everyone.

There is no doubt that Copperplate is a challenging hand. I suppose my 'target audience' for these lessons are people who want to achieve a good level of control before venturing out into the more developed forms of the script. As such, I think it makes sense to keep the standard on the higher side.

It is inspiring to see students makes progress and 'get' things - I believe I get a bigger high out of it than the students themselves :-)

We will be here if you decide to take the lessons up in the future.

- Salman

Salman, my ultimate respect to you and your willingness to moderate this tutorial and give very kind and helpful feedback. I just shared this on the introduction page:

"So as I have explored the site I have begun to realize that I feel like I got on the wrong ski lift. Remember the first time you went skiing and the fear you had that you might get on the wrong lift that takes you to the very top and there are only the black diamond slopes to get down? In my innocence I thought that all "copperplate" was alike :o  After visiting Salman's tutorials I quickly realized how wrong I was. Man what beautiful and precise work he does! The problem is, my presbyopia (old eyes) makes those very rigid rules hard to complete, i.e. lifting pen after entry and before exit strokes. The easy flowing technique that I see in Erica's lessons suits this newbie much better. I believe she calls it "casual copperplate". Much respect to Salman and the guidance his gives! Maybe someday I give that style a go again, but off to do my "casual" worksheets"

I likely wont be posting on this thread again, but realize I haven't given up! In my complete newness to calligraphy, I realize the more "casual copperplate" is more suiting to me now. Thanks again for your dedication and passion!

Jim
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 11, 2017, 03:18:28 PM
@Chetwyn Clarke - it is great to see your analysis of the work you do. The underlined groups are indeed the best ones of the lot.

I think you are ready to take on the words after with a bit of practice on the 'b' and the 'j'.

Also, start 'squaring' the tops of the shaded strokes. This is done by going back and just delicately drawing the tops to be horizontal - it is almost like drawing a tiny '7' at the top of the stroke. Be careful about making the strokes longer though as it is very easy to make your 'i's and 'w's go above the waist line.

There is a technique to start with squared tops in just one stroke but don't worry about it at this time. It will come with practice but even then the touch up technique will give you better and more repeatable results.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jeanwilson on February 12, 2017, 07:28:41 AM
Jim:

I loved your comparison of serious copperplate study to the black diamond ski slopes. My younger son will never forgive forget his older brother (a ski instructor) taking him to a black diamond before he was comfortable. But, he survived - and older brother says he knew it was going to be just fine....pointed out that once little brother made it to the bottom, he was confident to go to all the other black diamonds...so there.

I agree that the level of precision in formal copperplate can be intimidating. However, I hope you remember that the activity is dragging a little inky tip across paper - and applying pressure at the same time. It's not that hard - it's just something new - and you have to do two things at once. I encourage beginners to spend time with the more casual styles to get comfortable with the tool. A casual style is your bunny hill. Once you are comfortable with the nibs and ink, you can always go back to Salman's lessons and you will probably find it much easier to follow the shapes. There are about 6 basic shapes and then maybe 6 more details to learn.

I scan through the advice that Salman gives and it is superb. Just look at the before and after of Ashok's work. Ashok has surpassed anything I have ever done - and in only a few months. I know if I took the time, I could get to that level. It's about taking the time - and following the directions. I looked at the first page you posted and -trust me- it's above average for a beginner. I have no doubt that you could follow Salman's instructions. If you want to stay on the bunny hill and easier slopes forever - there is no shame in that. I'm just encouraging you to keep the door open for traditional - and not write it off as impossible.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 12, 2017, 07:59:45 AM
@jeanwilson and @SMK
 
You have no idea how true your words ring. As a matter of fact, I spent yesterday lamenting that fact that I had turned away so quickly from Salman’s superb teaching. Having such a dedicated expert give of his time to help direct a complete novice is a rare thing indeed! I feel like the younger brother in the prodigal son parable. I left thinking I wanted something different, Salman said “come back when you are ready”. Wow!

I borrowed my wife’s reading glasses and last night began seeing the individual tines of the nib work in concert for the first time. After practicing over 500 “i” shapes, I began seeing the symmetry in the repeated shapes I was writing. Square tops and more consistent angles. Better shading and transitions. FAR from perfect, but I see progress.

Thanks for the encouraging words. I shall “crawl back” under Salman’s wing and realize that this, like many things, requires time. I must remember, my surgery residency for ENT was 6 years, and even then, I have continued to learn and master that skill over the subsequent 20 years!

I will post some of my practice later and continue to move forward in this journey.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jeanwilson on February 12, 2017, 11:15:05 AM
@jeanwilson and @SMK
 
I must remember, my surgery residency for ENT was 6 years, and even then, I have continued to learn and master that skill over the subsequent 20 years!


Exactly!! Every single rock-star-scribe will tell you that the journey lasts a lifetime. Enjoy the adventure as well as your fellow travelers.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jeanwilson on February 12, 2017, 11:20:59 AM
I want to "ditto" something that Salman said about writing on guidelines rather than a light pad. While the light pads are convenient, having the guidelines on your paper will make the precision a lot easier. I can't think of any of the traditional teachers I've met over the years who recommend light pads as equal to guidelines.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 12, 2017, 02:56:04 PM
Ok, i have worked on my slant and trying to square tops. I put checks under the few that I think look OK. My down strokes in most u's are not parallel. I see in the w's that is case as well as the final exit stroke not being consistent in its angle. Only appear to have one of my w's that looks acceptable. 

Now that I look at it more closely, the one u I checked is not good, initial downstroke is poor.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 13, 2017, 01:16:41 PM
My practice sheet today. I note problems with angle at times. I now have my paper at almost a right angle to me so really just need to pay more attention to guidelines as I write. Also note that I do not hit the baseline at all times.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 13, 2017, 01:41:13 PM
@jtandy - good to have you back Jim :-)

Since you are just starting out, expect to spend a lot of time on the first group of letters. This is normal and expected as you are not only learning the letter forms but also getting used to the tools, ink, paper as well. It will get easier as you make your way through the groups.

It is good to see that you are practicing in groups of 5. This is very helpful in developing a critical eye and develops the habit of critical analysis. Remember to tick mark the best one(s) in each group right after you write them.

Now for some feedback on the exercises:

- The 'i' shape in the first exercise is drawn like a wedge i.e. it starts tapering in most cases as soon as the down stroke begins. The 'i' stroke should start at full width and continue uniformly at this width for 2/3rds of the way down the x-height. The tapering (i.e. lessening of pressure) happens only in the last 1/3rd of the stroke along with moving the pen slightly to the right. The movement to the right is so the right side of the stroke remains straight and the curve is created only on the left side. The pen should have zero pressure as you reach the base line.

There is a lot happening in that tiny 1/3 of x-height. This is why my guidelines are ruled for 1/4 inch x-height so we write at a large enough size for good control.

- squaring of the tops requires a delicate touch. You can leave it for later as there isn't much technique to it - you just draw a tiny 7 at the top of the stroke and fill it in if needed.

- In general, there is a tendency to taper off early when drawing longer strokes. However, you show very good control in this respect. This is an excellent start.

For now, concentrate on the 'i', 'u' and 'w' during practice time. Your practice should not be longer than half an hour per session. You can have more than one session a day but should be well rested before starting.

The rest of the time is for playing - feel free to write out the whole alphabet, compose a quotation, play with flourishing etc. You are by no means limited to just the letters you are working on. In time, you will find your 'play' letters are taking on the forms you are learning during your practice time. That is the goal.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 13, 2017, 01:47:09 PM
@jeanwilson - thank you so much for the kind words Jean. Your endorsement and support means a lot to me.

I love your 'inky tip dragged across paper' line - that is all there really is to it :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on February 13, 2017, 07:48:04 PM
@SMK  This was what I was able to get done yesterday and today.  Yesterday I got started on the b's and j's.  Getting the longer shades of the l's and b's remains difficult; some of them might have stood up a bit, and then a couple looked a bit 'wobbly'.   The same thing happened today on a couple of the b's (the one's with the arrows) and some of the l's in 'will'. 

As for the j's, I've been trying to get the loops correct.  Those that are underlined from yesterday are what I thought were the best ones.  For today's, I liked the way the j's underlined in the word 'jut' came out.

- Chet
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 13, 2017, 08:05:55 PM
 So I am kind of nervous. I sat down and wrote five i's in a row that I think might be good.  I am nervous and excited! I wrote two more groups of fives and have marked ones that I think are acceptable with arrows pointing toward areas that are not. Please give me feedback to know if I am rightly interpreting these shapes. Thanks -Jim
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 14, 2017, 11:32:00 AM
So here is this mornings practice sheet. I have arrows pointing to problems I see. I notice my second exit stroke in my w's tends to be too wide. Slant, getting too upright, still rears its head.
Last two days have done better with focused work on these shapes for 20 minutes or so, then doing funglourishing excercises.
Made my wife a very simple valentines message this am in blackletter  :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 15, 2017, 09:31:14 PM
Today's practice. I changed over to Walnut ink from Sumi. This flows much easier. Over all pleased to see more consistency with strokes. Need to be careful to hit base line all the time. Also got a bit wide on the second loop in w's. Pleased with words other than horrible w in wut.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 15, 2017, 09:44:39 PM
@Chetwyn Clarke - good work Chet - only a few things need further work. Remember, the first group usually takes the longest so stick with it for just a bit longer.

- Bring the shaded stroke just a little more to the right when you approach the base line. You are finishing right under the right side of the stroke - this shows excellent control but leaves the letter slightly unbalanced.

- The letters following the 'w' are a bit too close to it. The last 'will' you wrote just before the group of 'j's on the last line is good. Stick with that spacing.

- The dots of the 'i' are all over the place. They should be halfway between the waist line and the 1st ascender line (i.e. level with the top of the 't')

- The descender of the 'j' needs a bit more work. The closing part when you approach the base line from below should be flatter - this will result in less of a wavy shape when connected with the exit hairline. Also, finish off the shade a bit earlier, the last bit of the down stroke is drawn as a hairline.

We are refining your work now. This is more about seeing it rather than the execution.

I would like to just see the words for group 1 next.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 15, 2017, 09:53:28 PM
@Jim W - good that you are regular with your practice work Jim. I don't need to see your work every day - you can post when you think you have accomplished the tasks from the previous feedback.

One of the benefits of practicing in groups of 5 is that you get used to analyzing your work and in the process develop a keen eye and a good understanding of the letter forms. It is important to stop and look at which letter is the best in the group and then try to either repeat or improve upon it in the next group.

Here are things to pay attention to:

- you are still drawing the 'i' stroke as a wedge i.e. you start to taper off the pressure too early. See my explanation in the previous feedback.

- take care to hit (i.e. go over) the base line on your down strokes. Your letters are turning back way too early.

- the turns at the base line are looking much better. Make the exit hairline so it matches the slant lines at about half x-height where it would join with the following letter.

I would like to see some 'i', 'u' and 'w' groups with the above points covered. There is no hurry :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on February 16, 2017, 07:58:12 PM
@ SMK.  This morning's practice!  A couple of things I see that I need to continue working on, namely: (1) getting a consistent shade thickness, especially on some of the longer strokes like the l and b; (2) getting a consistent angle: some of them stand up a bit (e.g the first "l" in the first "ill"), and then some of them seem to be going a bit over 55º (e.g the "l" in the last 2 examples of "built") and (3) spacing between the letters.  I think it's moving in the right direction, but more practice needed.

As for the good stuff: (1)  I've started trying to move the bottom of the shaded strokes to the right as they approach the baseline, but I'm not sure if it needs to go a little more to the right. (2)  I've been getting the hang of squaring the tops, although some of them are going over the waist line; I'll work on that.  (3) I think I have the dots for the "i" in the correct place now.  Please let me know it that's right. (4) As for the "j", i think the the "j" in the last example of "jut" is the best one I have done so far; now if only I could mimic that one!

Looking forward to your critique.

Chet
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on February 18, 2017, 09:14:20 AM
Hi @jeanwilson,

Thanks for the kind words and valuable support through my journey on this forum. It wouldn't be possible without all your help.

Many Thanks,
Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 18, 2017, 09:53:23 AM
Ok Salman, I think I finally recognized the problem with my wedge shapes. Though it still pops up occsisiobally, I think I now know the proper stroke technique. Also note I get upright occasionally.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 18, 2017, 03:58:29 PM
@Chetwyn Clarke - nice worksheet you have there Chet. very nice work. I really like the second 'jut' on the last line even though the crossbar of the 't' is a bit wavy.

You are moving the pen to the right correctly but have started tapering the width a little too early in some places. Just be aware of it and it will go away in time.

The looped descender on the 'j' should not be as wavy around the base line as you are making it. The 'j' in the second 'jut' on the last line is a good example as is the abandoned 'j' (second last) in the groups of 5 on the last line.

Don't worry about the slant too much, just check that the paper is oriented correctly every time you move it (check the alignment of the nib slit and the slant guides) and you will get a feel for it before long.

Your letter shapes and spacing are both good. Lets keep an eye on the shade and the looped descender and move to group 2. Keep practicing the group 1 letters though :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 18, 2017, 04:13:21 PM
@jtandy - you have gotten the hang of it Jim. I see more than a few good ones in there.

The next step is to refine the stroke a little and add 't' and 'l' and 'b' to the mix.

Here are the things to work on next:

- Square the tops. Start your shaded stroke a little lower so it doesn't go over the waist line (as it does on this sheet in several places). Then go back after the letter is complete and draw a tiny '7' at the waist line over the top of the shaded stroke to square it off. This is delicate work and will give you blobby tops for a bit but you will get the hang of it.

- Tighten up the turns at the base line. Your turns a bit too rounded. They look ok for this group but the rounded letters will be almost square if done this way. This will also bring your joins a bit higher i.e. your exit hairline will join the following letter at around 1/2 x-height.

- The blob at the top of the last stroke on the 'w' should be a bit wider. You don't have to make it with flexing the nib - feel free to draw it without any pressure and then fill in with ink if that is easier to do.

- Add 't', 'l' and 'b' to your practice sessions.

I will be looking forward to your next submission :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 19, 2017, 06:23:22 PM
@smh
I see that my shade weight tends to differ between my "l" and the remainder of the letters. Not sure if that is too heavy, or my others to thin... Enjoying practicing more than i,w,u.  :)
Thanks as always for your time offering critique.
-Jim
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 24, 2017, 08:19:20 PM
Continuing to practice lesson 1 :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Chetwyn Clarke on February 25, 2017, 08:59:52 AM
@jtandy  Jim, just wanted to say that you have improved quite a lot!  Keep at it!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 25, 2017, 09:05:45 AM
@Chetwyn Clarke Thanks for the encouragement. ! It is fun to see how the strokes, though far from perfect, are becoming more consistent. Watching you progress has been helpful to me as well as reading Salman's critiques. I'm in this for the long haul!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 25, 2017, 04:56:55 PM
@jtandy - This first group will give you the most trouble but it is good to see you sticking with it. I can see improvement not only in your work on paper but also in your assessment of it. In some ways, this is more important than the execution.

It might help to spend some time with just the letters with ascenders so you get used to them. It helps greatly if you move your whole arm on the downstroke such that your wrist and the elbow are moving in parallel i.e. there is no arc being formed in the movement with your elbow at the center. I hope this makes sense.

Also, keep a eye on the alignment of the nib slit with the slant guides. A mis-aligned nib can also throw off your slant and cause inconsistent shades when you try to compensate.

Keep up with the practice with group 1 and post your work in a few days.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 26, 2017, 09:27:24 PM
Here are my ascenders.
I believe I eliminated the curve to my ascenders. I can see still some variation with shading thickness but looks better with my B's. I'm pleased with my fine lines, particularly with the b's. I also see I didn't hit baseline with many of the t's. Easy fix there.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 26, 2017, 10:39:11 PM
@jtandy

Jim - here are the things you need to continue to work on:

1. Draw the shades and hairlines as separate strokes i.e. draw the shaded stroke up to the base line and stop there, continue with the hairline as a separate stroke after lifting the pen off the page a bit.
2. Touch the base line at the bottom turns.
3. Square the tops - this is done by retouching i.e. go back and square the top after the shaded stroke is made. This has to be done for the 't' as well as the 'l' and 'b'
4. Maintain consistent shade width throughout the stroke until you get to the last 1/3rd above the base line when you start to taper off to a hairline as you reach the base line.

Continue your practice while evaluating your work in these areas.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on February 28, 2017, 10:26:54 AM
@smh ok, I lifted on every upstroke! I see how that create more consistency with curve, reducing tendency to be too rounded. Arrows point to shading problems. I now notice slight tendency to become upright, particularly with last letters of groups. Need to move paper closer for these. Looks like I'll continue to find faults  :'( especially when letters are magnified with photo. Oh well, my wife thinks they look good ;D
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on February 28, 2017, 12:31:50 PM
@jtandy - This group is much better than the last one. The bottom turns are very nice and you are consistently hitting the base line. The slight mismatch at the transition will disappear with continued practice.

Keep at it - maintain what you have achieved and get the shaded stroke to be consistent. I recommend relaxing through this stroke - breathe out (don't hold you breath) and look at the part where the stroke is supposed to end. You are almost there.

Compare your current worksheet to the ones you did at the beginning - I bet it will put a smile on your face.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on March 02, 2017, 06:10:43 PM
@SMK it's lonely here alone in lesson 1, ha ha
Doing lots of practice with other strokes with future lessons but won't move forward and post until I earn it!
Here are my latest ascenders.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: vonking1980 on March 04, 2017, 05:42:36 AM
This is fantastic @SMK ! Sorry I'm a little late to the party, but thank you very much for putting this together. I JUST started to buckle down on learning and practicing Engrosser/ Copperplate. You have made my day!

Thank you @ash0kgiri for posting the link. I happened across it this morning in Simone's introduction. I haven't been on in a while until a few days ago, so what a treat this morning!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on March 04, 2017, 06:16:24 AM
You are welcome @vonking1980. Now waiting to see your practice sheets soon.

Keep writing,
Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on March 05, 2017, 08:51:10 PM
My words today
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 05, 2017, 09:08:46 PM
@vonking1980 - it is nice to have you join us Yvonne. You are not late at all - jump in whenever you are ready for your journey.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 05, 2017, 09:18:07 PM
@jtandy

What an improvement! You are well over the initial hump Jim and are almost done with this group. 

You have done well to note the curved 'b' and the change in slant. Are you moving the paper as you write - a change in slant often results from writing farther and farther away from yourself as you move along the line.

A couple of other things:

- Square all tops - for the ascenders as well as the strokes that start at the waist line.

- The loop of the 'j' needs some work. The lowest (i.e. the pointed) part of the loop should be centered along the slant line in the middle of the teardrop shape. This will bring it a bit to the left of where you have it.

- The final stroke of the 'w' and the 'b' should be aligned with the slant line from 1/2 x-height and up. It can even curve back ever so slightly as it reaches the waist line. This will make it look better balanced than if you just keep going out at a steeper slant.

Please feel free to change the words if you are bored with them. You have good control of the shades and the letters are generally well formed. We just need to add a bit of refinement before moving on. I am sure you will find the next group much quicker to master.

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on March 06, 2017, 08:43:35 AM
Thanks for the encouragement Salman! I think the loops on my J's are more balanced in my final two practice j's and in the final words.  Not a lot of words with just these letters!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 06, 2017, 01:40:59 PM
@jtandy - yes the descender loops are much better balanced now. However, they are a bit too rounded at the bottom. It is not a big deal and you can keep them as they are if you like it that way but I prefer the thickest part to be around the 1st descender line. This gives the loop a more streamlined look that nicely compliments the overall look of the script.

The finishing stroke on the 'b's in the last line is good. Make sure your dots are all at the same level - the ones in 'jib' are not.

Lets give this group one more try with the following words: but, tub, jib, wilt

Please take your time with this. I have pointed out pretty much all the things you need to keep an eye on so do the analysis yourself before submission. The ability to do this critique yourself is the most useful skill you can develop.

I will be looking forward to your next submission.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on March 06, 2017, 07:41:01 PM
Contrary to my multiple posts the last few days, please realize that I am "taking my time" with these letters. This is how I relax after coming home from work. "Empty nest" frees up time to do things we enjoy!
 I must say it's not difficult for me to find minor "errors" with my practice sheets.   Small waviness to my ascenders, slight spacing inconsistencies, not touching the baseline with every letter, exit strokes slightly out of slant etc...  I've marked some of these on this post. Overall I am pleased with how I've progressed since starting this journey with you 1 month ago today.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 06, 2017, 11:51:46 PM
@jtandy

Jim - I know I can be rather demanding but bear with me a bit and you will start to see things work.

The reason I insist on taking your time is so you can get to a level where I don't need to point out the same issues again. I can point out some things with your latest submission but, other than some related to spacing, none are new. I think you are ready to start paying attention to some of the spacing and joining issues but these cannot be tackled unless the basic strokes are drawn consistently.

Ideally each submission should be clear of the issues pointed out in previous feedback. I would like to see just the assigned words written such that you cannot see any problems with it. You don't have to write them all in one go. Feel free to cut and paste your best efforts from multiple attempts at each word.

It is clear to me from your work that you have the ability to draw each letter perfectly. There are several beautifully drawn letters in your latest post. My favourite is the 'wilt' in the middle line - it is written beautifully (except the letters don't touch the base line). You have made great progress in just one month.

- Salman



Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jtandy on March 07, 2017, 03:25:28 PM
@smh
I don't know how to cut and paste my photos so I kept practicing until I believe all 4 words are correct  :) When zoomed in there are some slight irregularities to shading, otherwise I focused on hitting baselines, square tops, consistent exit strokes.  I believe my j is more similar to your example now.
-Jim
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 07, 2017, 05:49:09 PM
@jtandy - this looks good Jim. The shades need to be more consistent but that will come with time. Please move on to the next group.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: vonking1980 on April 05, 2017, 09:55:48 AM
Hi Salman,

I really appreciate you putting this tutorial together and taking the time to critique.

In this particular practice, I am most focused on the bottom turn stroke, but I am seeing that my slant is inconsistent, along with the square offs and shading.

I appreciate any feedback!

Thank you!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 05, 2017, 12:53:36 PM
@vonking1980

Since your letters are 'standing up' often, it might be a good idea to turn your paper counter clockwise a bit. It is easier to maintain good slant if the slit n your nib is more or less in line with the slant guides.

The bottom turns are done nicely. They will flow a bit better if you start to taper your shaded stroke a bit earlier.  Currently you are starting the taper about a 3/4 of the way down - start to release pressure about 2/3 of the way down the stroke and you will have more of an oval shape at the bottom with the same exit stroke.

Also, a slightly thinner shade will likely help too. Your shades are a bit too thick for this x-height.

All in all, this is a very good start. Squaring the tops is just a matter of drawing a tiny '7' at the top of the stroke :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: vonking1980 on April 06, 2017, 06:22:04 AM
@SMK
Thank you for your feedback Salman and helpful tips.  I will repost again when I feel I have corrected some of my issues.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: flummoxed on April 09, 2017, 10:25:48 AM
I've been guilty of not practicing for a while now due to work and just not picking up a pen. I've had sporadic starts and stops, following by long periods of inactivity (work, family illness and plain laziness- hence the guilt). The plan is to get back to practicing forms and shapes, so that my basics are strong before I do anything fancy this time around.

Here is my practice sheet from today, any comments, suggestions would be helpful.

I got bored in the middle, and tried 'tilt' as indicated in the first post. I then went back to the i's, I think the last line seems to be fairly better than the first lines (before the 'tilt' line). However I might have ruined the nib already because I used it for another drawing (https://www.instagram.com/p/BR8nJDRlcwa/). I still have a problem with the upstrokes as I had posted in some of my other posts. Hopefully, I'll notice it quicker this time and reduce the pressure.

Thank you.


Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 10, 2017, 12:58:34 AM
@flummoxed - good to know you are back at it. There should be no guilt for not practising though - we learn best when we are motivated so there is no point in making this a chore.

You have a consistent slant and shade width. The 'i' looks a bit upright though - do you have your guidelines on the paper you are writing on or on another sheet under it? I strongly recommend printing/drawing your guidelines on the paper you write on as it makes a bit difference.

The bottom turns look a bit too rounded. Remember the curve at the bottom is formed from the outside of the shaded stroke on to the exit hairline. This makes the inside (right side) of the shaded stroke make a fairly steep angle with the exit hairline. Also, make sure you pick up your pen for a beat at the bottom of the stroke. (I uploaded a short clip to IG a few days ago showing a few letters of the first group.)

Make sure you stop to analyse your letters after every group of 5. This is important as it forces one to see the details otherwise missed. I also find it keeps me from getting bored too easily :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: flummoxed on April 10, 2017, 04:32:40 AM
@SMK, Thanks, I had a guide sheet under this sheet. I'll give it another shot today with the sheets printed.

I didn't understand what you mean by the bottom turns/curves, I'll take a look at the Instagram clip to see what you mean.

Edited:

Did you mean the video in this link? https://www.instagram.com/p/BSgz-zOjCXF/

I now know what you mean by link, I'll look at the practice sheet to check for the curves and will post a new version later today.

 

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: vonking1980 on April 10, 2017, 08:15:48 AM
@SMK Here's a second go around on individual letters for this group.
I think my down stroke taper is a little better with these, along with the slant. Down stroke shading is still a little inconsistent, along with the 'j' descender loop length/width.
Thanks for your guidance Salman :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: vonking1980 on April 10, 2017, 08:17:53 AM
Here's a stab at some words.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: flummoxed on April 10, 2017, 11:58:53 AM
@SMK, I went and looked back at the video and tried to redo the 'i's on a printed guide sheet for today.

Line 1: I divided the line into three parts to reduce the pressure on the nib in the bottom third. In the first few cases I drew the 'i' with a pencil and then proceeded to try out individual 'i's. I did not realise that the curve continued.

Line 2: I tried a set of 5 'i's in this line. I realised that while I had reduced the pressure in the bottom third, I had not spaced them properly. The ticks/crosses on the top represent the angle of the downstroke and the ones at the bottom represent the spacing between the upstroke (entry stroke?) and the downstroke of the 'i'.

Line 3: In this set, while I got the spacing to be better than the previous set, I was not able to reduce the 'curve that you had referred to Salman. It was at the very end of this line that I realised the reason for the higher degree of the curve when compared to the 'i' in the video you posted on Instagram.

At the bottom of the page: I realised that the reason for the 'i' to have the larger curve was that I was beginning to curve the line itself instead of holding my line and reducing the pressure in the bottom third. I tried a sample set at the end of the page to check this hypothesis.

Line 4: I tried to draw the 'i's in the first half of the line and wasn't very happy with the results as I was reducing the pressure but I think the angle at which I was applying pressure was at fault. Both the tines would converge at the centre of the page instead of the left tine closing towards the right tine. I then proceeded to mark in a pencil the bottom third between the two parallel lines (representing the edges). I tried to adjust the angle of the nib to the page and the angle of the page to check if the tines were snapping back in the manner that they should.

Line 5: I only focussed on the tines snapping back together in this line. The spacing and the upward strokes were not consistent.

Line 6: The spacing (within the set of 5 'i's) was fairly better, but the upstrokes were not consistent.

Line 7: I got sloppy with the angle of the downstroke in this line and the spacing on a couple of occasions. The upstrokes were better in this line.

Line 8: I thought this line was better in terms of consistency but I think I got sloppy with the dots at the top and with the upstrokes in a couple of instances.

Please do let me know if this is what you meant by the curve and the angle of the 'i' from Day 1's practice Salman. If I am on the wrong track, I'll give it another such attempt tomorrow. Otherwise, another day with some more patience and I think the 'i' might begin to look like a decent 'i'.

By the way, thanks for taking the time out to comment.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 10, 2017, 03:26:21 PM
@vonking1980 - this is lovely work. The only issue is that the shade on the last stroke of the 'w' and the 'b' should be inside the counter space.

The square tops of the shaded strokes should be horizontal - some of the ones on the second page are tilted.

Please move on to writing the words - I will be looking forward to them.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 10, 2017, 03:31:09 PM
@flummoxed - I mentioned the video for a demonstration of the pen lift at the bottom of the stroke.

You were drawing the shaded stroke correctly, the roundness came from the exit hairline going out a bit too far to the right. As for the tapering off at the end of the shaded stroke, move your pen slightly to the right as you release pressure, this will keep the right side of the shade straight while the left side will taper in a curve to meet at a point by the time you get to the baseline. The point you touch at the base line can be a little to the right of the right side of the shade - but only a little.

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: flummoxed on April 11, 2017, 12:37:53 AM
@flummoxed - I mentioned the video for a demonstration of the pen lift at the bottom of the stroke.

You were drawing the shaded stroke correctly, the roundness came from the exit hairline going out a bit too far to the right. As for the tapering off at the end of the shaded stroke, move your pen slightly to the right as you release pressure, this will keep the right side of the shade straight while the left side will taper in a curve to meet at a point by the time you get to the baseline. The point you touch at the base line can be a little to the right of the right side of the shade - but only a little.

- Salman

Thanks for your patience Salman, I'll try today and post the results.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 11, 2017, 01:59:48 AM
Thanks for your patience Salman, I'll try today and post the results.

It is my pleasure @flummoxed . Your structured approach is commendable and guarantees your success more than any help I can offer :-) I am glad to be a part of your journey.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: vonking1980 on April 13, 2017, 07:38:59 PM
@SMK
Hi Salman, here's the first set of words ( I am missing the w, will post tomorrow). Am I possibly holding my pen wrong or need to make a flange adjustment? I can "square off" but it's rarely horizontal, and since I'm trying to keep my pen angle parallel to the slant lines, I feel I can't do both simultaneously. You had mentioned to make a '7' at the tops; is that to touch up after each letter?
Thank you!! This has helped my writing tremendously with just this first group.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: vonking1980 on April 14, 2017, 06:06:10 AM
@SMK  The 'w' words were a bit of a struggle. They are a little less consistent, especially with the exit strokes (too wide at times), and the bottom turns.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 15, 2017, 04:19:57 AM
@vonking1980

This is very nice work Yvonne. I really like the flow of your strokes, your letters have a nice rhythm to them.

I think you have learned the structure of this group and can tell when you miss the mark. This was the goal.

Let's do one round of the just the words written once each. Feel free to cut and paste together your best efforts. Pay attention to the following:

- Consistency in the longer strokes - some l's and 'b's aren't even all the way down. Try playing with writing quicker or slower to find a speed that gives you the best consistency.

- The dot of the 'i' (called a 'tittlle') should align with the top of the 't' - yours are a bit low.

As for the square tops - yes I did mean to draw a little 7 to touch up the tops. Touching up produces more consistent results than doing it in one go so it is good to have this ability in your arsenal.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: vonking1980 on April 15, 2017, 08:06:32 AM
@SMK Thank you so much for your encouragement and feedback, Salman.
I have attached the individual words.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on April 15, 2017, 10:21:14 AM
I like the way you have structured your practice sheet. For expert comments I will leave it to Salman. :D

Keep writing,
-Ashok
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: AllisonP on April 16, 2017, 06:32:08 AM
So it had been about five months sinice I last practiced. I started practicing again a couple of weeks ago so it would be great to get some feedback.

Thanks
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 23, 2017, 02:16:24 AM
@vonking1980 - nice work! Please move on to the next group.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 23, 2017, 02:24:13 AM
@AllisonP

This is not bad at all after such a long break. Here are some things to work on:

- The turns at the base line are too rounded. This 'turn' is actually not even a turn :-) the shaded stroke should 'end' at the base like just slightly to the right of the right side of the shade  - lift the pen here and then put it back to draw the exit hairline. The inside of the 'turn' is actually quite sharp - the curve is on the 'outside'. Study the examples I provided closely and you will see it :-)

- The joins are too abrupt. This is because your exit hairlines are not steep enough - the exit hairline is the entry hairline for the next letter and should meet it halfway up the x-height. At that point, the hairline's slant should match the slant line which will result in a smooth transition to the shaded stroke of the next letter.

- The shape of the counter on the second 'j' is what you are looking for. The counter should be a nice even teardrop shape.

You are almost there - just a little bit of refinement and you will have it.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: LAscripted on April 24, 2017, 06:53:33 AM
Here is my first attempt at forming these letters. I will admit that I am very nervous to post this and I feel I have a very long way to go. I do look forward to feedback so that I can improve.

Thank you for your time and feedback Salman!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on April 24, 2017, 08:08:39 AM
Wow Lauri. This is really good for the first attempt. :D
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 24, 2017, 12:54:38 PM
@LAscripted

That is indeed a good start Lauri. I quite agree with Ashok.

You have maintained a fairly consistent slant and have a good eye for proportions. This is a good foundation to build on.

Here are some pointers:

- The tapering happens only in the bottom 1/3rd of the x-height. In the example above, you start to taper as soon as you start the stroke resulting in a wedge shaped shaded stroke (shaded strokes are the thick ones). When you start the letter, maintain a constant width until you reach the last 1/3rd of the x-height, then start to lift off and move the pen slightly to the right so you end up just a tad to the right of the right side of the shade on the base line. Stop and lift your pen at this point before moving on to draw the hairline.

- The turns at the base line are too rounded. It seems to me that you are not stopping at the base line. Remember, we are not writing - we are drawing a series of strokes that make up letters. This is fundamentally different than how we write and will feel unnatural at the beginning.

- The shade of the 'j' should taper earlier. The last 1/3rd of the stroke is actually a hairline. The shaded stroke should taper off to a hairline by the time you get to the 1st descender line.

Have another go at these with the above in mind. Remember to practice in groups of 5 :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: [email protected] on May 14, 2017, 01:37:09 AM
@SMK @ash0kgiri

Salman- thank you kindly for this lesson. I have thoroughly enjoyed making my way through each letter thoughtfully.  Your advice of working in groups of five was more helpful then I had imagined. I'm glad I committed to following your method explicitly. In just a few short days I swear I already see a difference- if not in my work, certainly in my desire and mindfulness when it comes to practice. Thank you!

Ashok- thank you so much for bringing me here!!!! 

For my words...  I used an oblique holder, Hunt 101, Hp laser paper 32lb with walnut ink. 

I'm excited (and a little nervous) to get your thoughts, but oh so ready to keep moving forward!

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: ash0kgiri on May 14, 2017, 01:52:43 AM
WOW @Jennifer M. You are most welcome! :D
This is super duper first attempt. You slant, shade, hairline all are so very consistent. I see you lifting your pen at quite a few occasions which is good. Just try to square off the tops. Thats all I can say.

Salman would give you detailed feedback. Im sure he would be much impressed.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: [email protected] on May 14, 2017, 03:44:36 PM
Thank You, @ash0kgiri for your feedback! 

I promise am consciously lifting at the baseline, though on magnification even I cannot always see evidence of this.  I chalk that up to nib placement.  When drawing my next hairline up from the baseline- I seem to touch the stroke exactly at the point at which it meets the baseline.  Cross my heart... I am making the lift  :D.  I'm not sure if this is a good or bad habit.

The square tops are another beast.  At times I am able to achieve them, at others I am not.  I am unsure as to why.  Do I need to change my nib? I do think my nib needs to be changed, but that's another matter.  Is my hold wrong?  I've found if I twist my holder a little to the right my tines split nicely forming square tops.  At the same time, I worry that this method might be hard on my nibs wearing them out faster than I'd like.  Would a straight holder serve me better?  I would love some tips on this topic.  The less time I spend retouching, the better. 
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on May 15, 2017, 02:37:36 PM
@Jennifer M

You have given yourself a most excellent launching pad with this start Jennifer. The loop of that 'j' is a thing of beauty.

You have most of the basics in place already and we can jump right into refining your script.Here are a few things to work on:

- The straight strokes have a slight curve to them. This might be due to the speed your write at but I can't be sure. The curve is more noticeable in the longer strokes but it is there in the 'i' stroke too.

- You start to taper off the shaded stroke too early. Again, this might be due to the speed your write at. The taper should only start in the last 1/3rd of the x-height before reaching the base line.

- Some of your shaded strokes taper off before reaching the base line. This creates an inconsistency in the overall texture of your script. Once again, it seems to me like you are writing a bit too quickly for full control.

BTW - the lifts should be invisible if possible. It is great that you can do it naturally.

The square tops should be retouched. I don't expect, or recommend, doing it in one go. In time one can get pretty consistent with making the tops and bottoms square in one stroke but it will never be as precise as retouching.

I will be looking forward to your next attempt.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: [email protected] on May 15, 2017, 06:57:07 PM
@Jennifer M



- The straight strokes have a slight curve to them. This might be due to the speed your write at but I can't be sure. The curve is more noticeable in the longer strokes but it is there in the 'i' stroke too.

- You start to taper off the shaded stroke too early. Again, this might be due to the speed your write at. The taper should only start in the last 1/3rd of the x-height before reaching the base line.

- Some of your shaded strokes taper off before reaching the base line. This creates an inconsistency in the overall texture of your script. Once again, it seems to me like you are writing a bit too quickly for full control.


I am quite wowed by your critique.  After reading @ash0kgiri critique I began looking closer at my square tops.  I went back and started to write to see where I was going wrong.  It didn't take long to see that I'm writing too fast and using too much pressure, thus the slight curve in my straight stroke.  I find it truly amazing that you can pick that up without watching me write- simply brilliant! 

I've gone back to practicing groups of 5.  I will continue to work on slowing down and lightening my hand to gain more control as well as the other points you've touched on. 

Thank you so much for your time and detailed critique.  I am grateful for these lessons as they are fueling me to learn and that is really exciting!!!
-Jennifer
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on May 26, 2017, 02:43:05 AM
@Jennifer M - its amazing what you can pick up when you have made as many mistakes as I have :-)

Changing the speed of your writing will throw you off for a bit - things that were working before would be a bit harder while other things will become easier. Stick with it and you will soon realize the benefits.

Looking forward to your next submission.

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Tanja on May 28, 2017, 09:08:32 AM
Hello Salman and fellow learners,
I have just discovered this forum and great tutorial a few days ago and after practicing for a few days this is what I came up with.
A lot of inconsistency and I do not get the stokes squared at the top, but it is a pleasure to practice and to see improvement. Even if it is tiny.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on May 28, 2017, 06:40:03 PM
@Tanja

Welcome to the forum and to the tutorial Tanja.

You have a good control of the pen and have produced well balanced and even shades. You are a bit off on some of the basics but it shouldn't take you long to get the hang of it. I suggest you go through some of the feedback for other submissions too - it will help you learn what to look for in your own work.

Here are a few things for you to work on:

- Even slant. This is most easily fixed by turning the paper to match your natural stroke angle. Also, keep moving the paper so you are always writing in the sweet spot for you.

- Spacing. This is almost automatically fixed for you if you take care to join the letters with the hairline at 1/2 x-height. The exit hairline of a letter should join the following letter at 1/2 x-height. Your spacing will be perfect as long as your exit hairlines are consistent. You have a tendency to put the letters too close together causing the exit hairline to join the following letter closer to the base line.

- Square tops. Touch up your shaded strokes to make the top horizontal. This is done by adding a tiny '7' to the top of the shaded stroke and filling in any gaps. Take care not to make the top too thick or too tall. It is tricky but you will get the hang of it.

Happy practising :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: liavarm on June 03, 2017, 06:56:45 PM
Hi @SMK !! Here's another try at group 1 words  :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: schun on June 09, 2017, 10:08:21 AM
Hi Salman,

I would like to submit my practice sheet for review and critique by your expert eyes or by anybody else at the Forum who would be kind enough to lend me some of their expertise.

I have been practicing for a few months and am still struggling with consistency in my letter forms.

One particular challenge that I would like some guidance on is the squaring off at the top of the "i". I understand that I am supposed to square off the top of the letter flush with the x-height line. However, if I place the paper at an angle to draw the "i" straight down at 55 degrees, the tip of my nib is placed in such a way that the squaring-off is also at an angle (see second picture).

My concern is that a) this is not the correct letter form and b) the angled top (and in other letters, the bottom) will be even more noticeable if written in a larger size.

I suspect I am having such a basic problem because I am such a beginner, but am not sure what the best way to correct this is. Do I twist my holder ever so slightly to square off the top against the x-height line?

I hope this all makes sense!

Thank you for any advice you can share!

soo
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Simone Lettering on June 11, 2017, 02:15:18 AM
@schun

Maybe this blog and video will help you getting squared tops:
http://anintran.com/calligraphy/how-to-practice-squaring-full-pressure-stem-strokes (http://anintran.com/calligraphy/how-to-practice-squaring-full-pressure-stem-strokes)

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=piTKDOqLjJk (https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=piTKDOqLjJk)

Regards,
Simone
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on June 12, 2017, 09:14:32 AM
@schun - glad to have you join us :-)

In my opinion squaring of the tops is not something anyone should be overly concerned with. Even when you can do it in one stroke, you will not get it perfectly right most of the time. It is much better to get into the habit of re-touching your strokes to square the tops i.e. go back and draw a little '7' at the top of your strokes to square the tops and fill in any gaps. In the beginning, this will be a little hard to control as the scale is tiny but you will soon get the hang of it. Retouching is quick and will give you good results consistently.

At this stage, concentrate on the basics of the stroke:

- Get the slant right. You have a tendency to 'stand up' your strokes. Try rotating the paper counter-clockwise a little so the slit in your nib and the slant guides are more or less aligned. Also, move your paper after every inch or so of writing so you are always positioned in your sweet spot.

- Maintain the width of the letter all the way down and start to taper off only in the last 1/3rd of the stroke. You start to taper off too early resulting in wedge shaped 'i's.

- Lift your pen at the base line before continuing with the exit hairline - makes for a more consistent stroke.

- Do go back and re-touch the tops to make them square.

Please feel free to ask if you have any questions :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: paperandflair on June 29, 2017, 09:04:18 PM
Hi Salman,

I'm new to the forum and I just found this board.  I hope I'm not too late to the party  :)

I've been practicing for a few months with basic strokes, letters,and words, but I really want to try to improve consistency of my letter forms.  I'm a lefty using an lefty oblique holder, hunt 101 nib, and Higgins ink.  I was switching back and forth between eternal black and sepia because I was having a lot of trouble (as you can tell I'm sure) and I thought it was my ink, but I think it was my actually my nib.  Please ignore the blotches, I'm not used to this nib and I have to dip it in ink a lot more than I'm used to, so I end up with blobs when my ink runs out  :-[ 

(https://theflourishforum.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FTWZrRMw.jpg%3F1&hash=f0138750a201a39660e6150266655fe0)

I'd appreciate any input or advice on how to improve.  Thanks so much everyone!

-Anika
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: paperandflair on July 05, 2017, 06:24:17 PM
Hi everyone!

I've been using Mr. Geoff Ford’s method of practising in groups of 5.  I definitely still need more practice, but it's so much better than when I started. Here's what I've come up with for group 1 letters  :)

(https://theflourishforum.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FR27ZRCC.jpg%3F1&hash=c70c64694c2899e5f9b4f8af92d94a37) 


Would love to get some feedback on ways to improve, or any tips or tricks.  Thanks so much!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on July 05, 2017, 08:34:43 PM
@paperandflair - sorry for the delay in replying to you Anika. I will try my best to get back to you later today.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on July 06, 2017, 05:56:34 PM
@paperandflair

Hi Anika - sorry for the delay in getting back to you after your first submission. I try to catch up at least once a week but don't always make it.

The good news first: You have good control of your strokes and a nice sense of rhythm. The bottom turns are quite regular resulting in uniform spacing. This is an excellent foundation to build on. You are squaring the tops nicely too.

A couple of technical adjustments will make a big difference I think.

- You are lifting off too early. The shaded stroke should be uniform until 1/3rd of the x-height from the base line. Reducing pressure too early results in wedge shaped forms. You will see this more clearly if you reduce the thickness of the shade.

- The slant is varying a bit - see the 'b' and 'j' in the last word.

- Some of the longer strokes are curved - most notably in the 'l' and 't' in 'wilt' on the second line but you can see it in other places too. This might be a result of drawing too quickly. You might lose a bit of control and most of the rhythm if you slow down but stick with it and you will gain major benefits later.

- The shades are a bit too thick - reducing the shades by about 1/4th will improve the texture IMO. This is a suggestion and not 'required' so give it a try. Feel free to go back to the heavy shades if you like it better this way.

Please feel free to ask if any of the above are not clear :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: paperandflair on July 06, 2017, 09:05:21 PM
Hi Salman,

Thanks so much for your feedback, I really appreciate it. 

I'm still having a bit of trouble with when to lift off, either I lift off too early or too late, but it's something I'll have keep practicing.  I agree with you about the thickness of the shade, I was practicing today with thinner shades and I think I like them better than the thickness I have here.  Yes I still have trouble with the slant, I tried drawing them on the practice paper, but I was going through so many it was getting too time consuming, I might try printing a darker guideline to see if it helps.

I'll keep practicing group 1 and re-post next week.  Hopefully I can take all your feedback and improve some more.

Thanks again :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sally Ellington on July 19, 2017, 07:16:43 AM
Here is lesson 1. I know I need work on spacing and slant consistency. Thank you for your feedback on other areas.
Sally
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on July 26, 2017, 03:48:23 PM
@Sally Ellington

Hi Sally - sorry for the delay in getting back to you. I had a rather nasty run in with a virus last week and am just now getting over it.

I cannot tell much from the image you uploaded - a larger size would help :-)

Your slant and spacing is pretty good. The biggest issue I see the inconsistency of stroke width i.e. varying pressure along the length of the letters.

I also see a tendency to start the lift-off a bit too early resulting in wedge shaped 'i's.

The weight of your stroke i.e. the thickness of the shaded strokes, is well balanced with the size of the writing and I can see a clear improvement in control from the beginning to the end of the worksheet.

I will be looking forward to the next one.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sally Ellington on July 26, 2017, 09:15:51 PM
I'm very sorry to hear that you were sick. :P I hope you are feeling much better. Thank you for your feedback. I will work on those issues and keep practicing!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: schun on August 05, 2017, 07:15:31 PM
Hi Salman,

What a privilege that we get such personalized feedback from you - thank you so much.

It has taken me way longer to post another practice sheet. It's tough finding practice time and my progress never feels "good enough" to post.

Anyways, this is where I'm at. I still have trouble with consistent spacing between letters, especially moving from an "i" to an "l".

Thank you so much Salman, or anybody else, for your comments!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 14, 2017, 05:03:26 PM
@schun - welcome to the lessons. You have a lovely rhythm to your writing and a very consistent slant. Very nice.

Here are a few things to work on:

1. The shades are a bit too thick for this size of writing. A tad less heavy on the shading will improve the texture of your writing IMO.

2. The shaded strokes should start to taper about 1/3rd of the x-height about the base line. Yours start to taper too late most of the times. The first 't' in both 'utility's is done well in this respect. Make the others like this too.

3. The crossbar of the 't' is placed halfway between the top of the letter and the waist line while the dot of the 'i' (called a tittle) is placed even with the top of the 't' - this way the crossbar of the 't' and the tittle of the 'i' never collide.

4. The 'b' is a full length letter like the 'l'.

5. The shade of the 'y' should taper (from the left) and come to a point at about the 1st descender line. The remainder of stroke below the 1st descender line and the loop are drawn as a hairline.

I will be looking forward to your next attempt at this group of letters.

- Salman
Title: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1 practice
Post by: Vipul on August 15, 2017, 01:40:31 AM
Very recently started with copperplate. Discovered this site recently, and then realised I was doing it wrong :-\
Gone back to basics. Spent today on this. Still need to square the tops. And prevent railroading. :-(
Comments and help welcome.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 15, 2017, 02:34:27 PM
@Vipul - is this practice done following the instructions (in the first post) for group 1?

It seems to me that you are writing far too quickly and may not have enough ink on the nib. (The breather hole should be covered in ink when you start writing.)

Also, you need to lift the nib off the page at the base line in order to make sure the following hairline is drawn without any pressure. You can do it in one go after you have gotten used to it and can do the hairlines with zero pressure. In your practice above, you clearly have the nib under pressure when coming out of the shade into the exit hairline.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on August 16, 2017, 01:10:08 AM
Thanks for the feedback.
I'm not using a dip pen, since unable to find one.
I tried lifting the pen, but there is hardly any difference in the stroke width.
Still, I'll try and do it like you suggest.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 16, 2017, 02:08:21 AM
It is not just the stroke width but the way the turn at the base line is made. Your turns are far too wide forcing the next stroke too far away and still joining it lower than the mid-point of the x-height.

Take as much time as you need on the 'i' stroke. The first group usually takes quite a bit of work but it saves you a lot of headache when you tackle the subsequent groups.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on August 16, 2017, 07:13:34 AM
Yes, I can see what you mean about the wide stroke. However, not able to manage it smoothly. Having read a few tutorials, the information has got all jumbled up....
Trying to sort it out, hence just sticking to i. Will progress to other letters once I'm comfortable with what I make. Will practice and put up once am a little more confident about my work.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 16, 2017, 08:12:38 AM
Stick with it. You will love the feeling when you get it. It is not that far - you are almost there.

BTW - which pen are you using for your practice?

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on August 16, 2017, 09:19:35 PM
ASA Athlete with a modified Kanwrite nib.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: prasad on August 17, 2017, 03:05:13 AM
Hi @Vipul ,

The Kanwrite modified nib will not duplicate the dip nib.  Do you have the extra flex EEF nib from Sandeep?
Ask him for that in a Desire pen and that works a little better. You can also ask him for that in an untipped option.  Bit scratchier but works well. 

You are better off to get a dip nib and holder if you are serious about copperplate and this script.  The Kanwrite option is ok for modern calligraphy.

Send me a private message and I will work out holder, nibs and ink options for you.
happy writing
Prasad
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on August 17, 2017, 05:14:26 AM
Hi @prasad
Thanks for the kind offer. I am using a Kanwrite nib, by Sandeep from Bangalore. I sent him the Athlete since I did not like the Desire plasticy feel.
I'm in Air Force and posted to Bagdogra, and getting stuff is difficult, to say the least. Even Amazon balks at delivery.
I do have a dip nib as well as an elbow nib, but somehow, the ink holding capacity of these are totally unlike the nibs I see on YouTube. I've also ordered an EEF modified nib, directly from Kanwrite, (Me Sanjay) which I should get in a few days. Let's see....
I'm using this pen + nib as of now, basically to train myself on the basics. Hopefully, as and when I'm able to produce consistent strokes, I'll graduate to dip pen.
Would like to know what paper and ink to use, to avoid feathering and blotting.
Thanks
Vipul.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sally Ellington on September 09, 2017, 06:38:50 PM
I think I'm making progress.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 10, 2017, 03:20:41 AM
@Sally Ellington

Nice work Sally. You have gotten the hang of it.

I think you are ready to move on to the next lesson but would like to see one more attempt containing all the letters in this group.

A couple of things to note while you are practicing for that:

1. Your turns at the base lines are fine as they are. However, if you bring the shaded stroke just a hair more to the right at the point it touches the base line it will balance the letters just beautifully. In the first 'i' stroke in the 'u' of 'just' you started your hairline a little to the right of where the shaded stroke ended - it would have been just perfect if the shaded stroke curved a bit to meet the hairline where you started it. I hope this makes sense - please feel free to let me know if I need to clarify.

2. The loop of the 'j' is a little unbalanced. The part of the loop on the right side below the first descender should be curved a bit more so the 'pointy' part moves a bit to the left. This will make the loop appear more balanced. At present it is more curved on the left (hairline) side.

Both of these are refinements but your script is at a hight enough level that I think these are well within your capability. I am sure these will pose no problem for you to execute.

I will be looking forward to your next practice sheet.

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sally Ellington on September 11, 2017, 02:30:21 PM
Thank you for your feedback, Salman. When I put on my stronger reading glasses, I can see what you are talking about with the hairline in the "u".  ::)
I will work on the j loop, also.
I am still struggling a bit with finding the right slant to keep my paper to make consistent strokes. I'm sure that will come with more practice to find what is most comfortable for me. I am making headway and am so appreciative of your time and attention.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on September 23, 2017, 12:19:49 PM
This is my first practice with an oblique pen. Many thanks to Prasad, for the wonderful gift of nibs and the holder...
The 303 is such a dream nib.... Guess it's going to take a long time to learn how to write properly with it.....
But here is my first trial, for all it's worth.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sally Ellington on September 23, 2017, 01:07:19 PM
Not perfect, but I think I have included all the letters for lesson 1.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on September 23, 2017, 02:04:23 PM
Discovered the correct way to hold an oblique pen.... Thanks to YouTube.
This is far from perfect, but still much better than my first attempt, 1 post back :P
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 23, 2017, 06:43:39 PM
@Sally Ellington

Nice work Sally. With the exception of some minor adjustments, you have mastered the first group of letters. The rest of the groups will go much quicker now. Please move on to the next group.

A couple of things to keep in mind while you practice:

- The last stroke of the 'w' and the 'b' should curve back slightly after it goes above 1/2 x-height. This will let you draw the 'blob' inside the curve and bring it down to about 1/3 from the waist line. Your blobs are too small and therefore cause the connecting hairline to go almost horizontal.

- The dots of the 'i' and the 'j' (called tittles) should be the same width as the shaded stroke - so just a little bigger.

I will be looking forward to your work on the next group. Please do keep practicing the first group from time to time so you don't lose the touch.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 23, 2017, 06:53:33 PM
@Vipul

Your letter shapes are pretty good so you are off to a solid start.

Here are a few things to keep in mind:

- Your letters are not consistently touching the baseline. I suspect this is because you are not drawing your stroke to the base line and then lifting for a beat before moving on with the exit hairline. I insist on this stop-start method to develop a habit of consistently hitting the baseline. You can go back to drawing them in one go once you are done with these lessons and you will notice the difference.

- After you draw a shaded stroke, go back and 'square the top' i.e. draw a tiny '7' at the top of the stroke and fill in any gap so the top part is horizontal and 'square'.

- The little 'blob' on the 'w' and the 'b' should be filled in. Yours have a gap in there. Also, it should be a bit smaller - about 1/3rd of the x-height from the waist line.

- The loop of the 'j' is too rounded at the bottom. The widest part of the lopp is at around the 1st descender line. The right side should start curving to the left as it reaches the 1st descender line.

I noticed that you are writing at different x-heights even on the same sheet - this can get confusing. I have provided pdf's of guidelines to be used for these lessons. They are drawn for 1/4 inch x-height. It will be easier for you to follow my instructions as they are written for the guidelines I provide.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on September 23, 2017, 07:02:18 PM
Thanks for the feedback. This was after an Eureka moment of learning how to correctly hold an Oblique pen, so kindly gifted by Prasad. Just the second attempt with an oblique pen.

The sizes are different, because I'm having issues with asmaller letters size. Tried to make it smaller, but then the curve goes for a toss.

I had delibrately left the blob on w and b unfilled. Next time, will fill them up. My bad. Thought they were supposed to be unfilled, and that's the reason they extended till about half way. Was aware that they should be one third from top, but was finding it difficult to do so...

Guess I'll do another page today... This time with walnut ink.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on September 23, 2017, 07:06:38 PM
May I have the link to the guidelines again. I know I had found them earlier, but can't seem to locate them now. Thanks
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on September 23, 2017, 07:50:30 PM
@Vipul - the link to the guidelines are at the bottom of the first post in this thread: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1 (http://theflourishforum.com/forum/index.php?topic=5069.msg63812#msg63812)

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on September 23, 2017, 11:26:36 PM
Thank you so much.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on September 24, 2017, 01:29:29 PM
Today was the second day of using the oblique pen. Can't identify this nib (pic attached) but it's beautiful and so delicate. Love the hairlines I get. The ink is make from walnut crystals. Beautiful ink, though I seem to have made it very saturated. @Salman Khattak have tried to keep in mind your critique. Squared most of the tops.
Tried words with group 1. The size, I was playing with 2 sizes. 1 where ascenders are x height, and the middle row where they are 2x height. Somehow, 1x seems easier, for some reason.

Have been informed that the nib is the Esterbrook 354.
Title: Today's practice
Post by: Vipul on October 01, 2017, 02:00:54 AM
Today's practice. Finally managed to sit and put some ink on paper.
Normal paper
Oblique Holder with Gillott 303 nib
Walnut ink
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 04, 2017, 12:56:02 AM
@Vipul

This is good work Vipul. The spacing between the letters is a little off but withing acceptable parameters for the first group.

I would like to see you have a go a the assigned words in group 1. I don't need to see the rest of the practice. Also, you don't have to write them all in one go - just send me the best effort for each word :-)

I would also like to see the work done on the guide sheets I have provided. It is easier for me to give you feedback if we are using an established reference.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on October 05, 2017, 12:29:40 AM
Practice of Group-1 words as directed. Finally managed to print the guide sheets, as recommended by you.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on October 05, 2017, 05:02:29 AM
Had a bit of time, so completed the page. The issue that I'm having is that ink gets over halfway through the 'l' or any stroke from the header line to the base line. Trying to figure out how to reenter a line midway and maintain the line.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 12, 2017, 01:32:06 PM
@Vipul

Sorry for the delay in getting back to you. Things have been rather hectic the last couple of weeks.

Thank you for using the guidesheets - we can get down to the nitty gritty now.

You have developed good control of the pen and have nicely even strokes and shades. You are almost there for this group but still need to work on a couple of things that are too important to be ignored.

- You are starting your lift (the start of the taper at the end of the stroke) too early in a lot of the letters. The tapering should start about 1/3rd of the x-height from the base line. You have a number of letters where the tapering starts at or even above 1/2 x-height.

- The weight of the stroke i.e. the thick part, is too thick for this size of lettering. This might be contributing to the early lift off as there is a lot of ground to cover in the curve down to the baseline. Try reducing the thickness of the shaded strokes by about a third. This will also make your letters get closer together - which leads us to the next issue.

- Your letters are too far apart. This is caused by the turn at the baseline being too rounded. Are you lifting your pen at the baseline btw? The width of the letter 'i' (including the exit hairline but not the entry hairline) should be half it's height. This makes for a rectangular form, yours are too square.

I suspect changing the above will throw you off for a bit but with the control you are exhibiting (and with a 303, no less) I am sure you will be able to get the hang of it soon :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on October 12, 2017, 07:45:45 PM
Thanks for the feedback.... Will get down to it and get back to you....
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on October 13, 2017, 03:24:18 AM
@Salman Khattak
Could see a noticable difference once I reduced the shadow width.
Think I have the hang of it, though it might take some time to get it steady....
Posting this to get pointers on other aspects that might have gone off in this attempt to get the width, turn at baseline and hence the spacing in order.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sue W on October 13, 2017, 05:54:48 AM
Hello,

I'm new to the forum and looking forward to getting help with my Copperplate Calligraphy.

My nib of preference is a Zebra G, however for this Group 1 exercise, I've used a Leonardt Principal in an oblique holder.

Now to try and load a picture 

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on October 14, 2017, 09:21:21 AM
@Salman Khattak
You were right and the changes have made things different. I find myself sliding into the old strokes.....
I think I've overcome it to a large extent, but awaiting your feedback....
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 16, 2017, 04:51:16 PM
@Vipul

This is much better in terms of the turns at the base line.

Your shades are still a bit to thick but it works so we will let it be. Please move on to the next group.

Now for a confession - the tall letters are supposed to be double the x-height but the taller length looked so good with the thick shades you have  that I let it be. It is much more difficult to maintain uniform shade over the longer distance but you have done an admirable job. You can keep the taller height for the rest of the lessons if you want but I will be quite happy with the shorter version too.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 16, 2017, 04:57:36 PM
@Sue W

Welcome to the lessons Sue.

We will start with fixing the basic 'i' stroke first. This will set you up with a good base to build on. You have a good sense of overall letter shapes and a consistent slant. However, the tapering of the shade starts way too early, sometimes as soon as you start the 'i' stroke. This causes the shaded part of the letter to be wedge shaped.

The shade of the 'i' (and even the longer strokes of the 'l' and the 't') should be of uniform width from the starting point to about 1/3 of the x-height from the baseline. Start to reduce the pressure on the nib at this point while simultaneously moving the nib to the right. This will cause a curved taper on the left side of the stroke while the right side will remain aligned with the slant. You should finish with zero pressure on the nib as you reach the base line just a little to right of the right side of the shaded stroke.

I hope the above makes sense - it is much easier to do than to explain :-)

Let's see another go at the letters in this group with the above in mind.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on October 16, 2017, 08:43:10 PM
@Salman Khattak
Thanks. I was aware that you had recommended going up to the first ascender line, but the height seemed off in proportion.
The change in thickness and late tapering is still affecting my linear strokes, and even though I tried to cheat by changing over to a less flexible nib, came back to 303 since it is somehow what I'm most comfortable with. Love it's flex, and now with a tape hack, it holds enough ink to write 8-10 letters.
Thanks for the feedback. Moving to the next group, but will keep working on this group too...
A suggestion for an additional lesson, which may come handy to a lot of people on Composition of a piece. What should be the interline spacing and how does the ascenders height affect the visual effect of, say a quote or a poem, which I hope to be able to write, by sometime next year.  :P
Vipul
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sue W on October 17, 2017, 12:54:03 AM
Salman,
Thank you so much for taking the time, I appreciate your comments and have another sample to share.  Hope I've managed to carry the shade far enough into the stroke this time.  The tops of these are not very squared so will work on that.  So sorry to submit a copy with ink blobs etc. careless of me.  The paper I'm using is Bleedproof Marker Paper, very thin and doesn't go through the printer very well. I will try to find a better quality printing paper here.  Thanks again for your time.
Sue
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 17, 2017, 08:01:53 AM
@Sue W

That was quick Sue - and you got it on the first attempt.

Now for the next bit on spacing that I am sure will be easy for you.

- Your letter shapes are very good but the spacing is a bit too tight. Start the next letter a little further away from the previous one such that the exit hairline of the previous letter connects to the shaded stroke of the following letter at 1/2 x-height. If you look at the word 'till' on the last line, you will notice that the hairlines are joining the following letters quite low and rather than gracefully merging with the shade, the exit hairlines are 'impaling' them. The last 'l' is a bit further away and you can see the join is much more graceful.

- The lower loop of the 'j' is well formed but the shade is carried a bit too far down. The shade should taper off to a hairline by the first descender line. The right side of the loop below the 1st descender line is drawn as a hairline.

- The 'blob' on the last stroke of the 'w' should be inside the counter space, only the hairline comes out. Yours are half in and half out. It is done better in the last 'b'.

- The crossbar of the 't' should be a bit wider. Also, the dot of the 'i' (called a tittle) should match the width of the shade.

Don't worry about squaring the top in one go. Just go back and draw a tiny '7' at the top of your stroke to square it off and fill in any gaps. Be careful of making the stroke go higher than the waist line though.

I will be looking forward to your next attempt.

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sue W on October 17, 2017, 09:21:46 PM
Good Morning Salman,

I hope this piece is a little better, still having paper issues but will carry on.

I hope I've allowed a more pleasing space between my letters, will keep this in mind with more practice later today.  The long stroke of a 'j' is also something for me to perfect (I think) keeping a slant and a steady smooth descending loop.....practice!

Thanks again for taking the time :-)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 19, 2017, 12:21:23 PM
@Sue W

You almost have it Sue. 'wit' and 'till' on the last line are pretty good. However, you have lost control of your slant. You will have an easier time maintaining slant if you turn the paper anti-clockwise until the slant lines are more or less in line with the slit in your nib.

Practice for a few days and then post just the words assigned for this group.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sue W on October 19, 2017, 05:47:41 PM
Good Morning Salman,

Hmm, yes it seems I correct one thing only to lose sight of another:-\  .

Thank you, I'll do as you suggest.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sue W on October 22, 2017, 05:06:55 AM
Hello Salman,  how's your weekend? relaxing I hope :)

Sunday evening here and I've one more copy that I hope corrects those points you raised.

I've spent a bit of time writing this weekend, trying a couple of different paper/ink/nib combinations. 
Anyway here goes for round 3.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sue W on October 22, 2017, 11:39:35 PM
Monday 23rd my practice piece, no messing around today straight into this one!

This paper, which is not great, seems to handle better by not putting it through either inkjet or laser printer...go figure!

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on October 30, 2017, 10:10:07 PM
Sorry for the delay in getting back to you Sue ( @Sue W )

Your slant is still off but the letter shapes are good. I think it will help if you turn your paper counter clockwise a little.

The loop of the 'j' has lost its shape too. The shade of the long stroke should taper to a hairline by the 1st descender line - the rest of the loop down and back up is a hairline. The inside shape of the 'j' (called the counter) should be like an almond - yours are too straight on the right side and rounded on the left.

Also, start squaring off the tops of the shaded strokes by going back and drawing a tiny '7' at the top and filling in any empty space.

Lets have one more go at the words in this group.

- Salman


Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sue W on October 31, 2017, 06:37:55 AM
@Salman Khattak

Thanks again for your time Salman. I see what you mean regarding the descending loops 🙄. Away at the moment, so will get to it once i’m home.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sue W on November 05, 2017, 11:32:13 PM
@Salman Khattak

Hi Salman,

I'm attaching my latest submission for your kind attention.  I hope I'm not wasting your time, as I can't seem to get everything together......slant, thick to thin strokes and nicely shaped descending loops. Trying hard means I've slipped back to a death grip on my pen which doesn't help!  Hey ho here goes!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on November 06, 2017, 12:18:52 PM
@Sue W

Learning any hand can be frustrating at times and Copperplate is one of the most challenging. You are doing great. It might not feel that way to you but I can definitely see your script mature. Have you noticed you are thinking less about the basic structure and more about the finer points of spacing and balance?

I am quite happy with your letterforms in this example. The spacing still needs work though - look at 'jilt', each of the letters in this word should be spaced equally. Also, the l-t space in 'built' is too tight while the one in 'jilt' is a tad wide. Pay attention to this in your practice.

I think you are ready to move on to Group 2. Keep an eye on the spacing and do include letters from group 1 in your practice (and play) sessions.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Sue W on November 06, 2017, 04:49:32 PM
@Salman Khattak

I’m certainly very aware of more than just drawing each of the letters now  😊 as you say.  For this last submission I concentrated on slant and letter shapes. I look at It now and yes, it’s glaringly obvious my spacing is off. I’d add the w-I in will too.  I will pay more attention in future whilst I practice my copperplate. Thanks so much for your feedback Salman it’s much appreciated. Sue
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: MariaCe on November 10, 2017, 10:03:23 PM
Hi Salman,

Here is my best practice from group 1, I still need to work on the "j" loop. It is really nice to practice in set of 5 letters but also very difficult to be consistent.

I am looking forward to your comments.  ;D

Maria
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on November 18, 2017, 01:55:21 PM
@MariaCe

Welcome to the lessons Maria.

You are off to a good start. You have a good sense of spacing which is an excellent foundation to build on.

The first thing to work on is to get the structure of 'i' right. You are starting to taper off too early. The shade should be consistent in width from the waist line to about 1/3 x-height above the base line. The lift off (or tapering) occurs only in the last part of the stroke with a slight movement to the right until you end up with zero pressure at the base line just a little to the right side of the shaded stroke. You lift at this point and then put the pen back to make the exit hairline. I insist on this lift off during these lessons to establish the feeling of zero pressure at the base line.

The turns at the base line are the same for the longer letters like the 't' and the 'l'. After you get a good handle on the 'i', practice with words like 'till' and 'bill' to develop consistency.

Give yourself plenty of time to get this. There is no hurry :-)

- Salman
Title: Group 1 Minuscules
Post by: Foxmorepatty on December 28, 2017, 03:50:27 PM
Hope my images load from the computer.  Been battling with the iPad to no avail.  Anyway, here is my first attempt at Group 1.  Looking forward to your comments!  Thank you.

Oops, posted in wrong spot.  Do not see how to move, sorry!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 28, 2017, 05:32:08 PM
@Foxmorepatty - I merged the new topic you created into the one with all the replies. In future, just hit 'Reply' at the end of the topic :-)

The pictures you uploaded are low resolution. I cannot see much detail but here are some basic things to check:

- The bottom of the 'i' stroke is too rounded. This caused the exit hairline to join the next shaded stroke below the halfway point of the x-height.

- The taper of the 'i' stroke starts too early in some cases.

- The slant is inconsistent - see 'butt' on the last line the two t's are standing up compared to the 'b'.

- The dots of the 'i' should be at the same level and should be the same size. the two dots in 'jilt' are different sizes and at different levels.

Let's give it another go with these in mind :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on December 29, 2017, 11:28:42 AM
Hi Salman,

Thanks for your input.  Here is a second try.  Hope there is some improvement! 
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on December 29, 2017, 01:03:04 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Yes - the slant and spacing both are much improved. The counter shape of the 'j' is very nice too - especially the first 'jill' on the third to last line.

The 'i' stroke, while a lot more consistent now, still needs a bit of adjustment. The bottom turn is still too rounded. The roundness is being caused by the shaded stroke being brought too far to the right near the base line. Try to finish the shaded stroke about halfway between where it touches the base line now and the right side of the shaded stroke and you will have a nicer exit hairline.

Also, you are drawing the shaded part a bit too far down now - it is nearly full thickness almost all the way to the base line. It should start to taper visibly 1/3rd of the way from the base line. So somewhere between this and your previous attempt would be just right :-)

I think the heavier shading gives your script a better balance at this x-height.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on December 31, 2017, 10:21:02 PM
Struggling along with this, having a hard time seeing it (the too roundness of the i) and executing the change in hairline.  Will post attempts tomorrow.  Happy New Year!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 01, 2018, 01:16:49 PM
Well, today looks a little better than yesterday.  I think I figured out "how" to make the adjustment for the i, etal, it is more a matter of executing it!  I hope I am not going backwards and there is an iota of progress!  The x height of this worksheet is just a bit large for me, it seems.  Or that is my excuse!  Frustrating!  Now I get to go build wedding invitations.  Waiting for my new Soap ink stirrer to arrive to begin addressing.  The one I got as a Christmas gift has something wrong with it, yielding a lack of oomph to stir, requiring a replacement.  Happy New Years Day!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 01, 2018, 09:20:50 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Your script is getting more consistent but lets work on the 'i' stroke a bit before looking at other things.

In the line drawing I made of the 'i' stroke, you will notice that the inside part of the shade does not turn. All of the tapering happens on the left side of the shade in the last 1/3rd of the stroke coming to the baseline under the right side of the shaded stroke. This point is quite a bit off to the right in your examples which gives the bottom of the stroke a rounded shape. The roundness at the bottom comes from the left side of the shaded stroke continuing on to the exit hairline.

Please do let me know if this is not clear and I will be happy to explain again. I insist on my students understanding this part as it helps drive the spacing and is also useful in the other strokes. Once you understand this, you are free to adjust the stroke to the roundness of your liking - that is ok as long as it is a conscious stylistic choice.

Let me see 3 groups of 5 'i's paying attention to the transition from the shade to the exit hairline as I have described above.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 03, 2018, 01:17:43 PM
Here I have made you a lot of groups of 5 i's!  I do understand and am trying to keep the righthand side of the nib down for a complete stroke with allowing the left side of the nib to lift to create the curve of the turn.  I am trying to remember to lift the pen at the bottom of the line before executing the connector.  I hope you see improvement.  It looks a little better to me, yet not quite hitting the nail on the head.  Thank you so much for your time.  Patty
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 03, 2018, 06:03:52 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Hi Patty - I have taken one of the railroaded 'i's to illustrate the roundness of the bottom turn in tha attached image.

You just need to move the pen to the right a little as you start to lift up at the bottom of the stroke. The movement automatically creates the curve on the left side of the stroke. It might be helpful to just make the shaded strokes without the exit hairline until you get the hang of it.

Let me know if you have further questions.

- Salman

ps. I have updated the image file with more annotations to make things clearer.

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 03, 2018, 07:38:28 PM
I will give it a go!  Thank you, Salman.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 03, 2018, 07:55:49 PM
I will give it a go!  Thank you, Salman.

So, would you say the first two are okay, excepting the entry stroke?
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 03, 2018, 08:26:42 PM
I will give it a go!  Thank you, Salman.

So, would you say the first two are okay, excepting the entry stroke?

The first 2 in the image I posted are from the exemplar for this lesson :-) I put them there for comparison so you can see what I want the bottom turn to look like. Yours is the one in the middle.

ETA: I have updated the image file to clarify things a bit.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 03, 2018, 10:37:54 PM
Thanks. I will keep trying.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 05, 2018, 05:32:30 PM
Think I have the idea and execution connected better now!  Please say I do!

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 05, 2018, 06:17:30 PM
@Foxmorepatty

You got it Patty. Just watch out for the roundness as it might creep back in. The second check marked one from the left on the last line is still too round but the others are good - especially the third and fourth check marked ones.

Let's see some 'u's and 'w's next. Remember to work in groups of 5 and stop to analyze after each group.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 08, 2018, 02:19:27 PM
Getting there slowly.  At least aware!  Hope to move along, but can keep at this if you think I should.  Thanks!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 08, 2018, 04:07:10 PM
@Foxmorepatty

OK - you got the 'i' nicely in the previous exercise but in this one the exit hairline goes too far to the right. The exit hairline should match the slant guide by mid x-height. After that, it should continue up to the waist line at the same slant as the slant guide. You have a tendency to make the exit hairline too flat which causes the bottom to appear too rounded - make it a little steeper.

Also, in the 'w's the shade of the 'i' stroke is coming too far to the right again. It should end pretty much below the right side of the shaded stroke.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 09, 2018, 01:21:47 PM
Here we go again.  I think I have figured out part of my problem.  I need to begin releasing the pressure on the nib sooner, more mid down stroke.  Trying to pay a lot of attention to making each part of the letter.  Seem to be a little shaky today.  Also, using stiffer nib seems to be helping me not put as much pressure (I do not like it as much-but for the moment)....Thank you. 
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 09, 2018, 01:50:24 PM
@Foxmorepatty

You have some very nice 'i' strokes in this exercise sheet but I don't think the early lifting of pressure will help you. I like the shape of the first 'i' on the second line the best. The bottom part gets more and more rounder as you go down the page.

I talk about the basic strokes at the end of this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmq0vGsVtkU (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmq0vGsVtkU) - I think it will help.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 09, 2018, 07:18:31 PM
Thanks.  Looking back at some of my earlier practice, I was more consistent for a while there and hit it more often than not.  Still an improvement from my beginning... I will try again tomorrow.  Getting very busy right now.  I hope to have my confidence bolstered soon as I need to get my son’s wedding invitations addressed.  I don’t think any of the folks are calligraphers, so not to worry too much except for making mistakes and ruining the envelopes.

I do appreciate the focus on getting it right and all you do to help me achieve that.  Thanks, Salman!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 10, 2018, 12:20:39 AM
@Foxmorepatty

Thank you for sticking with it Patty. The first group typically takes the longest - the others fly by once you get the basics right.

BTW - your Copperplate is already at a sufficiently high level to address the envelopes beautifully. The envelopes will look good as long as you have a consistent slant, size and spacing. I am sure you can easily achieve that. How many envelopes do you need to do?

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 10, 2018, 01:23:39 AM
Thank you, Salman, for the encouragement.  I have been neglecting practice of other minuscules and Majuscules and feel very rusty overall.  Do you have a suggestion for integrating specific practice for this tutorial with overall practice? 

Answering your question, I have about 90 invitations to send by Jan. 26.  In preparation, I sent 75 Christmas cards and learned a couple of ways to address envelopes, using guides, centering, spacing, etc.  I have a good lightbox and laser leveling device to project straight lines.  Previosly, I purchased some blank envelopes of the same stock and size (the dreaded Crane Lettra).  In fact, researching suggested nibs to use on Crane Lettra was how I happened upon this forum!  I have found that I can manage a stiffer Nikko G using a light hand on the upstrokes, and have surprised myself transitioning to more flexible nibs.  Not sure which will win.

I think I may have confused myself switching back and forth between nibs and holders.  Perhaps it is better to stick with one for awhile?  One day I should experiment with dowels of different diameters, whiich I have read is a good way to find a comfortable grip for a custom made holder.

Well, thanks again. 
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 10, 2018, 02:03:39 AM
@Foxmorepatty

I think I will add a bit about practice to the first lesson. I don't expect students to just work on one group - this is just what we are working on for feedback and for your focused practice sessions. These sessions should be no longer than 30 minutes. The rest of the time is for 'play' and there are no restrictions. The idea is that your play writing will progress to your practice levels as we go through the groups. You will notice that happening automatically and it is a wonderful feeling to realize that you are automatically using what you learned in the lessons.

Another thing to keep in mind is that you will usually see the results of practice the next time you sit down to write. This happens in sports too :-)

A good way to get rid of the cobwebs is to take the practice words from all the groups and play with them for half an hour a group at a time several times a day. You will begin to feel the letters flow better in 2-3 days.

Also, don't write too many envelopes in one go. About 5-7 at a time is a good chunk. Then take a few minutes off - get up and come back to the next set. This will keep the work from getting monotonous and you will get much less tired.

It is fun to experiment with holders and nibs but it helps if you have a standard setup you are familiar with. For me it is the Hunt 101 in an oblique holder. I know how the nib will work in most cases as I have used it enough with different mediums on different papers. Interestingly, I just happened on this combination. I used to swear by the Gillott 303 and the Brause EF-66. I still use the 303 for fine work but 99% of the time I find myself reaching for the holder with the 101 :-)

Best of luck with the envelopes. You have plenty of time to get ready for it. Give yourself a few days to get in the zone. Feel free to put the lessons on the back burner for now. What you have is plenty good enough.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 10, 2018, 02:40:19 PM
I feel like today was better.  I took the liberty of practicing the other group 1 letters and words since I was feeling good and to avoid boredom.  Anyway, here it is, not perfect, but I think much improved.  Today I used a Leonardo Principal nib.  Thank you!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 11, 2018, 09:31:09 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Getting better Patty but still too rounded at the base line. The issue is that you bring the shade too far to the right when you start to taper off - the last 't' in the group of 5 on the first line is what you want to shoot for. You will notice that the shade ends just a tiny bit to the right of the right side of the shaded stroke.

Also pay attention to the 'i' stroke in the video I linked (its towards the end) - Pause it where I lift the pen at the base line and look at the shaded stroke. It is the outside of the shaded stroke that is curved, the inside (right side) is pretty much straight. The exit hairline continues the shade from the outside, the inside of the shaded stroke makes a pretty abrupt transition to the exit hairline.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 16, 2018, 04:10:38 PM
Another go.  Not perfect, but getting there, with hope.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 16, 2018, 04:35:11 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Definitely getting there Patty. The group of letters at the end of the second last line is very nicely done (except the 'b' :-)

It seems to me that you have a tendency to fall back to the round turns at the base line when writing words but the letters are done well. Keep at it - you are on the right track.

- Salman

ps. it will help if you can turn the picture so it shows right side up :-)

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Diane Bennett on January 17, 2018, 07:15:42 AM
Hi Salman,

I have been practicing the first group.  I did a page of each letter in groups of five and tried to improve on as I went along.

I can see that I am curving the bottoms.  I think this may be because I initially followed Eleanor Winters books which is how it is shown in there.

Thank you for the tutorials, I am finding them easier to follow with your detailed explanations and I look forward to your critique (although a little afraid) and continued practice.

Regards

Diane

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 17, 2018, 10:15:18 AM
@Diane Bennett

Welcome to the lessons Diane.

You are starting on the right foot with the analysis. I believe the ability to look at one's work critically is the single most importance skill Calligraphers need to develop.

You are right about the rounded turns at the base line and Eleanor Winter does show it that way. We must remember that Copperplate evolved from a system that was supposed to be quick to write - so more in the handwriting realm than careful calligraphy. As such, there are numerous variations, many of which have merit.

I don't claim the letter forms in my lessons to be more 'correct' than any other. These are just what I like among the many many different styles available. They serve well as a platform for teaching pen control and developing a critical eye. Please don't feel bound to them outside of these lessons.

Now for some feedback:

- It seems to me you are making the shaded stroke and the exit hairline in one go. You will have an easier time of making the narrow turn at the base line if you lift the pen at the end of the shaded stroke. Give it a try.

- The crossbar of the 't' should be in the middle of the waist line and the top of the 't'. Your practice 't' at the top of the page has it in the right place but it is too close to the waist line in the line of 't's.

- The descender loop of the 'j' should be a balanced teardrop shape that is widest at the 1st descender line. Your shaded stroke should taper off to a hairline by the first descender - the remainder of the loop is drawn with a hairline. This will also help with creating more space on the right side of the counter (empty space inside a stroke) making the counter more even.

A couple of 'administrative' points. Firstly, I recommend you use the guidelines I have provided for these lessons. It allows us to have  the same reference points in terms of where the strokes like and tapers end etc. Secondly, I would appreciate it if you could post your lessons as images rather than pdf.

So how was that for the first feedback? A bit long I suppose but hopefully useful :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Diane Bennett on January 17, 2018, 11:04:49 AM
Hi Salman,

Thank you for the speedy reply, very much appreciated.

Your feedback is very helpful and not half as bad as I was expecting :)  I will be try out what you have suggested later today.

I don't have access to a printer until tomorrow at work so I will print off the guidelines then.  I am also awaiting a delivery of walnut ink, which I should receive tomorrow.  Seems like the UK is a bit behind with calligraphy supplies, like decent paper, ink and pens.  I have scoured the internet for a supplier in the UK, finding only a few, all with limited stock.  Hopefully someone here may be able to point me in the right direction.

On the subject of pens.  I watched your hand carving video yesterday, it was amazing.

Regards

Diane
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 17, 2018, 02:17:02 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Definitely getting there Patty. The group of letters at the end of the second last line is very nicely done (except the 'b' :-)

It seems to me that you have a tendency to fall back to the round turns at the base line when writing words but the letters are done well. Keep at it - you are on the right track.

- Salman

ps. it will help if you can turn the picture so it shows right side up :-)

Well, I think this is an improvement.  I am trying really hard not to round the turns, trying to pull the RHS of the shade stroke vertically while getting the curve to fall on the LHS.  My practice this time is with the ink I mixed for the invitations, a bit of green in gold.  it is supposed to be "pyrite" and I do like writing with it.  Have one envelope done!  Hitting it! 

Also, when I attach my images, somehow they get turned to the right.  This time I saved it in Photoshop first, so with hope, it will be upright.  I did see a video on uploading somewhere here on the Forum that I have been meaning to watch.  When I click on the attachment for the images, they do open straight up for me....Anyway,  thank you so much, Salman, for all your time and effort.  And I am really happy to see another new person, Diane, here, and noticed she is having this same problem.  I hope she conquers it quicker than I!  Hang in there, Diane! 
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Diane Bennett on January 17, 2018, 04:33:23 PM
Hi Patty,

Yes, like you I'm finding it hard to stop curving the bottom, but tonight I made a conscious effort to lift my pen at the end of the shade, as suggested by Salman and I found that nearing the end of my practice I was doing automatically. I still don't have it right, but I think the pen lift had improved it.  I did try to post it but I'm having problems with re-sizing the image.

I am a complete beginner with calligraphy, I am really enjoying learning copperplate, it's a beautiful script.  I will hang in there. 

Regards

Diane
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 17, 2018, 06:58:12 PM
Hi Patty,

Yes, like you I'm finding it hard to stop curving the bottom, but tonight I made a conscious effort to lift my pen at the end of the shade, as suggested by Salman and I found that nearing the end of my practice I was doing automatically. I still don't have it right, but I think the pen lift had improved it.  I did try to post it but I'm having problems with re-sizing the image.

I am a complete beginner with calligraphy, I am really enjoying learning copperplate, it's a beautiful script.  I will hang in there. 

Looks like you are doing great!  I started in September and used Eleanor Winters book a lot myself.  For some reason, my hand resist getting this as down.  I pray that this time it is ok.  But, I will keep working on it if not.  It is a wonderful opportunity to have Salman as a tutor. 

I take my pic with my iPhone, then email it to myself, where I have the chance to resize it.  I pin the paper up on my quilting design wall so I can get a straight on-ish image.  Where in the UK are you?  My husband went to publlic school in Darbyshire. 

Have you discovered https://www.scribblers.co.uk?  Seems to be a supplier of choice for calligraphy items in UK.  I ordered some watercolors from them that are hard to find here.  They were fast!  Best to you!


Regards

Diane
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Diane Bennett on January 18, 2018, 07:13:58 AM
Hello Salman,

Thank you for the feedback yesterday.  Following on from that, I have completed another set of the letters and words.

I tried to pay attention to the loops in my J and also tried the pen lift at the bottom of the shade, which has helped in lessening the curve.  I made an effort to lift everytime (well almost evertime) and realised by the end of my practice I was doing it automatically.

I have changed the format to Jpeg as requested and I will be printing your guideline to use later.

Than you again for your time and feedback it is greatly appreciated and I look forward to your critique.

Regards

Diane
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 19, 2018, 07:58:59 PM
@Foxmorepatty

This is indeed an improvement. The next step is to work on consistency and making all the bottom turns the same. For reference, check out the Copperplate Challenge thread in this forum.

Your individual letters have a better structure than when used in words. As a Calligrapher, one must resist the urge to 'write' and begin to see the space as a series of strokes and counters (open space). This will make your script more consistent (albeit at the cost of good spelling mistakes :-)

Also, keep an eye on that slant. In 'jilt' on the last line, the slant of all three letters is different. This is sometimes caused by not moving the paper when you are out of your 'zone' - make sure you slide your paper after every couple of inches so you are always writing in the most comfortable position.

Also, it helps me see things much more clearly when you use black ink. It is also much less forgiving than coloured inks :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 19, 2018, 08:01:42 PM
@Diane Bennett

The loop of the 'j' in the first 'jilt' on the second last line is nicely done. Use that as your reference.

The base line turns are getting there but need more work to become more consistent. Also, try writing with a heavier shade - it might help see things more clearly at the turns.

Keep it up - this is good work.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Diane Bennett on January 21, 2018, 11:41:01 AM
Hi Salman,

Thank you for the feedback from my last post.  I did practice yesterday but I just couldn't get anything right so thought it best to put pen and paper away.

I have now got the guidelines and the walnut ink for my practice and today's practice was a little better.  The loop on the J is giving me a hard time, but I will get there.

I tried to make the shade a little bolder and the wedge appears clearer, but still a way to go.

I look forward to your feed back on this practice.

Thank you

Regards

Diane

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 21, 2018, 12:07:15 PM
@Foxmorepatty

This is indeed an improvement. The next step is to work on consistency and making all the bottom turns the same. For reference, check out the Copperplate Challenge thread in this forum.

Your individual letters have a better structure than when used in words. As a Calligrapher, one must resist the urge to 'write' and begin to see the space as a series of strokes and counters (open space). This will make your script more consistent (albeit at the cost of good spelling mistakes :-)

Also, keep an eye on that slant. In 'jilt' on the last line, the slant of all three letters is different. This is sometimes caused by not moving the paper when you are out of your 'zone' - make sure you slide your paper after every couple of inches so you are always writing in the most comfortable position.

Also, it helps me see things much more clearly when you use black ink. It is also much less forgiving than coloured inks :-)

- Salman

Thank you for your input.  I enjoyed doing the Challenge Practice.  It is hard for me to tell for most which is which, so I either I am improving or need to refine my eye!  Anyway, here is my practice from yesterday. 
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 21, 2018, 11:03:13 PM
@Foxmorepatty

You have the letter forms and the turns under control Patty. Great job. The next step is slant. See how in 'built' on the last line the 'lt' are standing up a bit compared to the slant guide and in 'wit' the 'w' is inconsistent while the 't' slants a bit too much. It shouldn't take you long to get the slant uniform. The trick is to move the paper so yo are always in the sweet spot and see the writing are from the same angle.

Also, try to rotate the paper so the slant guides are more or less in line with the slit in your nib. This will keep the slant pretty steady.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Diane Bennett on January 22, 2018, 09:13:11 AM
Hello Salman

I have been practicing a lot over the last couple of days and I hope there is an improvement.  I have paid attention to the letter J as I can't seem to get it right, any advice?

I have also been trying to make the strokes thinker.  With regard to the curve, I think I am making progress with this.

Thank you for looking at my work and the feedback, it is very helpful.

Regards

Diane
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 23, 2018, 01:28:16 PM
@Diane Bennett

Sorry for missing your earlier post Diane.

You have developed a good a good understanding and control of the 'i' stroke. The only issues I see now are with consistency in shade weight and the shape of the descender loop in 'j'.

The spacing is a little on the tight side too but that is not such a bit deal as long as it is consistent. You will probably have to make some adjustments later on.

Your focus for the next practice session:

- Your shades are fairly consistent but they can be even better. It is easy to make the tall letters like 'l' and 'b' a bit thicker than the rest - watch out for that.

- The descender loop of the 'j' had the shade coming down too low making it difficult to turn around gracefully at the bottom The shade of the loop should start to taper as soon as you go below the base line and should be a hairline by the time you go below the 1st descender line. The remaining of the down stroke and the curve back up are drawn as a hairline. The taper is similar to the 'i' in that you taper to the right i.e. keep the right side straight - this gives a nice shape to the right side of the counter.

Let me see just the practice words for your next attempt. Pick the best ones from your practice sheets :-)

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Diane Bennett on January 24, 2018, 12:19:31 PM
Hi Salman,

Thank you for the feedback.  I had said the same thing to my husband regarding the inconsistency in the shade and have been working on it.

I took your advice on the J and I hope you see some improvement. 

I have also tried to space the letters out better in this practice.  My normal hand writing it very tight so this may take a while to get used to, but I will get there.

I have done several pages today and have attached the best one for your critique.

I look forward to your comments

Regards

Diane
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 25, 2018, 03:59:05 PM
@Diane Bennett

This is very nicely done Diane. The spacing, turns at the base line, slant and shades all work well together with beautiful results.

The descender loops of the 'j' are much better. The first one one the last line is quite nice. You still have a tiny bit of pressure on the nib on the downstroke below the 1st descender line - try to make it so it matches the hairline on the left side and you will see a difference. I am quite pleased with the 'j' as it is but I think you can make it even better.

Please move on to the next group.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Diane Bennett on January 25, 2018, 04:16:40 PM
Hello Salman,

Thank you so very much for your kind words, you have made me a very happy lady  :D
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 26, 2018, 11:30:42 PM
@Foxmorepatty

You have the letter forms and the turns under control Patty. Great job. The next step is slant. See how in 'built' on the last line the 'lt' are standing up a bit compared to the slant guide and in 'wit' the 'w' is inconsistent while the 't' slants a bit too much. It shouldn't take you long to get the slant uniform. The trick is to move the paper so yo are always in the sweet spot and see the writing are from the same angle.

Also, try to rotate the paper so the slant guides are more or less in line with the slit in your nib. This will keep the slant pretty steady.

- Salman
Thanks, Salman,  Just taking a sec to say hi.  I have been busy working on the invitations and have not taken time to upload my Group practice.  It is my warm up, along with some majuscules before I start in.

Congrats to Diane for moving on!  I am looking forward to the same, unlearning my many bad habits, that thanks to you, Salman, I really notice now.  That is a good thing! 

Happily, the invites look nice overall.  I am trying not to be too critical of myself, being pleased if I do not ruin an envelope.  I am keeping your pointers in mind.  I do forget to move the paper sometimes and you are right, of course.  It does effect my slant.  I was so excited to finish the outer envelopes today.  I saved one addressed to India for last (longest address) and guess what?  I made a big mistake writing Maharashtra and had to do it all over.  Long day.  I will try to remember to take a pic of my best one to show you.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 28, 2018, 12:40:20 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Great to know the envelopes are coming along nicely. Have fun with them - I can guarantee they will be well appreciated. I am looking forward to seeing the picture(s).

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 28, 2018, 06:57:17 PM
Do not look too closely.  Blur your eyes and it looks alright!

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on January 30, 2018, 02:42:10 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Nice work Patty. I would be quite happy to receive an envelope addressed like that :-)

Which ink are you using?

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on January 30, 2018, 08:15:15 PM
PM your mailing address and you shall!  The ink is Dr. Martin’s Spectralite 18K Gold with a little green mixed in to bring it closer to the color of the inner envelope liner, which is the color pyrite.  Overall, I am happy.  Inner envelopes addressed, stuffed and wax sealed, and now stuffed into outer envelopes.  Stamps and the post office tomorrow.  My local PO is going to let me hand cancel them myself...TLC!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on February 04, 2018, 12:36:37 PM
Attached is my latest study.  I see a big improvement.  First line: The first ill l perhaps has too much curve at the bottom and the second l should be squared off more. the second and third 'ill'  look good to me, excepting a little wiggle on each last letter l.

Second line:  second l's seem a bit off on all three word will.  First jilt looks good except exit of loop too low, loop on second jilt too fat.

Third line:  The jilt is good except the dot over the i is out of line.  The second built is the best.  The i of the first is wedged and the spacing of the last is off at the u.

Fourth line:  The second letter l wiggle again.  Overall, not bad, am I getting too much curve at the exit strokes?  Last bill off balance b.

Thanks.  I am trying hard!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: GretchenC on February 26, 2018, 11:08:33 AM
Good morning!

I could not help myself but try to get started.   I really should be out dog walking my clients, but this was more fun! :)    It is abbreviated because of time.

This is my 4th day of pointed pen and Copperplate, there is much to improve.   I was really struggling with underturns and tending to stay on the baseline, creating a flat curve.   Your suggestion to pick up the pen at the bottom of the main downstroke was genius and I already see improvement! :)

What I see:  my counters are too narrow.  This is an 8mm sheet (I will print the 1/4" ones for later), and if I am measuring correctly, these are about 3mm.  I need consistency in my counters, they are irregular.   I do feel that I'm doing a better job at returning to baseline, fewer floating letters.   My slant wanders quickly, as though a drunk built a picket fence.   :P    I really need to focus on that more.   

I chose the ones I thought were best and marked with a blue sharpie.   Notes are scrawled in the margins and below.   I am analytical by nature, and a scientist by training.  I think this can be my biggest hindrance because instead of just feeling the letter, I am thinking the whole way through it:  "Square the top, pull down evenly, start letting up, lift pen, reconnect, relax your right shoulder, get your weight onto your left arm......oh man, my slant is a mess!"    ;D ;D    I look forward to your comments and critique.

Please ignore the red at the top, that was from a few days ago.   For this lesson, I purposely chose the "yucky" Hunt 101.  It was a much kinder partner with the Iron Gall ink than the McCaffery's. 
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: GretchenC on February 28, 2018, 09:53:38 PM
Spent a lot of time reading through this thread, and looking at what you commented on each post.  Really helping me develop my eye, what a wonderful resource.    Here is tonight's practice.   

Things that are challenging me:
1. I am not consistent in bringing the next letter in to the entry stroke.  Typically, I am too close, and then it looks like the hairline is entering the bottom of the next letter.   I'm trying to find a visual mark on the nib, something to line up, so that I will know if I've started over far enough.

2.  the letter J.  Eek!   The loop is a very awkward/unnatural movement for me, and so of course, my shape is all over the map, often having a flat bottom.

3.  In trying to fix #1, I've gone a bit far the opposite direction, and now am starting to see many non-joins.   ::)

Look forward to your thoughts when life settles down. :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on March 01, 2018, 12:17:48 AM
Hi Gretchen,

Salman seems to be taking a time off.  If you go back to some of his critics and suggestions to me, look for the one where he sugggested I break the strokes into segments.  It really helped me a lot.  Hang in there!




Patty
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 02, 2018, 11:44:50 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Hi Patty - sorry for the delay in feedback.

Your writing has a nice flow to it. Writing all those addresses paid off :-)

The image is too small for me to see much detail but your exit hairlines are off. The exit hairline should curve up and match the slant of the slant guide by mid x-height. this way it will merge seamlessly with the following stroke if there is one. If continuing the exit hairline all the way to the waist line, you do so at the same slant as the slant guide and optionally curve just a tiny bit to the left in the last 1/3rd.

The shaded stroke of the 'j' should taper off to a hairline by the 1st descender line. The rest of the stroke below the 1st descender is a hairline going down and back up. The shape of your counter is quite nice (except for the 'big one').

Let me see another attempt at these letters.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 03, 2018, 12:18:45 AM
@GretchenC

Welcome to the lessons Gretchen. Your got pretty much a perfect 'i' on your first sheet (the underlined one) - good form and good eye. This is indeed an excellent start.

Let's concentrate on the just the 'i', 'u' and 'w' for the practice sessions for now. Your focused practice sessions should not be longer than 20-30 minutes. Feel free to 'play' for as long as you want - that helps too.

I will limit my feedback to the 'i' stroke for now.

The shade should be a bit heavier than what you have in the second sheet. The first exercise you uploaded has a more appropriate shade weight. One of the reasons I insist on using the 1/4 inch guidelines is that the shade at this x-height is thick enough to easily see the transitions. A think shaded stroke won't highlight the variation as clearly as I want.

You start your 'i' stroke consistently at the waist line but in the first group of 5, you did not touch the base line even once. Try to go over the guidelines in your strokes - this will give your script a more consistent rhythm.

The turns at the base line are too rounded. This is because you are trying to draw the roundness at the baseline with your exit hairline. The curve at the bottom of the letter starts from the tapering left side of the shade and continues with the exit hairline. If you look at the shaded stroke in isolation, you will see that it ends very slightly to the right of the right side of the shade and does not have a curve. Similarly, if you look at the exit hairline, it goes up from the base line at a somewhat flat angle but doesn't really have a curve. It is only when the two strokes are placed together that the curve appears.

Breaking the stroke into the shaded part, lifting the pen at the base line, and then drawing the exit hairline lets us isolate the elements until we can do it in one go.

BTW - you have gotten the base line turn pretty much right with the 't' in 'jilt' on the second last line of the second exercise sheet (ignoring the wavy shaded stroke :-) In most other cases, you end your shaded stroke a bit too far to the right resulting in a wider turn and forcing the exit hairline too far out.

...which brings us to the exit hairline. The exit hairline starts at a fairly flat angle and curves up to achieve the slant of the slant guide by mid x-height. This curve should not be too rounded near the baseline. For the last stroke of the 'w' continue to draw the hairline at the slant of the slant guide optionally curving very slightly to the left in the last 1/3rd before hitting the waist line. You can then draw the shaded 'blob' inside the counter.

I would like to see just the letters 'i', 'u' and 'w' for the next exercise.

Please do let me know if you have any questions.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: GretchenC on March 04, 2018, 01:10:50 PM
@Salman Khattak , thank you so much for your detailed reply, it is very helpful! :)

I practiced yesterday, but nothing worthy of posting came of it.   I went back to the Hunt 101 for the wider shade and was really struggling with the ink.   I could make 1 "i" and then the ink would be gone.   This happened over and over, to the point of great frustration on my part.

I have a brand new bottle of Higgins eternal ink.   I added 2-3 drops of gum arabic as suggested.    Because I wondered if the ink was too thin, I added probably 4-6 more drops  to the bottle.  Still, the ink does not stay on the nib very well.   I can get maybe 2-3 letters.   This made it very difficult to develop any rhythm, and as a result, my i's were a disaster.

The only ink that I can seem to use with the Hunt 101 is Blot's Iron Gall, but I know that eats the nibs.   Thoughts on the Higgins?   Should I pour out a portion of it and add more gum arabic?

I am hoping today's practice will be more fruitful, but did not want you to think I hadn't read or appreciated your thoughtful post.  :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 04, 2018, 10:05:43 PM
@GretchenC

Hi Gretchen,

What you describe seems to be more of a problem with the nib than the ink. It might be worth it to give it a good wash with some toothpaste. It usually helps get any oils off the nib as well as scuff it up just enough for the ink to stick to it better.

Higgins Eternal with a few drops of GA in the bottle should be o.k. but better alternatives exist. In addition to Walnut ink, I have found Noodler's Black with about 40% water makes a good practice ink - both are gentle on the nibs.

As for the nibs, work with whichever one you find easiest to use. We all like different nibs and there is no universally good (or correct) nib. Try the Hunt 22 too - it is quite a bit stiffer than the 101 but still allows fairly wide shades.

Please feel free to let me know if you have any other questions.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jeanwilson on March 05, 2018, 09:03:47 AM
I agree with Salman that it sounds like a nib issue - and agree that a different ink might resolve the issues.
Don't forget the paper - all three - nib-ink-paper -- have to be friendly.
If you aren't using Rhodia paper - you might want to invest in some to see how dreamy it is.
It's not the only dreamy paper - I imagine there is a thread somewhere on papers.
Some people find certain printer papers that they like - I have not - and encourage people to at least try Rhodia.

Rhodia paper and walnut ink is IMHO happy with a wide variety of nibs.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: GretchenC on March 05, 2018, 11:10:31 AM
Thank you @Salman Khattak  and @jeanwilson for your suggestions!

I am using a recommended 28lb "high end" printer paper (I'm too lazy to run backdownstairs to see it's exact name.....its one by HP that many like). :)   

It seemed to run better last night, though something quite odd happened at one point.   On one of the last lines of "w," it suddenly felt like the paper or my nib was waxed.....i.e. like trying to write with a sharpie on wax paper.  The ink wouldn't stay, the pen felt extra slick across the surface.  Utterly bizarre!   On my paper, you'll see a series of 2-3 entry strokes that look faint, that is when it started and I was trying to clear the pen.   Then on a W, the ink started at the top of the shade and just pulled down the length of the shade, like a blob.   It was really odd.   Please know that I'm NOT complaining, just rather marveling.  I'm a scientist by nature and training....critical observation is my fiber. :) :)

My focus last night was on two things:  trying to get all my letters to sit on the line (vs floating or hanging below) and trying to lift on the pen, as approaching the baseline in a shade, at the appropriate time.   I see many shades where I stay on the pen too long and then it's a sudden up (and ugly!), or if I'm really focusing on getting off the pen, then my letters float.    Again, not complaining or frustrated, observations.  :)

My submission is below.  It's 'rules' are as follows:  i's had to earn their dot.   If the shade was floating (and I caught it in time), no exit stroke.  Break off the chain of incorrect behavior (rules of dog training!).    After the row was complete, I tried to critically examine for "not floating, entry/exit stroke, not too round nor narrow" and then if happy with those, the i could receive it's dot.  :)   So those are the ones I chose.

U's were a bit more tricky, I saw many uneven entrance strokes from shade 1 to shade 2, as well as trying to not float shade 2 (because my mind was racing ahead to the exit hairline).   I underlined the ones that I liked.  When I made 5 in a row, I think they were far too narrow.

W's.....well, they're entertaining at best :)  I love making this letter, but my inconsistancy really showed up here. :)

Look forward to your thoughts.   This was done with Hunt 101 and Higgins Eternal.   I will try Hunt 22 tonight, I have a pack of them.  May also wander back to the Brause 66EF and see if I can get the shades thick enough for instruction.   :)

Thank you @Salman, this really is an amazing resource and I am loving the challenge!!  :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: jeanwilson on March 05, 2018, 11:21:27 AM
When the ink is repelled by the paper at the bottom of the page it might be from the oils on your hand.
I do not recall seeing any talk of guard sheets on the forum - but when I started we were taught to always keep a guard sheet under our hands.
Some people wear a cotton glove with the first two or three fingers cut off.
I always use a guard sheet - so not sure why there is little mention of them any more.

The guard sheet should have a folded edge because your hand will catch on the *sharp* edge of a sheet of paper.
I usually take a sheet of letterhead sized paper and make a fold on the diagonal.
It takes a little practice to keep it in place.
Some people create a writing surface with a guard sheet taped in place and then slip the paper under the guard sheet.
This is actually a very good method to keep the sweet spot right in front of you.
Often times - beginners will be writing down the page - and forget to move the paper up.
They end up with their hand down at the bottom edge of the desk - and things are not going well
and it is because they did not notice that they were way south of the sweet spot.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 06, 2018, 01:11:48 PM
@GretchenC

Jean's advice on the guide sheet is spot on. It helps keep the oils off the paper as well as instill a little bit of discipline in keeping things in order.

The EF-66 is a very good nib. I used it a lot during my early days and loved it. As an added bonus, it is much more forgiving of inks. I can often use it with fountain pen inks that don't want to hold on to other nibs.

Your 'earning the dot' idea is splendid. However, the qualification should focus on the shape of the stroke rather than hitting the base line. That is more important at this point in your practice. If you are going to focus on one thing, it should be the turn at the base line. Whether it happens slightly above or below isn't that big an issue. We will get to it along with squaring the top as soon as you develop consistency in the shape of the shaded stroke.

There are a number of 'i's in your practice sheet that have a nice taper. However, it looks like things go awry as soon as you have to them twice in a row. Remember, a 'u' is nothing more than 2 'i's - just write two 'i's. In the 'w' you will see that several of the first strokes are better drawn than the second ones - once again the focus has somehow shifted from drawing the second 'i' e.g. the first stroke in the 'w' right after the 'feels waxy - not flowing well' comment is just right but the second 'i' lets it down.

Also, it seems to me you are drawing your strokes a bit too quickly. It is o.k. to write quickly but not at the cost of accuracy. You might want to slow things down for a bit to see if it helps with consistency.

You don't have to join all the letters when doing groups of 5. Also, the idea is to stop for analysis after writing every group. Stay with one letter until you can consistently get 3 good ones out of 5.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: GretchenC on March 07, 2018, 08:04:11 PM
Good evening @jeanwilson and @Salman Khattak !  :)

Thank you both for your comments and thoughts.    I was so excited to get started this evening that I forgot my guard sheet.   I definitely agree, I think something is on my sleeve and getting onto my paper.   I often wear fleece at this time of year, and I think the oils from cooking stay on my sleeves.   I notice that the issues with the ink "sticking" to the paper happen only on the right side of the paper.  The far end of rows 5 (a lot), 6 (one w shows it) and 8.    That is where my right arm is resting when I'm writing up at the top of the page.    Thank you so much for helping me figure this out!! :)

My focus today was a better shape to the bottom of the shade, and then consistency.   This was my 2nd try at a submission page.  My warm up page was rough, progressing to good, with regards to consistency.   The first page I attempted for submission got worse as it went along.   I changed my fingers just a hint towards the end, and I think that gave me a bit better control.   I was keeping my first finger very straight, after a thread I saw on FF in which Salman posted a photo re: keeping the finger straight, not tight.    I ended up bending it a bit more and I think my control is better.  Still working to keep loose grip, loose shoulders and not haunch over. :)

My selections are based mostly on:  shape of shade as it comes to baseline and 'evenness' of the two i's in the U and W.   I recognize that many of my U's look much more like 2 i's, I am still not solid on gauging my pen start location relative to the exit hairline from the first part of the letter.  It will come. :)

I tried to be slower in my strokes.  It's a whole mantra, and the kids are not allowed to come talk to me as I work.   ;D   "Up, down, get off it!, up straight"   i have lots of curving exit hairlines, something I'm trying to work on. 

This is the Brause 66EF (which I love!) and Higgins Eternal ink on HP paper.

Look forward to your thoughts!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: paperandflair on March 10, 2018, 09:21:04 PM
Hi Salman!

So I finally got around to practicing the group 1 as per the last meet-up.  I know super I'm super late  :(

I've tried to make the downstrokes approx 1/5 the x-height as suggested and starting 2/3 of the way down to finish the stroke.  Here's what I've come up with (please ignore the ink changes, I got bored with my walnut ink).

As always, I would appreciate any feed-back  :)

Thanks so much!
-Anika

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 13, 2018, 06:58:55 PM
@GretchenC

Hi Gretchen - the improvement in this page is quite clear. It seems like you get along with the 66-ef much better than the 101.

Two things jump at me from this sheet:

1. There is a slight bend in your 'i' strokes. These should be straight. This might be an equipment issue more than control though. Is the flange in your holder stable. Sometimes a little bit of play in the flange can cause the shaded stroke to go awry as the pressure causes the nib to move off line. If the flange is o.k. then you need to pay a bit more attention to this stroke.

2. There is a tendency to move off the slant. Make sure you move your paper often (about 1.5-2 inches of writing) to keep writing in your sweet spot. Also, turn the paper counter clockwise a bit to reduce the tendency for your letters to 'stand up'.

You have made a number of very nice 'i' strokes. Several of these are in the second strokes of the 'u' and 'w' too so that is good. You are getting over writing letters and beginning to just see the strokes. You do lack consistency but that comes with time. Also, it seems to me that you are writing a bit too quickly judging from how jagged the base line is.

The first 'i' in the second 'w' on last line is just beautiful. Look for that in your practice.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 13, 2018, 07:05:44 PM
@paperandflair

So good to see you here Anika :-)

Your exercises are very nicely done. I love how neat and well controlled your strokes are. Your spacing and slant are very consistent and well judged.

Your 'i' stroke is pretty good and quite consistent, it just needs a slight adjustment to make it even better. I notice that you end your shade before reaching the baseline. This forces you to 'make up' the last bit of the stroke with the hairline. The result is a letter that looks slightly unbalanced and falling to the right. Bring your shaded stroke right to the base line. Include the base line in your stroke (this is why it is important to have the guidelines printed on your practice sheet). Your stroke should end ever so slightly to the right of the right side of the shaded part.

Let me see another go at this group of letters with this in mind.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: paperandflair on March 13, 2018, 08:42:37 PM
Thanks for the input Salman!

I'll give it another try with your tips in mind and post soon.  And I was printing my guidelines before, but my ink is running out too fast :(
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: neriah on March 14, 2018, 05:09:04 AM
@paperandflair - are you printing your guidelines as a greyscale draft? You can save a lot of ink that way and it really doesn't matter when printing guidelines. Another thing I started to do is to not write on the guidelines when I am just playing around. So that way you can write on the guidelines when focusing on letter forms, and put them under the paper when trying out new nibs/inks or just experimenting in some way.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: GretchenC on March 21, 2018, 11:28:37 PM
Hi Salman!

I did not give up, I have just not had anything worthy of sharing.  I feel that I spent a week or two making no progress.   However, I think I'm finally on the right path, having found a nib I really like:  the Hunt 22.    I worked again with the Brause, but feel that my shades are very inconsistant, and my U's were also just not right.   The w's were a disaster.   

The Hunt 22 seems to glide beautifully and is a bit more stiff.  I also use it in a different holder, and I think I like this holder better, so that may be part of it.   I think my hairlines are more fine with the hunt, and it never skips on the exit stroke like the Brause does. :)

I still think that my letters from one to the next are very inconsistent, however, within a U or W, I think I'm finally starting to see the shades look similar.   I know with the W that my exit strokes are often too wide/round and I'm working on that.

Look forward to your thoughts and suggestions! :)

Thank you,
Gretchen
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on March 23, 2018, 02:56:04 PM
@GretchenC

Ah Gretchen - now we're talking. This has a nice flow to it and very well spaced. I think you have found a good friend in the Hunt 22 :-)

I think you have the hang of it now. You need to work on consistency now and watch that slant - it tends to 'stand up' (i.e. more upright than required) at times. Rotating the paper slightly counter clockwise should help with that.

The finishing 'blob' of the 'w' should come down a bit more - about 1/3rd of the x-height below the waist line is good.

The crossbar of the 't' should be between the top of the 't' and the waist line.

Please carry on with your practice - you are on the right track.

Edit: I added a short video on the basic 'i' stroke that you might find useful: Copperplate Lessons - Group 1 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=urSbSvmP9GQ)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on March 28, 2018, 07:02:30 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Hi Patty - sorry for the delay in feedback.

Your writing has a nice flow to it. Writing all those addresses paid off :-)

The image is too small for me to see much detail but your exit hairlines are off. The exit hairline should curve up and match the slant of the slant guide by mid x-height. this way it will merge seamlessly with the following stroke if there is one. If continuing the exit hairline all the way to the waist line, you do so at the same slant as the slant guide and optionally curve just a tiny bit to the left in the last 1/3rd.

The shaded stroke of the 'j' should taper off to a hairline by the 1st descender line. The rest of the stroke below the 1st descender is a hairline going down and back up. The shape of your counter is quite nice (except for the 'big one').

Let me see another attempt at these letters.

- Salman

I will be back soon!  Been very busy with wedding preparations, which while fun, are all consuming.  Getting ready to write the place cards for the tables.  Can you suggest a vellum that does not curl when written upon?  Just discovered this problem with that I have.  Seems Sumi Black ink is the only one it liked, also.  Using the Gillot 303, which is fine and lovely.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: JenMac on March 29, 2018, 11:10:38 AM
Great video demonstration of the "i".  I had immediate improvement after watching.  Thank you, thank you!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: JenMac on March 29, 2018, 12:03:53 PM
Salman-

Here's my first go at group 1.    Still working on consistent slant.  Sorry for the ink bleed.  (It was worse with the Higgins Eternal, so I switched to Dr. Ph. Martin's Hydrus.)  Humidity in Northern Virginia doesn't help. 

Looking forward to your feedback.  Thank you for the amazingly clear instructions that I could not find elsewhere. 

-Jennifer
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: JenMac on March 29, 2018, 12:05:33 PM
Salman-
Then item I forgot to attach.   :-[
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on March 31, 2018, 01:22:31 PM
Hope this shows the improvement you have been looking for, Salman.  Thanks, Patty
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 02, 2018, 12:03:38 AM
@JenMac

Welcome to the lessons Jennifer. It is always exciting when new people join.

You are off to a solid start with fairly consistent slant and shade width. Here are a few things to work on:

1. The 'i' is joined with an exit hairline. You have used a number of over turns that should be like the joins you have used in 'ill'.

2. Your shade is too heavy for this size of writing. It should be about 1/3rd of what you have here.

3. Square the tops of all your shades in this group. It looks like you missed the 't's in 'built' and 'lit'.

The loop of the 'j' should be narrower at the top but I think reducing the shade will give you some more space where the loop goes back into the shade just under the base line and it will automatically work out.

I will be looking forward to your next exercise.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 02, 2018, 12:10:43 AM
@Foxmorepatty

Nice work Patty. It is good to have you back. There is a nice flow to your script - is that from all the envelopes you wrote?

A couple of things jump out at me.

1. The transition from full shade to hairline should occur in the last 1/3rd of the x-height. Most of yours are too short i.e. the shade is full width for longer than it should. The first 't' in 'tit' (?) on the second last line is a good one - notice how it starts to taper off a bit earlier than the others.

2. Some of your hairline joins are good but most join the following letter a bit too low. Allow just a tiny bit more space between your strokes and it will fix this issue.

3. The shaded stroke of the 'j' should taper to a hairline by the 1st descender line. The part of the loop under the 1st descender and back up is all hairline.

The shade on the first few lines is too light. What you have at the bottom works better. You can go slightly wider but not much. Looking forward to your next attempt.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on April 02, 2018, 10:29:41 PM
Hi Salman!

I started learning Copperplate Calligraphy about 2 months ago using Dr. Vitolo's iBook and video's and I learned a lot! But I really want to get the technique down and I thought I could you some of your constructive criticism. So here is my first post! I feel like I have really learned so much more already, great tutorial! I am using a Leonardt Principal nib with an oblique holder and higgins eternal ink.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 03, 2018, 11:24:14 AM
@Jenafer

Welcome to the lessons Jenafer. Wow - what a start. You have a number of perfect executions of all of the letters spread around your work sheet. This is a promising start indeed.

The major factor that lets you down in this exercise is the lack of consistency. While you have the ability to execute all the letters very well, there is no guarantee when that will occur. Your consistency improves towards the end of the page so I will focus my feedback on what I see there.

Here are some observations:

1. You have good control of the 'i'. However, there is a tendency to start tapering the stroke (i.e. lift the pressure) as soon as the stroke starts. This results in a wedge shaped shaded stroke - see the 'i' in the second 'jilt' on the second last line.

2. The slant tends to 'stand up'. Since this appears as a general case, I believe turning your paper until the slant guides are more or less in line with the slit in your nib will help.

3. The 'j' goes only halfway into the second descender space. Yours are too long. Also, the shade should taper to a hairline by the 1st descender line - the rest of the stroke down and around is drawn as a hairline.

4. The exit hairline from the 'blob' of the 'b' should be 'on the rise' when it meets the following letter. It is ok if this occurs near the top of the stroke.

I am most impressed with the consistency of the spacing on the last line. This is good work and I will be looking forward to the next one.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on April 03, 2018, 12:43:33 PM
Hi Salman

Thank you so much for your comments! I will come back with another soon!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on April 05, 2018, 07:01:57 PM
Hi Salman

Please see post 2.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 06, 2018, 01:06:32 PM
@Jenafer

Hmmm - the flow that I liked so much in the first exercise is missing in this one. This is natural though as one's hand stiffens up when paying attention to the letter shapes. I will be looking forward to it's return :-)

Try to relax your hand as you draw the letters. It is o.k. if things go awry - we are not machines. A relaxed hand shows in your work and is much more attractive than mechanical precision.

You have some very nice 'i' strokes in this exercise e.g. the first 'w' on line 1. All the other 'w's are different though. Are you practicing the individual letters in groups of 5? Move to writing the words only after you can regularly get 3 good ones out of a group of 5.

The shade of the 'j' stroke should taper to a hairline by the 1st descender line. The rest of the stroke down and back up is drawn as a hairline.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on April 06, 2018, 07:51:25 PM
Hi Salman

I took your suggestions and I hope I applied them here. I think relaxing is the most difficult one for me some days but I'm working on it! I have included some of my drills and the words. I hope I did a little better this time :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Troy Mayfield on April 08, 2018, 06:34:40 PM
First try - trying to figure out photo editing software as well.
Zebra G, homebrew ink and copy paper from work of pretty light weight.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Troy Mayfield on April 08, 2018, 06:38:13 PM
Again
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: GretchenC on April 08, 2018, 08:14:25 PM
@Salman Khattak ,

Your "i" video is fantastic, thank you!!    I have been continuing to work, but nothing yet to post.   Life's been a bit crazy the past few weeks.  Hopefully this week I'll have something ready.   

I can now start to feel the difference in my grip, posture, etc when things look good, and when they don't.  I've been trying to pay attention to the small details of "how am I sitting," "how far is the paper from me," "how tightly am I gripping the pen" to develop more consistency.   I find making letters far more easy when I can keep my grip on the pen to an absolute minimum of pressure.   Not in how hard I press down on the pen, but rather, how tightly especially my thumb is on the holder itself.  :)

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Troy Mayfield on April 08, 2018, 08:17:28 PM
Maybe a little more time taken here and perhaps a little better light.

I see that I am taking my hairlines back too high on these.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 09, 2018, 12:02:46 PM
@Jenafer

Yes - the flow is back and it looks good.

The second 'j' in the first group of 5 and the first one in the second group have nice counter shapes for the loop. See how the widest part of the counter (the inside shape) is around the 1st descender line and the hairline flattens as it approaches the base line. This is what you are looking for.

The slant needs a bit more consistency but you are getting there.

The exit from the 'w' and the 'b' should be more rounded. It is o.k. that it meets the following letter close to the waist line.

It seems to me like you are using a fairly stiff nib that requires quite a bit of pressure. Force is the enemy of control. Have you tried softer nibs?

Keep at it - you are on the right track.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 09, 2018, 12:08:23 PM
@Troy Mayfield

Welcome to the lessons Troy. It is good to have you join us.

You are right - the hairlines do go up too high but that is not necessarily a bad thing. Often you will find the last exit hairline to go even above the waist line in old works. In fact it might help space the next shade as long as it doesn't show up as a separate stroke at the waist line i.e. the top part of the exit hairline above 1/2 x-height should be a part of the following shaded stroke.

In your groups of 5 practice, focus on finding the good ones, not the bad ones. The idea is to train the eye to look for what is good and then try and replicate that 5 more times. The first 'i' in the second group is the best you have in your last exercise.

For your next practice session, limit yourself to 'i', 'u' and 'w'. The rest will fall into place easier when you have good command of these. Of course feel free to play with the whole alphabet in your 'play time'.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Troy Mayfield on April 09, 2018, 12:41:56 PM
Thanks Salman! crawl before sprinting I guess.

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on April 10, 2018, 09:18:41 AM
Hi Salman,

Thank you for your comments. I am using a Leonardt Principal nib I think thats a pretty flexible nib? I think the problem is me and not the nib, lol. I think I put more pressure on myself when doing these exercise because I know they're being critiqued as opposed to other projects I work on. I will try to work on that.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 10, 2018, 12:26:08 PM
Hi Salman,

Thank you for your comments. I am using a Leonardt Principal nib I think thats a pretty flexible nib? I think the problem is me and not the nib, lol. I think I put more pressure on myself when doing these exercise because I know they're being critiqued as opposed to other projects I work on. I will try to work on that.

I understand that. You don't need to put yourself under undue stress though. It is almost impossible not to improve with regular practice so as long as you continue with your practice you can take it as far as you want to go. Regularity is more important than anything else. We are not in a hurry - enjoy the journey.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 10, 2018, 12:29:03 PM
Thanks Salman! crawl before sprinting I guess.

More like refine before exploring :-)

You already have good control of the pen - we just need to sharpen the eye. Since the rest of the letters don't use anything new, focusing on the 'i', 'u' and 'w' will get you there quicker IMO.

Regards,
Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on April 25, 2018, 09:33:41 AM
Hi Salman! Please see another attempt below.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 26, 2018, 01:17:19 PM
@Jenafer

Nice work Jenafer. Your spacing and letter shapes are very good. Let us work a little on refining your script now.

1. Your straight strokes have a slight curve to them. It is more noticeable in the longer letters like 'l'. Also, the longer strokes tend to start tapering off around mid x-height which can also contribute to the curved look.

2. The weight of the strokes vary a bit too much. Comparing the 'l's on the last line, the first 2 are more or less the same weight, the third one is thinner, the fourth one is much thicker (even more than the first 2) and the last one is thin again. This lack of consistency is apparent even within the same word.

3. Your slant seems to 'stand up' a bit from time to time. It might help to rotate the paper a bit counter clockwise so the slit in your nib is more or less in line with the slant guides.

You are pretty much there with the letter shapes. It is all about refinement now.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on April 26, 2018, 02:04:40 PM
Hi Salman! Thank you for your comments, I will work on these things. Regarding the slant, even with everyday writing I rotate the paper counter clockwise about 90 degrees. So I'm not sure why im still having this problem lol. I also use an oblique holder and that has helped. Hopefully it'll get better with practice.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 26, 2018, 02:32:25 PM
@Jenafer

Ah - in that case you might be drawing your strokes with the wrist rather than the arm. Keep an eye out for that - it will get you into trouble in most cases.

S.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on April 27, 2018, 09:10:33 AM
@Jenafer

Ah - in that case you might be drawing your strokes with the wrist rather than the arm. Keep an eye out for that - it will get you into trouble in most cases.

S.

I practiced last night focusing on moving my arm and not my wrist and this help tremendously!! Thank you so much for this comment. I also decided to go back to Nikko G which I haven't used in months and realized a less flexible nib might be better for me until I get my control perfected. I tend to press pretty hard when and with a more flexible nib I think I'm more likely to loose control, what are your thoughts on this?
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on April 27, 2018, 09:19:05 PM
@Jenafer

Hi Jenafer - so glad this tip helped you.

My recommendation is always to develop a lighter touch rather than rely on the stiffness of the nib. Force is the enemy of free flowing accurate work in my opinion. Having said that though, Michael Sull uses the G nib to produce some of the finest work every seen so feel free to try out different nibs and work with one that gives you the best. There is no one way.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on May 30, 2018, 01:24:25 PM
@Salman Khattak

Hi,

Back with group 1. Practiced the entire group for about a couple of hours. Should have ended the practice way earlier.
Written this. Not really happy with this, but can't write any more.

Is  this weight ok, or do I need to prune it down further?
Squaring the tops is an issue, especially at this reduced weight. Not able to manage getting the tines to open up in a perfect square cut on the top. :(

Spacing.....have messed it up in the 't' of wilt, and a little in the 'l' of built, but other than that, seems ok to me.
Slant seems more or less ok, IMHO.
Weight of the j swell is slightly more, however I think it is ok overall.

Awaiting your comments, in ruthless detail please.

Regards,
Vipul
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on May 31, 2018, 01:04:39 AM
@Vipul

Hi Vipul,

As I have already taken you through the lessons once, I believe you should be able to take further rounds of practice on your own. The key things to look for remain the same. You can look back at your previous work as well as the advice I have given other students and see if it applies to your work. This will help develop a keener eye which is really what we all are striving for.

Regards,

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on June 04, 2018, 06:53:37 PM
Hello Salman!

I am back!  The wedding is over!  Wow, what a lot of work.  Anyway, here is a new attempt at the Group 1 words.  I sure hope it is acceptable this time.  I used a particularly nice pen holder and nib :)

While working on cleaning my studio, I unburied a note I wrote to you a while back, and shall now address and post it into the mail.  I have looked in the same spot for it about 100 times, and finally, there it was, along with a few others. 

Anyway, here you go!  Keeping my fingers crossed.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on June 04, 2018, 08:55:15 PM
Hi Salman!

I've been practicing my angle and straight lines. I hope it shows!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on June 26, 2018, 05:29:36 PM
@Jenafer - sorry for taking so long to get back to you. Things have been a bit hectic over here.

This is good work Jenafer. The structure of the letters look good but you need to rotate the paper even more counter clockwise as your longer strokes are still 'standing up'.

You seem to be having an issue with the loop of the 'j'. The part of the loop below the 1st descender line should be a bit more curved to the left. This will give you enough space to make a nice counter shape without having to go too far 'out' on the return stroke to the base line so your loop will close nice and flat rather than having to 'rush back' as it is doing now. I hope this makes sense :-)

- Salman

Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on June 27, 2018, 09:52:35 AM
Hi Salman,  Just wanted to be sure you saw my post. 

Hello Salman!

I am back!  The wedding is over!  Wow, what a lot of work.  Anyway, here is a new attempt at the Group 1 words.  I sure hope it is acceptable this time.  I used a particularly nice pen holder and nib :)

While working on cleaning my studio, I unburied a note I wrote to you a while back, and shall now address and post it into the mail.  I have looked in the same spot for it about 100 times, and finally, there it was, along with a few others. 

Anyway, here you go!  Keeping my fingers crossed.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on June 27, 2018, 02:32:10 PM
@Foxmorepatty

So sorry Patty. I had indeed missed it.

Your letter structure is lovely. I am quite please with it. I think you are ready to move on to the next group after just a couple of refinements - one of them rather minor.

- Start squaring the tops of your letters. They tops should be horizontal and at the waist line.

- The lower loop of the 'j' should be more almond shape. The tip of it has to be a wee bit pointy with the widest part falling at the 1st descender line. Also, Your shade should taper to a hairline by the 1st descender line. The rest of the stroke below there is made as a hairline.

Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Jenafer on July 18, 2018, 10:37:20 AM
Hi Salman!

Thank you for your comments!

I think i've improved the J as per your comments. But my letters standing up is a reoccurring issue. I naturally write with my paper turned considerably so I might be at a little bit of a disadvantage as turning it more would start to be upside down LOL. Over time with practice I'm sure I can teach my self. I practice almost everyday so I will definitely post again once I feel I have improved my slant more.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on July 29, 2018, 05:05:09 PM
Hi Salman,

Finally back with an adjustment.  Tried to square off tops and fix the j.  Hope this does the trick-and hope the image is ok[/img].  Have a great day!  :)

The j and i and a bit scrunched together.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on July 29, 2018, 11:08:19 PM
Jilt is off..for sure, a bit jilted...
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on August 01, 2018, 01:08:08 AM
Here is another go at Group 1 words, Salman.  I did not think the last pass was one of my better efforts.  I am happier with this.

Also, for your viewing pleasure ::) is a subsequent late night stab at Group 2.  I am sure there are plenty of things wrong happening here.  I am feeling a lot more confident overall, and am looking forward to your input on Group 2.  I will try not to practice late at night in the future.

A question:  when my nib becomes difficult to move on the upstroke (scratching/dragging), does that need the nib is past its prime, or am I doing something wrong?

Wishing you well!  Patty
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 04, 2018, 02:38:07 AM
@Foxmorepatty

Patty - while there is improvement in the second practice sheet, I see room for further refinement.

The counter shape of the 'j' looks good. This is a tough one so you should be proud of yourself for that.

The main issues are spacing and slant. Your letters have a tendency to 'stand up' i.e. more vertical than the slant guides. This is usually a sign of the slit in the nib not aligned with the slant guides. Your nib will try to draw in line with the slit.

The spacing issue often stems from trying to write letters instead of making the strokes that make the letters. This will cause some strokes to be wider than others. All the letters in this group (except the 'j') are based on the 'i' - the exit hairlines should be identical in angle and meet the following letter at mid x-height.

Also, practicing when you are tired is just going to make things harder for you :-)

I am your next attempt will be much improved.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on August 07, 2018, 05:35:24 PM
Here you go, Salman.  I have tried to keep my letters on the slant line and squared off.  I think, while not perfect, this is a big improvement.   I would like a little guidance on the width of the w, b connections.  I think the blob swing is a little short, but I do not want the connector width to appear too wide either....  have a great day!  Patty
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 07, 2018, 05:47:52 PM
Hi Patty - can you kindly upload a higher resolution image.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on August 08, 2018, 12:40:16 PM
Hi Salman,
With hope, this is a better image.

Patty
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 08, 2018, 02:37:17 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Hi Patty - the picture is bigger but the letters are the same size. There is just a lot more space around the letter which doesn't help much.

Here's my feedback based on what I can see:

- You seem to be drawing your strokes at speed. I see a bit of a curve in the 'i' strokes and letters based on that stroke.
- Spacing is an issue with longer letters e.g. i-l in 'built' and i-l in 'tilt'. This is also seen in the entry hairlines at the beginning of words being too far away and meeting the shaded stroke too high up - almost at the waist line.
- The last hairline of the 'w' should match the slant angle from 1/2 x-height up. Yours keep moving to the right at a lower angle causing a wide gap in the second counter space.

Also, I will appreciate it if you can submit your work on the guidelines I provided. It gives me an established reference point for feedback.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on August 08, 2018, 11:53:35 PM
Here is another try.  I am striving to keep my letters on the slant with uniform stroke width/weight. Also, I worked to improve my connectors, especially the il/ul and from b and w, and working on squaring off the top of the letters.  It looks to me as if my ji connection here is a bit tight, one with an ink blip.  I am also striving to slow down to keep the bottom of the i stroke from curling upward on the right hand side.

Wishing you a wonderful day :)
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: NevadaDeb on August 17, 2018, 11:25:16 PM
This is my first post in the Copperplate Minuscules Tutorial, and my first full week of doing only the first group of letters. Before that, I spent a month just getting used to a pointed pen, and trying out nibs and holders. I'm a total newbie to pointed pen; my background is in broad pen and the Cancellaresca Corsica hand, so I'm trying to unlearn 40 years of habits and get used to the wonders of the pointed pen and all its uniqueness. As you can see, I'm a long way from consistency yet! I've posted three days of practice, since I wasn't sure I knew how to post correctly in this forum. I took a leap of faith and just did it. Hoping I did it right!

I deeply appreciate having Salman and other forum members help me to streamline my learning, so that I don't develop bad habits I'll just have to unlearn. I want to do it right, and I'm prepared to work diligently. I'm following all Salman's directions, practicing in groups of five, ticking the letters I think are the best, and using that letter as a model to do the next group of five. I'm very wobbly yet and my spacing horrifies me. I can't make a flat top to save my life. Is there hope for me?
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on August 18, 2018, 10:23:55 AM
You do a good job with self analysis and I think you will be there in no time at all.  You have the bones there!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: NevadaDeb on August 18, 2018, 02:45:43 PM
 Thank You, Patty! It’s very gratifying to have other students who understand the struggle to get shade thickness, angles, spacing and joins working together — and take the time to give another student a thumbs up, so they don’t get discouraged by their fledgling efforts. Your message warmed my heart, and helped me to stop criticizing myself for how badly I’m doing right now, and to focus instead on forward movement, and getting it right in the future. It was the shot of confidence I most needed and a great kindness.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 18, 2018, 05:00:42 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Congratulations Patty. You have the group 1 down (ignoring the second 'jilt' for now :-). There is a little bit of shakiness that will go away with time and the gaps in the hairlines should be reduced but you are ready to move on to the next group.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 18, 2018, 05:05:14 PM
@NevadaDeb

So good to see your work Debi. The fist thing that jumps out at me is the very visible improvement in your control from day 1 to day 3. Your loops of the 'j' were good on day 1 but are just lovely on day 3. That is one of the things many struggle with and you have it down at the outset. The 'j' and 'i' in 'jilt' on the last line are just fine. That should tell you that you are almost there.

One of the reasons I ask for writing at 1/4 inch x-height is that the shades at this size are thick enough to show the transitions. You will see the structure better if you try increasing the shade width. Try using a softer nib if your current one is too stiff - you don't want to be using too much force either as that diminishes control.

Now for some feedback (I will focus on the last day's work for these):

- You have fairly consistent slant but the longer strokes like the 'l' have a bit of a curve to them. This suggests movement from the wrist to me. It helps to draw the longer strokes without any movement of the wrist.

- The exit hairlines should match the entry hairlines - it is the same stroke. In 'jilt' on the last line, the entry and exit hairlines of the 'j' match but the exit hairline of the 'i' goes too low, this pushes the 'l' away a bit. The exit hairlines of the 'l' matches the first two so the 't' ends up closer.

- The final stroke of the 'b' and the 'w' should match the slant of the slant guides above 1/2 x-height - yours tend to come back a bit. This breaks the pattern.

Let's focus on thicker shades and the above 3 items for your next attempt. Use the words 'jilt' and 'built' for this one.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: NevadaDeb on August 19, 2018, 02:11:14 PM

Salman,
Thank you so much for your encouraging words, and your excellent guidance. Your post was so helpful, and I am deeply grateful for your feedback. I practiced all night long, until my husband found me asleep at my calligraphy table, nearly falling out of my wheelchair. He woke me up to go to bed, and I groggily replied, “Can’t — gotta practice. BUILT! JILT! BUILT! JILT!” He had no idea what I meant, but glanced down at 18 sheets of BUILT and JILT on the floor and table, and figured it out pretty quickly. Forced into a bit of rest, I woke up at 5 am, eager to make more progress on my practice sheets.

Here is my last effort, and I’m ashamed that I have not been able to get each problem solved, and come out with at least one line of “BUILT” and “Jilt” that didn’t have glaring errors. No such luck. I can now at least SEE the problems, and that is wonderful information! I know it time that my eye-mind-hand will get coordinated, because I can see where my errors are, my problem areas.

As suggested, I have changed to a more flexible Hunt 101 nib, to try to get wider shades. I’ve tried to pay attention to entrance and exit strokes, and get them more parallel and joining at half-x-height. I have practiced movement of my arm, so that I don’t get as much curve in my ascenders —you were so right—It was wrist action causing me to do this, and a bit of old habit as well. I’m still working on all these points to gain some consistency. As you can see, I’m not there yet, but I do see some improvement.

I will keep at it, and am determined to progress and improve. Thank you again for your thoughtful critique, and your welcoming words! I am loving this journey, welcoming the challenge. My husband is thrilled, and says I’m helping stave off Alzheimer’s by working so diligently and staying with it, challenging my mind. I owe you a LOT, Salman!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 19, 2018, 09:45:16 PM
@NevadaDeb

Debi - the structure of your letters and consistency quite improved. Your shades could be thicker still though.

I see a tendency for some of the strokes to stand up (especially the 'u' and 'i' in the second to last and the last 'built'). Rotating the paper counter clockwise so the slit of the nib is in line with the slant guides will help with this. Also, remember to move the paper every two to three words so your hand remains in the sweet spot and you are seeing the letters at the same angle.

One note about practice. It helps if you keep your focused practice sessions short - 30 minutes is about the maximum before the small muscles in our hands get too tired for good control. Another interesting thing I find about practice is that I generally don't see the results of a particular drill until the next time I sit down to write. Interesting how that works.

You can have multiple practice sessions in a day - just make sure your hand is well rested before each one. You can play on for as long as you want. All writing helps with developing control :-)

Let's have a go at the full set now. I am sure you will enjoy it more this time around.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: NevadaDeb on August 20, 2018, 10:01:29 AM
Thank you, Salman. Your points are well made and I’ll take each one to heart and practice as you have suggested. Hopefully my next post will show some real progress. I’m very grateful for your thorough and thoughtful critique. It helps immensely.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on August 20, 2018, 10:57:34 AM
Hello Salman,

Here is a fresh take on Group 2 words.  Things I am struggling with: getting a clean closure (squared off) on the strokes requiring a squared off bottom, spacing of m and sometimes n, spacing of p and h.  I feel I am executing the inverted i and the squiggle paperclip shape fairly well.  Also need work on some of the connectors.  Looking forward to your input.  Thanks, Salman and have a great day!
Patty
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Foxmorepatty on August 20, 2018, 11:04:21 AM
Hello Salman,

Here is a fresh take on Group 2 words.  Things I am struggling with: getting a clean closure (squared off) on the strokes requiring a squared off bottom, spacing of m and sometimes n, spacing of p and h.  I feel I am executing the inverted i and the squiggle paperclip shape fairly well.  Also need work on some of the connectors.  Looking forward to your input.  Thanks, Salman and have a great day!
Patty

Oops, I posted in the wrong place.  Not sure how to move it.  Also, the word phub is flubbed up being off slant (the h is upright).
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 20, 2018, 01:14:51 PM
@Foxmorepatty

Hi Patty - I can move topics but it doesn't look like I can move individual posts. I will give my feedback here then.

This is a really good start. I don't see much to fix other than slant and consistent width of the shade.

The slant is generally off - the letters all seem to be trying to stand up and once in a while a few succeed. Fixing this is your first priority for now. I think you will have an easier time if you turn the paper (even more) counter clockwise.

You might want to try writing with a slightly reduced shade width. They are a bit too thick for this size of writing IMO. The thickness you have in the first 'v' on the second line is perfect. Let's try to make them all like that. I think it will help with the consistency too. Also, watch out for making the shades of the 'v' thinner than other letters in general. This seems to be a common tendency that I need to watch out for all the time too.

The loops of the 'y' have lost their shape again btw.

I find it interesting that I am encouraging one student to make thicker shades at the same time as asking another to reduce them :-)

Let's have another go at this group.

S.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: NevadaDeb on August 20, 2018, 01:21:46 PM
Hi Salman,

Things I am in the process of changing, thanks to your incredibly helpful suggestions and Harvest Crittenden’s video posted in Erica’s “Posture and Ergonomics” thread of the General Discussion board.

I had to think carefully about your suggestions, to:

——Get the shade thicker yet. I couldn’t seem to do that without thinking about how I could do it successfully. This led me to Erica’s thread, in search of what I could change in my posture and pen hold, to help facilitate those thicker shades. It wasn’t happening with my death grip on the holder.

——Working on consistency of angle by rotating the paper to match the slit in the tines. I feel like I’m working almost completely sideways and want to keep shifting the paper back to a more upright position. I unconsciously want to change the rotation back to my comfort position while doing a less angled Cancelleresca Corsiva hand. Pointed pen is immensely challenging and there is so much more to remember with every stroke.

——Trying to form new habit of moving the paper every few words back to my sweet spot, instead of stretching my arm out to get to the end of the line. What works with broad pen doesn’t necessarily work with pointed pen. Incredibly helpful suggestion.

——Keeping practice sessions short, 15-30 minutes, then a break to stop and study letterforms, and let my hand relax. Another extremely helpful suggestion.

——Look at next set of letters and words after the break, to see if it looks better. (Yep, it does!)

In addition, from Harvest Crittenden’s video,  I learned that  I should be working on a FLAT writing surface for pointed pen work, instead of an angled one, which I’ve used for decades in my broad pen work. I switched, and I find it much more comfortable, more relaxing for my eyes and hand.

I also learned to use a cushioning sheet and a guard sheet, with a plastic coated playing card under my hand, to help move my hand more freely rather than rely on wrist action, something you have noted in my first post. It was like skating on ice at first, but as I got into the rhythm, it got a bit easier and my ascenders are getting noticeably less wobbly.

*Note: I saw in someone’s video—it may have been Schin’s, but I’m not certain—that she was using a thin glove with the thumb, index and third finger cut out, rather than a guard sheet to protect the paper from oils in the hand. I like this idea, and want to try it.

—I’m back to practicing thicker shades and remembering to start the downstroke with full shade, to get a squared top. These are the first square tops I’ve ever gotten! I recall you mentioning to lift up and turn the pen at the hairline to where we’re sliding off one tine when we go from the shade, to produce nice, thin upstrokes. This is tough for me, as I have been using a “death grip” on my pen holder, and couldn’t easily turn the pen. I am trying to switch to the proper holding of the pen. It still feels unnatural. but I know it’s worth the effort to end the “white knuckle” syndrome.

I will post my progress once I have spent a few days working on all these changes. It’s a lot to remember at one time! But, what a satisfying challenge when I see a good stroke.

Your Group 1 exercises are far more beneficial than I could ever have imagined. At first, I was anxious to move on to the next group, but now I see that the key to success is learning every single nuance of all there is to learn in the Group 1 foundation strokes. I’m in no rush to move ahead now. I just want to see growth and consistency. I'm learning so much from you, it just boggles my mind.
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: NevadaDeb on August 24, 2018, 06:30:52 PM
Trying again. Still working on slant consistency, shade thickness consistency, parallel entrances and exits. I have yet to make a truly decent line of words. Thank you for any advice and insight!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 27, 2018, 09:32:00 PM
@NevadaDeb

This is excellent work Debi. I think you'll have an easier time with slightly thicker shades. You have done a good job of maintaining strong letter shapes with this delicate look.

I don't think you need to work on much here except consistency of size. The letters don't all quite sit on the base line. The waist line is more consistent. Try to include the base and waist lines within your strokes. This tiny adjustment is easier than one would think and results in much more consistent letter heights.

Your exit hairlines after the 'j' have a tendency to be straighter which pushes the next letter away a bit. This doesn't happen all the time but is something you should watch out for.

Let's have one more go at the words in this group. Please feel free to replace a word or two with others if you are bored with these.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Lindah on August 27, 2018, 09:46:31 PM
Great tutorial.  Thanks.
Lindah
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: NevadaDeb on August 29, 2018, 05:21:57 PM
Hi Salman,

Thank you so much for your valuable and extremely helpful advice. I'm trying to practice the three things you noted:
1. Widen the shade
2. Entrance hairlines not so upright
3. Pierce the base and waist line.

Progress is slow for me. This is the most difficult hand I've ever attempted to learn. I deeply appreciate your patience!
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Salman Khattak on August 31, 2018, 12:27:07 AM
@NevadaDeb

Debi - this is excellent. The weight works perfectly for this x-height. Your letter structure was already good. You are ready to move on to the next group of letters.

I know you still see areas of improvement and the consistency could be slightly better. This will come as you continue to practice. A couple of things to keep an eye on as you start the next group:

- The exit hairline of the 'j' should start at the base line. Yours have a tendency to be slightly higher.

- Don't 'throw' your exit hairlines, draw them deliberately all the way to about 1/2 x-height. This seems to be happening towards the end of the line where the tips show signs of a gradual lift of the pen off the page.

- Watch that slant - 'tui' and 'wit' are standing up a bit.

I will be looking forward to your submission for group 2.

- Salman
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: NevadaDeb on August 31, 2018, 11:00:00 AM
Salman,

Thank you so much! I'm posting one last pass on these letters, though I will continue practicing them daily as I move into Group 2 letters. Your critique was so very helpful. Though this last post here still has a few problems with consistency, I think it's much better than the last attempt I did. Thank you again!

Debi
Title: Re: Copperplate Minuscules - Group 1
Post by: Vipul on April 23, 2019, 03:17:19 PM
Hi @Salman Khattak
Going back to the basics and practicing the basic strokes. Sorry if they are not exactly as per your groups. 
Regards,
Vipul