Critique Please

[Sarahforhim]

Hello- I would love it if you guys could look over my calligraphy and suggest specific ways I could improve on specific letters and/or overall calligraphy. I am relatively new to calligraphy. Here are two samples.
Thank you so much!

[Starlee]

You have a very sweet style...I picture it surrounded by pictures of spring flowers on a card.

Things to work on would be consistency of slant and loop size. Look at your ascenders and descenders. The goal is to have them parallel. I find that this is a general rule to keep in mind regardless of hand...whether you were trying to achieve the copperplate slant or a more modern upright form.

[Nickkih]

I really like your style it's has a sweetness to it. 

[tintenfuchs]

It's very cute!

What you could try is to close ovals (such as in d or a) fully before making the downstroke. Also, check that the letters have the same height, it varies considerably in your examples  guidelines help with that, check out the Copperplate section for some pretty cool ones.

[Sarahforhim]

Thank you all so much! I very much appreciate each one and will practice it all!! Keep me coming! It's amazing what your own eyes miss.