A gift for Valentines Day

[seanlanefuller]

I've been practicing quite a bit, but I've got to do something real every once and a while.  I was trying to come up with an idea for Valentines day and came across this quote on Facebook.  I used the same elements but drew them in my own way.  I wanted something to give to my wife and daughter.  I love them so much and after turning 50 last year and seeing such greats as Alan Rickman and David Bowie die at the age of 69 recently, I know that I should cherish every moment with them.  I know I may not always be there for them.  Sheesh I'm getting sappy.  Tears and ink don't mix well.  Anyway, for your viewing pleasure, here is my attempt at calligraphic art.

[seanlanefuller]

By the way, I also invite pointers and criticism.  I can easily see some things that I would like to improve, but there may be things that I don't notice.  For example, I notice that the lettering is not as smooth, or consistent as I would like and that the starts and ends of thick lines are not as square as I would like.  I would also like my little Piglet and Winnie to be move lovable.  I hope that continual practice will help.  I also hope that pointers from all of the more experienced calligraphers in the Flourish Forum will help.  Thanks!

[Erica McPhee]

There is no way I can critique that... it's perfect as it is. [wipes away tear] What a sweet, thoughtful gift. Surely will be treasured! 

[Jennifer J]

This is so sweet! Save the critiques for other work, and just be proud to give this gift of yourself to your family. Thanks for sharing it here!

[Blotbot]

A lovely thought... thank you.

[charys]

I agree with the others.... love it as is. 

[seanlanefuller]

Thank you so much for your kind comments.

[tmtcalligraphy]

So Very Sweet and So Very TRUE!!! Thank You For Sharing!!

[Mike A]

Great job Sean - I'm sure that will be treasured by them.