I have been trying to learn Engrosser's script for a few months. Here is my latest exercise. I made a mistake with the Brause word. I got confused with the connector between the R and the A. I assume you connect at the top of the A. I like this nib for its flex and fine hairlines.
I would be pleased to hear your criticism
Here's an example of the linking of r and a
As you assumed, with the other type of r, the connection to the following a would be at the top.
I think that your lettering is very good. I think that all that is lacking is general consistency. Certainly, practicing on paper with slope lines as a guide, makes life much simpler.