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Kind Critique / Poem layout
« on: May 16, 2016, 10:49:54 AM »
Hello 
I'm trying to write a poem that is quite long ..
I have several problem with letter shape, but ok .. for that I only need more time and practicing..
My biggest issue at the moment is with layout
The first attempt that I had is a plain b/w

The main problem that I notice, is how to start exactly on the left side.. I'm going mad with these maiuscles (that is also the most difficult to me)
I find this layout boring, so I've tried something else

here there is some issue with perspective in photo (the lines are not really so weird)
but I still find it quite boring.
How can I do to emprove layout and composition?
Thanks in advace!

I'm trying to write a poem that is quite long ..
I have several problem with letter shape, but ok .. for that I only need more time and practicing..
My biggest issue at the moment is with layout

The first attempt that I had is a plain b/w

The main problem that I notice, is how to start exactly on the left side.. I'm going mad with these maiuscles (that is also the most difficult to me)
I find this layout boring, so I've tried something else

here there is some issue with perspective in photo (the lines are not really so weird)
but I still find it quite boring.
How can I do to emprove layout and composition?
Thanks in advace!