In general, you have lost the nice form of the stem stroke you demonstrated in the previous exercise.
I think you need to spend a bit more time with the stem stroke to get a firm grasp on it. It might be a rhythm thing as you seem to hit your stride towards the later stages and might have been too tentative in the beginning. The remaining letters in the first group should provide the practice you need IMO.
Hi Salman,
Absolutely no need to apologise. Understand you would be busy
Agree to the stem stroke consistency and the form. Actually I did this exercise without any pre practise and everything in one sitting. Thats the reason you could see the 'B' & 'P' stem strokes better as they were the last letters that i did. So as you rightly said the consistency will only come with more practise.
In the 'Kingfisher' word, I think the 'f' loop is too wide and should have been ended just 1/3rd below the waist line now it almost half way of 'x' height. And that would help give some breathing space to the 'dot' in 'i'. Correct me if I'm wrong.
I would like to do this round again with proper practise before I move on to other letters in this group.
Having some family time because of the long weekend. So the next practise sheet would be little late to upload.
BTW. Im in love with your new 'Starry Night' oblique.
Thank you so much Salman,
Regards,
Ashok