Try putting your words closer together. If you imagine the letter i as a connector between each word, that would be enough space. I sometimes space the words a little tighter than that. I make an exit stroke that is a tiny bit looser and wider and then the next word has an entrance stroke that is a tiny bit looser and wider and the two strokes are nearly touching. Two much space between words make them look like they are not friends with each other. Your slant on your words is consistent, so rather than write on straight lines, give yourself some penciled wavy lines. Just graceful ups and downs.
Try to get mesmerized by the line you have chosen. I just had a job writing one line on the mat for a photo. I probably wrote it 20 times before I wrote on the mat. I had no connection with the words - but after I wrote them over and over, I started to get a nice feel for the individual letters and how they worked together. Forcing yourself to do repetition can take all the enjoyment out of the process, but thinking of repetition as your friend - a little trip that will take you somewhere unexpected - can lead you to some nice surprises. But your thoughts have to be - "I am enjoying this trip."
Remember when you were a kid and you did some activity over and over until it drove someone else in the house crazy and they begged you to stop? That's the kind of feeling that is helpful to cultivate when you are working on penmanship. If you are annoyed by drills or repetition, you might not reap any benefit. Some people recommend writing affirmations over and over - as that does double-positive action.
If the words in your head, as you write are, "This is bad, I'm bad at this, I will never get better," you run the risk of making that come true. So keep the head-chatter in a positive vein.
Keep posting examples, please. My intuition tells me that you are on the verge of some ah-ha penmanship.