Hello all,
I'm trying to get some additional guidance and insight on flourishes for a word I've been playing around with. The attached image is several, in a long line of attempts to try and make this word look right. I've read the forums and the information has reaffirmed some of what I already know, but I'm having trouble understanding if I'm on the right track.
So here are some of my questions :
Looking at the word as a whole, is the design legible?
Are the flourishes in the right place to be aesthetically pleasing, without muting the word or the flourishes?
What can I add or should I take anything away, to make this a stronger design?
Any and all constructive feedback is welcome.
PS : I know the lighting is horrible, I used my phone. I Know better than to use it, but I just wanted a quick reference shot.