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@Erica McPhee ,
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I'm sorry - I did not mention anything in particular about your lovely piece! I offer the following constructive feedback: |
Please, you are taking your time to review everyone's work and then replying them, please don't say Sorry... . I am glad that you said it Lovely 1. The quote is referencing the ocean - but your color scheme is red and green which are more earth tones. |
Thanks, I will try to use colours those are matching the *theme* of the quote or will use plain back.2. I like the sidebar as a decorative element - however it is a bit too wide and as Brad said it distracts from your lovely lettering which is the main focus. It competes for the viewer's attention. This is a good opportunity to implement the Papa Bear, Mama Bear, Baby Bear concept. You want your viewer to first see your lettering (Papa Bear), then the side bar (Mama Bear). |
Thanks for the Suggestion,I never heard the *Bear Family* concept, thanks a lot for teaching me this, I will keep it in my mind. 3. In regard to the sidebar, since you are talking about the ocean, perhaps you could use the brush to mimic the shape of waves. |
I am really terrible in ARTS and Drawing... if i try to make waves , I bet they might come out as rectangles , that's i don't use that elements much, but i will give in a another try in the next version of quote.4. For visual interest - perhaps you could pick out one or two words from the quote to focus or enhance - either in a different style, larger, different color, or somehow different (this would become the mama bear and the sidebar the baby bear).
Thanks for the suggestion, that's where the first problem comes back, design and layout, and I am pretty bad in that, Please check the attached images, I have tried this same format and somehow they were not looking much good. . when I think about adding variation I hope that is helpful and I hope you give it another go. I'd love to see another variation.
YES, I am going to write another Version 2 of the same quote and will bother you all soon Thanks a lot for your help Erica .
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Aman
I'm sorry - I did not mention anything in particular about your lovely piece! I offer the following constructive feedback:
1. The quote is referencing the ocean - but your color scheme is red and green which are more earth tones.
2. I like the sidebar as a decorative element - however it is a bit too wide and as Brad said it distracts from your lovely lettering which is the main focus. It competes for the viewer's attention. This is a good opportunity to implement the Papa Bear, Mama Bear, Baby Bear concept. You want your viewer to first see your lettering (Papa Bear), then the side bar (Mama Bear).
3. In regard to the sidebar, since you are talking about the ocean, perhaps you could use the brush to mimic the shape of waves.
4. For visual interest - perhaps you could pick out one or two words from the quote to focus or enhance - either in a different style, larger, different color, or somehow different (this would become the mama bear and the sidebar the baby bear).
I hope that is helpful and I hope you give it another go. I'd love to see another variation.